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Ah, Silver and Luna those two sure can make for the drama.
Twilight's friendship is intact, but mine weren't so lucky - Twilight's friendships are intact, but mine weren't so lucky
to a soft ground - to the soft ground
Was worried for a moment that another change would be Luna not being rescued from Nightmare moon. Luna did not seem to be experiencing a nightmare, but she clearly did not recognize Silver for a moment. It provides some interesting fodder for speculation. Good writing there, and I fell for the trap.
It was very nice to see her calming Silver down enough to rest before he starts making poor decisions due to lack of sleep and intense mental stress. Sleep won't make the troubles go away or even be more easy to bear, but being mentally and physically exhausted could certainly make things worse.
-edited to wrangle and hogtie a stray typo.
6689569 Typos slipped into a convenient time loop and promptly forgotten.
Luna was at her best, gently guiding and consoling Silver in their time of need. Both feel closer for the time. Luna and Silver's fates are fairly tightly woven, though that could have become a long-lived enmity, and almost did quite a few times in this tale.
6689727 - That truly would have been a tragedy. I thoroughly enjoy your characterization of Luna in this series as she slowly thaws and develops as a person. Thanks in no small part, I like to think, from Silver's persistence in pursuing a friendship with her.
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Seemed to me more like as if S5E13 (Do Princesses Dream of Magic Sheep?) never happened.
Indeed it's like getting burglarized, you can sometimes recover lost things but most of the time you just get a consolation check n(if you're lucky).
Keep going! ;)
A perfect chapter for how this story is going exultant work DS.
Harts Fire
6690103 Not being torn about something doesn't mean never thinking about it ever again. You'll note Luna recovered fairly instantly. Even as Nightmare Moon, she wasn't that terrible. She didn't even cackle at Silver.
I'm slightly disappointed that Silver's not gonna make a desperate attempt to fix the past, but given that the only way to get Shei back is to essentially kill her sister, it's very understandable. Trying to save BOTH sisters and not tie time in knots would be improbably difficult. And Twilight and Starlight would almost certainly step in to put a stop to any time travel plans given recent events. Rough Tumble on the other hand seems entirely recoverable, since he's still alive and well and simply lacks his memories from the original time-line. That seems like the sort of thing there just has to be a spell for, especially with Starlight Glimmer's magicl abilities on hand...er... hoof.
6692147 I can't imagine that being a good end. You have a life, and likely a partner, someone shows up at your door and says they used to be involved with you, in another timeline. MAGIC ZAP, now you remember it... what do? You still have a life, and a family. You worked hard to get where you were.
6692163 I suppose you're right . It's an essentially unsolvable problem:. And Silver Star's isn't general a "poke it with a stick" kinda problem solver. Me, I'd listen to all the very good advice, and then immediately poke time with a stick . Silver should definitely look into this not-remembering-the-current-reality problem though. Because he wasn't part of Twilight and Starlight's time loop, so technically he shouldn't remember the previous timeline, they should. Wait a minuette.... does that mean this is an entirely different time loop? That would meen Silver's already gone back in time, he just hasn't done it yet. And if Silver Stars is going back in time, the third law of time-travel is as good as broken (it's really more of a guuideline than a "Law", really).
First Law of Time-Travel: Time-travel is stupid.
Second Law of Time-Travel: If you're going to travel back in time, you already did.
Third law of Time-Travel: Don't fuck yourself.
For real. The for-real-laws-of-time-travel and not just something I write on the walls in public bathrooms.
6692269 The next chapter awaits!
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I had to go back and read everything everyone said about the Windsongs over the last two chapters to try and keep things straight. Silver never gets any kind of event confirmation, so why does she suddenly "know" it was herself who fed Shei the candy? Celestia's telling of the story very vaguely hints as to the personality of the survivor, but there are still no concrete details there. Even with that, there's no mention of the conversation with Celestia when Silver is trying to sort through which sister is where, so any personal "revelation" is still disconnected from all evidence, faint though such evidence seems.
Dang it shei was one of my favorites
Still not happy. Lol, there are a lot of things in this story that I wasn't happy about.
I thought that she was going by the name Prince Silver Stars. Was that just another alteration in the timberline?
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I see that name used.