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6607310 After in depth research, yes, that is the correct spelling. You win!
Silver will be over with your prize shortly.
Pants optional.
I wonder what that would have looked like to Silver, since he can see magic. To see it gather there and barrel down the shaft like a cannon....
Keep going! ;)
6607432 It's full of stars...
6607326 In my world, pants are ALWAYS optional.
(edit: not sure why this showed up on this chapter and not the chapter of the coment I was replying to but that is a thing that happened. Not my usual weirdness, just weird system typo.)
To me, the clop was fine, I just happy to see that Luna and Silver have confirm there loving connection to one another. Let see if Princess Celestia can do the same? I know that Silver became important to her when she was traveling on the boat with him, Has that change?
Dragonfox
6607762 Silver also proposed a sudden solution to their problem. Genius, or madness?
interesting chapter so Silver is going to lift her tale fro Luna for a royal foal.
I kind of like this idea and hope it works out well.
Whhaaaaaaaat?
6608522 It's hard to answer that.
6607705
I've wondered that myself and came to the conclusion that the system was working as intended. I believe that posting on an old chapter is one thing because it assumes you are reading it for the first time. Whereas replying to posts gets them shifted to the latest chapter so that new readers looking through the comments at the end of the chapter don't find spoilers on accident. Well, that's my reasoning anyway.
6609428 Nah, nothing so special. If you reply on the main story page, it goes to the last one and has no idea what chapter you're replying to. Go to the chapter first, then you can reply within that chapter.
6609575 Ah, so that's what happened. Good things to know.
East.
bears
bear
I daresay.
That "mis" is odd. If he's cutting himself off after starting to say "mistress" or "miss," there should be a dash to indicate the abrupt termination of the word.
"Naturally-sized" needs a hyphen.
There are two spaces between these sentences.
Silver and Luna spend some quality time together in this chapter.
I'm honestly not sure what the benefit is to how Luna (along with Twilight) is suddenly insisting on Silver being called by the opposite gender - since that what "he" is "on paper" - despite it not fitting with her current sex. I'm well aware that there's an argument to be made that sex and gender are different things, and that Silver can be biologically female (notwithstanding that spell) and still be referred to in the masculine form. However, this isn't a question of Silver's preferences; she shows no particular inclination to be identified as male (and the story's narration still refers to her as a "her"). As such, Luna and Twilight seem to be causing confusion purely for the sake of confusion. To be fair, Twilight is insisting on it so as to satisfy the legal requirement of their herd, but Luna has no such excuse. The entire thing seems rather pointless.
Beyond that, the sex scene with Luna and Silver was at least somewhat unexpected, since it seemed like they weren't going to have a chance to have any fun before dinner. I'd add that it was nice that Silver isn't backsliding on interacting with another pony that's playing the stallion, except that's always been true; insofar as I recall, Silver never minded when a mare was packing something extra (hence her first pregnancy). Luna's reaction to having extra equipment was rather amusing, and gave Silver a bit of an edge, since otherwise she's with a mare that has a LOT more experience than her. Turnabout is fair play.
6922237 Typos fixed, and heh, you remind me this was one of my rare totes mature stories. Horse dongs everywhere, and that was just how it went. Mind you, it happens in teen-land to, we just don't talk about it. We just smile and nod. Smile... and nod.
6922251 Geez that was a bit much! Now what about a chapter for Tia & Twi¿