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This is kind of what certain religious ideas portray for the ascended. No carnal love, for that is somehow less (or even devilish). Prepare for more broken hearts i guess...
Keep going! ;)
This is not our Silver
6536076 Aw, don't hurt her feelings.
ok I will admit I stopped reading Silver when he died and I was not really sure if I would start agene but after talking with David Silver last night he encouraged me to continue with Silver.
I can say the story is totally different now Silver is defiantly broken and not totally right. is he ok? in a way yes but still broken.
now the $2000.00 dolor question is there any hope of Silver being any ware close to normal??
Time will tell.
Harts Fire
Not bad. Keep up the good work!
The Silver's story is a great story, but at this point its gotten so strange for me it feels as if a spaghetti monster has had its way with my brain.
6537152 Was there a logical misstep?
6537186
Nothing is wrong with any logic, its just mostly me and my brain going 'wolwolwowlowwowlolwol'. Mostly my fault, but I still enjoy the story.
6537399 He/she has certainly led an interesting life!
Change "would show" to "showed."
The entire first half of that sentence is very awkward. I'd change the entire sentence to something like "Her own thread to Silver, composed more of caring than love, was similarly sedate."
That should be "Missis" or "Missus".
The first step to fixing a problem is admitting that there is a problem...which is sort of what happened here. Sort of. Silver quite clearly doesn't think of her current condition as anything bad, but then, nopony really took the time to explain to her that a love without physical intimacy wasn't fulfilling for them, which was kind of the point. Then again, just telling Silver that wouldn't have restored her libido, since she seems to be completely lacking that part of herself rather than just suppressing it.
It's notable that the one remaining person who could have helped, Zecora, wasn't there. I'm having a hard time imagining that she's feeling hurt or otherwise upset that she was rejected so violently by Night Watch, but it's entirely possible. Then again, she might just be respecting Night's decision about her no longer being welcome there. Either way, it's pretty clear that she should be brought in on this...maybe to make an herbal "marital aid" potion for Silver to drink?
Nefertari was rather unsurprising in her dislike of Silver's new form. I was caught a bit off-guard by just how insulted she seemed at the suggestion that she, pregnant with Silver's "pup," should be "loved and cared for." She clearly associated that with weakness, and it seemed to upset her quite a bit. As it is, I'd honestly have thought that she'd have written Silver off by this point, since she's made it clear that strength and passion are what she values and what she finds attractive, and this Silver is near-totally lacking in the latter and seems highly disinclined to use the former.
Luna's suggestion that she make Silver her foal...I hope she meant in terms of their relationship, rather than literally. Though in all honesty, the entire idea seems half-baked. Presuming that she does mean that they exercise a mother-daughter relationship, then that's not trying to fix the underlying problem so much as change herself around to adapt to the current circumstances. Adaptation can sometimes be the right answer, but it's clearly not here. We've been down this particular road before, and Luna found it very unsatisfying the first time she tried it. I doubt that this will be much different. Better to get to the root of the problem first.
I had been curious what Cadance would see if she examined Silver's love, and as expected she was able to tell that something was out of whack. Disappointingly, she had no particular insight as to what was wrong, or how to fix it. Celestia was likewise little help...in fact, her suggestion that Silver seemed better made me roll my eyes. So she's just put all of their frantic love-making, and her hopes for a foal of her own, completely aside then?
At least they're getting a meal out of all this.
6537725 Fixed!
6537854 Cadance surely isn't signing out yet. She is no goddess of love, but she can see, and feel, and manipulate to a point. She could love-blast Silver, but that would be wrong, even wronger than just making two ponies that already felt that sort of thing suddenly be overwhelmed with it for a short time. If it worked on Silver, she'd end up doing things without knowing why. She'd rape herself, possibly. Let's not go down that road.
There are gentler ways.
hang out
is now. The passion in this story vanished rather like it did in Silver in, oh, Ch. 101.
Either use "could often mean" or "often meant". Could often meant just doesn't sound right.
7251012 Fixed!