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So the fireworks will fly between sun butt and Nefe! I can't wait for this fight ! Just hope that they don't sink the boat.
It's a cat fight between a dog and a pony.
My first thought is "Really? On a ship at sea?", because given the power levels involved, you might as well be tossing grenades. Which, I guess gives Nef a bit of an advantage, since Tia would be unlikely to NOT hold back for the sake of holding the boat together if nothing else....
I find this Hilarious. I just hope they don't blow up the yacht.
Ok place your bets people who will win out on Top Me I got 50 bits on the typos.
There's a reason why Phasers are disabled on our spacecraft, any holes that result from discharge could prove disastrous.
Of course, we don't have magic, and this ship isn't in space, but it's still poor form to damage your own transportation....
Keep going! ;)
O dam it is on.
this is going to be epic.
Oh shit, here we go.
i believe that should be start rather than star
6279187 Fixed!
6279880 Thanks for the welcome. I had a lot of fun, though the whole thing seemed to be over in five minutes! (And, of course, I spent way too much money, but that goes with the territory.)
Just glancing at the chapter titles, I'm guessing that I'm going to be off on several of my predictions, but I'm trying to keep that out of my guesses for what's to come; that's the same reason that I don't read ahead before posting my chapter-by-chapter reviews. Now if I could just get caught up...!
6278509 Me same on celly.
Fit very well...
I don't think you need to capitalize "you're," since it's not the start of the sentence (as the preceding comma shows).
"Impotence" is the inability to get/sustain an erection. This sounds more like infertility.
I'd change "too" to "with" here.
6289220 Typos fixed, but: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/impotence It can mean sterility too.
6289323 Well, that escalated quickly!
This chapter started off on an odd note, as Silver was certain that everyone was pretending to be happy around him. But when he asked about it, Shei insisted that they were being honest, which left me confused...was Silver simply mistaken, or was Shei lying about something? I don't know, because the story doesn't make it clear. That leaves the entire chapter starting off on an odd foot.
The issue of the Anubians being on-board the ship is causing logistical issues, which isn't very surprising. While we don't know how many elected to follow Silver, my off-the-cuff guess is roughly a third of the tribe, or about five hundred jackals altogether. That's going to be a lot, even for Celestia's yacht, but the problem isn't space; the problem is adequate provisions. It took them, what, over a month to sail to Anugypt? Two months? That means that the food, water, and other supplies were carefully rationed to provide for such a trip. Having five hundred extra mouths to feed - as well as a certain percentage that were already sick when they boarded - is going to seriously strain their resources. So much so that I'm surprised no one has brought up the issue of stopping to take on extra supplies.
Of course, that's a problem for the future. Right now, the issue is Celestia and Nefertari starting a fight. I'm a little surprised that things moved there quite so fast, but this really wasn't that hard to foresee. The two of them are so much alike that this conflict was probably inevitable; they're both strong rulers, and so it makes sense that they need to take each other's measure when they meet face-to-face, especially when they're competing for the same resource (e.g. Silver). I just hope they both remember that the ship is full of their people.
So the term "human" is sacred to the Anubians, huh? Curiouser and curiouser. They clearly have some sort of connection with humanity, which shouldn't be possible, given that - insofar as we know - humans don't exist in this world, and never have. Did they used to, or is this another instance of cross-dimensional activity? It seems that humans were the ancestors of the Anubians, but how? Nefertari needs to tell us more about this, later on.
The idea that Silver, as a male alicorn, can't father children in non-alicorn mares is rapidly becoming a new idea, but I'm not at all sure I necessarily buy that. Has every mare he's studded for since his ascension lost the child? Even after he had that bangle applied to his balls (which I still think would counteract that)? The issue of reproduction isn't split evenly across the sexes, where males and females are concerned; the issue with "quickening" any of the alicorn mares was simply getting a stallion's seed past their excessive magic. A male alicorn on a normal mare wouldn't have that same problem - if anything, it seems like it should go the other way. I'm having a hard time puzzling out why, exactly, he can't knock the ladies up.
More questions to answer, presuming the ship isn't about to be sunk.
6289384 It's quite a mess, logistically speaking, for sure. There's a basic issue, and that is not many folks like the Anubians, so putting in to dock in the region with a belly full of them may have issues. Ah well, that's secondary to the fight we knew was likely before now, I bet. Who will prove victorious?! Well, I kind of already know that, but I hope I set the stage with proper drama.
Well Firm Touch had a response to it.
I keep thinking I would want to say while fighting a Anubian, “This isn’t even my final form!!”