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Always wanted a twin brother much?
6324924 I have a twin brother. I have a brother of every kind, except a long lost brother, and I might have one of those!
6324927 Did not know that. Would have gone with a different joke if had. So is the new david gonna ship with the queen jackal? I know you're not gonna give spoilers, more speculation on where I think this might be going than an actual question.
I think I am with Celestia on this, one silver is enough x3
6324953 I can't spoiler, because I don't know! I'm pretty bad at planning.
I hope this does not break the space time continuum but I'm sure the typos have a head start on that.
6324969 But two heads are better than one!
Well he didn't pass out when he met his other self. That means it is likely that a chain reaction will that occur unraveling the space time continuum that may destroy the entire universe or if they are lucky the damage may be isolated to just the local galaxy.
WTH I am so confused . i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/439/658/add.gif
So, is this going to be Lyra's second chance to get with him?
Found an error:
here
And another ones bites the dust..
I look at the calendar and note...no, it's not April the first.? Canon Silver-verse? Ha ha!
Masturbation vs. twincest? Maybe he could get himself pregnant...depending on what was gifted beside the tail. Hee hee.
6325212 Typo has bitten the dust. The dust is suing for damages.
6325008 And double the headaches Lol
... Did not see that coming.
your typos can appear anywhere. even where you don't expect it >.>
look at your authors note and you will find one
6325416 Fixed. Would you believe I'm going hard of seeing? The typing continues despite!
I am looking foreword to see how his wife's handle this Celestia not withstanding.
Dragonfox
What is text trying to play? Good chapter and didn't see that coming.
We can almost hear the Spirits singing at our newest arrival. Surely the Anubians will insist be be their King? Actually, this could solve quite a few Bangles,..
Keep going! ;)
I really feel like this should be two sentences, with that first comma changed into a period.
"It's" as much in their blood as anything else.
There are two spaces between "grunt" and "as."
I was going to weight till I was up to date with all 5 chapters before I posted a comment but I see David cod not resets to get David back in the story.
good work David.
Okay, well...this turned pretty sharply into "WTF" territory.
So Silver ends up back at home on Earth...except it's not his Earth, it's a parallel Earth, with a parallel him, the old him. Fair enough, but Silver's first impulse is to...have sex with his other self? And moreover, his other self actually agrees with it? That's the part where things kind of went completely bizarre for me. I say that because one of the lesser plot-points in this story's development is that Silver has been slowly working to overcome his ingrained sense of homophobia, so why would he take one look at his old body and say "hey, let's have sex."
What's even less believable, however, is that his older self would be anything other than freaked out by that. Leaving aside the issues of an alternate, pony version of himself just appearing in his room - and that's a LOT of suspension of disbelief right there - I'm having a very, very hard time seeing the older/original version of David ever responding positively to sexual attention from another male, even if they are himself (or a pony, for that matter). That this David took to the idea with such little problem, when Silver approached that topic only with the greatest reluctance (and even then only because he was pushed), doesn't seem credible to me. This is an idea that should not have gone over well.
Leaving that aside, his having brought his other self here seems like the sort of craziness that could cause all sorts of problems...except that, as several other posters have mentioned, this seems tailor-made to deal with the situation with the Anubians. Simply pass him off to Nefertari - imagine, a real pure-blooded "human" right there! - and let them get started on "reforging her race" in an entirely different manner! This really does seem like that's going to be the case.
There's also a meta-contextual reason for that. This story is Silver's story, but having another version of himself there complicates things, to the point where I honestly can't see the story splitting it's focus between Silver and David. Because of that, David is going to need to be gently shoved off-screen, which means removing him from Silver's presence. All the more reason, then, to pass him off to the Anubians and let them go somewhere and take care of things on their own.
...though for some reason, all of this is making me wonder whatever happened to First Stars. Does anybody remember her?
6339541 How did I miss this?
Our viewpoints seem to be diverging quite a bit lately. Silver didn't offer wild sex with David. He offered snuggle times. As creeped out as David might be with having sex with a guy, a supernatural fuzzy stallion shows up and offers a hug? He's getting a hug. He's getting all the hugs! That the alien was also forceful but kind was also the correct tact to use. Rough Tumble was scariest when he was at his most submissive and yet wanting Silver to do things he was not comfortable doing.
