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weee, magic induced fainting! always fun X3
It amuses me when a new update is released just as I catch up.
And now I'm very curious about just how turkey royalty will react to the ponies.
Oh, and what is happening with Silver and his new jewelry. Curious there too.
The pony fainted?! Gasp and alarm! We weren't expecting that!!!!
Gobble, gobble, gobble gobble gobble gobble!
I'm not sure that I trust, but if twas Zecora it would be a must.
6222731 He must have been assassinated! Run! Run for your lives!
I am curious how the characters keep being referred to or even sometimes refer to themselves as horses and not ponies. Are you not using the common idea on fimfiction that ponies get offended if you call them horses?
6223186 They could get indignant at turkeys, or get things done and play nice.
Now we might be able to get rid of that stupid bangle. great chapter but I agree with silver, that was too easy.
Why do I have a bad feeling about the royal birds?
Why am I craving cranberry sauce and mashed potatoes?
Heh, finding these typos is kinda fun. Never really got to before since I arrived late to this series.
6223995 Fixed!
6223319
Ok I get that. But why did they refer to themselves as horses and not ponies?
6224304 Specific instance we're referring to?
6222074 I am a voracious reader.
Lol, the larger one just carelessly tossed on him like an unimportant rock!
We're a little concerned, but obviously Oman wasn't, so it's not life-threatening (he doesn't appear to be the type to enjoy that kind of torture).
Keep going! ;)
vary interesting.
6223941 I myself am wanting some candied yams covered with melted marshmallows.derpicdn.net/img/view/2013/11/23/479609__safe_solo_pinkie+pie_animated_spoiler-colon-s04e01_princess+twilight+sparkle+-dash-+part+1_creamy+creamy+frosting.gif
Change "we" to "they."
For "memento's" sake.
Same thing here.
Delete that terminal quotation mark.
6229974 Typos left for the birds to peck at.
6229995 The story was right to lampshade how easy this was; Silver never has things go that well. Of course, the caveat here is that the issue isn't so much how easy this item was to acquire, but what it does now that he's wearing it.
The fact that just seeing it had such a powerful effect on Silver was unexpected. My suspicion is that it was like the magical version of a magnetic pull, in that the one half was opposite the other, and so was drawn to it. If that's the case, then I'd presume that the other half acts as a counterbalance, pulling his energies up towards his body (or even his brain) rather than his groin. That said, if all that did was negate the effects of the other half, that'd be rather boring. As such, I hope that this is doing something rather more interesting, like enhancing his magic overall.
Of course, this seems to mean that the sexy times are likely over, but then, the story has been trending that way for a while. While it's sad to admit, the story has slowly moved back to where it's comfortable with, focusing on the character drama between Silver and the ponies around him, and away from its original premise of sex and politics. To be fair, it's still trying to keep both alive, but they seem to be on a low ebb, something showcased by how Silver has yet to do anything with Fiddah.
Things could still turn around at any time, however. Hopefully we'll see something to that effect when Silver goes to meet the rulers of Turkey.
6230221 You may or may not be extremely tickled with that eventual meeting with the turkey royalty. I am amused already with the thought that came into my head about it. I should be writing it tomorrow!
Turkey likes cake? I like cake too we are same!
"guided our vessel"
Another accidental perspective shift. You mean to say 'guided their vessel'.
You have an extra quotation mark.
6796690 Fixed!
missing closing quote
bird's
I was thinking about that all chapter. National leader spearheads the first meeting between two nations and doesn't include the leaders of the nation being visited? I suppose that's dream logic for you.
If Silver + bangle = turning sex partners into receptive females, then clearly Silver + full set = new female alicorn. I vote Fiddah for the target; she would be the most interesting.
Finally, 6796717 you didn't actually fix:
I guess you could say they shoed away that offer!
Remind me why they decided to go full party to their objective when they know turkeys afraid of unusual stuff and they are nothing, but unusual for them. Isn't it obvious that party must be as small as possible to not look intimidating? Silver, Celly and mad bird would be quite enough.
Well, at least it worked out without any extra sidequests or commotion. Could have been worse... and still can.