Ultimately, David was a pretty lonely dude, and wants to be swept up and into something, and that's exactly what happened. It's why he agreed so readily to go to Equestria the first time, and now the second time (fricken multiverses!) The two are, to me, fascinating beside one another. Silver is really getting to see what he looked like, from the outside. It really brings out the changes and growth he's undergone over the series. They started off, at some point 99.9% identical, but now... They are not the same person.
Silver has, from the first meeting, tried to give David what he wanted to get. A warm and genuinely caring friend that will smash down his shell of isolation and offer him a world of adventure while protecting him.
6339702 Some points I wanted to reply to:
Okay, that didn't really come through. Silver specifically said "it doesn't matter if I'm a guy or a girl," followed by "we won't do anything if you don't want to." That really sounded like he was gently trying to nudge his doppelganger into having sex with him...a sentiment that I thought was confirmed by his saying "As amusing as it would be to live with myself and commit what is either masturbation or incest..."
This is true, and I think that this one can be chalked up to me. I find myself frustrated with this fic, lately. Partially this is because Silver doesn't seem to be sustaining much of the personal growth that he's undergone. He's pushed his limits, but in every case he's followed this up with a retreat back into familiar territory. He can be commanding and powerful when Nefertari presses him, only to turn right back around when he's with Celestia and say "I'm your submissive stallion."
That leads me to my other complaint, which is how this fic just can't seem to sustain the political angle. Politics ultimately takes place at the macro level, but this fic clearly wants to focus on the micro - it's about Silver's personality issues, not about the decisions he makes as a ruler. He's concerned with the personal, rather than the political, and it's frustrating because things really seemed to be going the other way back when he was in Anugypt, or even Saddle Arabia. Not so much lately.
6339904 Welcome to my mind. I have a lot of incredibly dirty and inappropriate thoughts. This happened to include 'If I fucked myself, would that be...' But... they didn't. They cuddled. Silver has made no move to push their relationship into a romantic one and has tried to set rather firm boundaries against it (despite the cheering in the comment section and elsewhere saying they must become a 'thing'.
As for refusing to become political, man. Silver just can't please some people. He's done so much he really was not at all ready for, and has pulled through it all, now returning to Equestria, battered, but triumphant. Is he ready to become uber prince? No. He's still more a prince than Twilight is a princess. Sure, she set the bar kind of low, but for how long he's had the title, he's really trying to do right by his people and his position.
He acts submissive to Celestia? He has mommy issues and Celestia is the big mother of Equestria. Before she was hostile and he had to avoid and fear her, trembling when she came around, now they have become closer, and greet each other with warm embraces and smiles, and he is quite happy for it. He's been standing tall and straight a lot more of late. I really don't know what more he can do besides stopping being Silver.
6340002 I'm not saying that Silver hasn't dealt with political acts or situations - he has - but rather I'm referring to how those acts and situations have been framed. Everything that's gone on has largely been presented in the stance of "the political is personal." It's not about policy for Silver - he simply doesn't go to a place where he considers the various aspects of what it means to be in a position where he makes decisions for other people. Rather, he's focused on what it means for him. Even when he does think about how what he does impacts others, it's always in the scale of his personal relationship with them, rather than how he can enact change to better their lives on an impersonal scale.
I'd also like to point out that the whole "mommy issues" angle is not one that's been expressed in this fic, that I recall. If the story had played up Silver's relationship with Celestia as some sort of Oedipal complex, that would have been something else again.
Seems rather fitting how, after becoming so changed, we get a look at v 1.0 just to bring home how far he's come.
...Huh. I'm mildly amused that David didn't show up nude after deciding not to bring anything. I guess the Text just tossed him a bone.
If anyone asks David is Silver’s little brother or twin.
That doesn’t make sense grammarly speaking. "There are others besides me, but he is me?" Makes a bit more sense.
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Nope, sure doesn't.
We need a tag for doubleselfinsertion.