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Why do I sense some foreboding in this chapter.
Hmmm.
6498027 What? I'd never be foreboding! You're confusing me with some other author.
Dis werd rite dere.
*gasp* The mud ponies are multiplying and not in the usual manner if you know what I mean.
6498201 Fixed!
6498305 It was, but his story was shared. They know where he came from originally. Twilight is pretty awful at hiding secrets for long, especially around her friends.
I can say this chapter started out a bit on the dark side.
and turned to being a happy time in the end.
also I do love the names Wispy Night and Wispy Sunset they fit really well.
Harts Fire
6498564 He really should bring up some of these things with her, he's a little distracted at the moment. Side note I notice you are doing a lot of chapters today! I am excited to see you catching up!
Do they not need a hart Cristal for such transformations? To make them safe?
Dragonfox
6498656 One, Silver has such a crystal dangling around his neck. Silver is considered a reasonably talented sorcerer when casting from spells that he can read from. You didn't need a crystal if it was a spell you found reasonable mastery with. Fire I created trouble because she cast a spell from memory that she did not know very well.
Really hope Silver found the right spell for that transformation. Without Fast there to locate the right book mistakes could be made. It wouldn't be good if he somehow found a permanent change spell by accident.
6499747 It's Fast's fault for being thrown into house arrest!
No real error here, but I'd change "just to remember" to "only to remember." it just flows better.
Capitalize the "c" in "Fast change."
6498579 Thanks! The sudden burst of determination to catch up caught me by surprise too, but I'm going to try to keep it up!
This was a fairly sweet chapter, and served as some necessary downtime after the mini-arc of drama over Silver's impregnation of/marriage to Pinkie Pie. Night Watch, once again, serves as the voice of reason, or at least calm, here. I do think that it's a little bit odd that she didn't want to sit down and talk to Silver about the practical impact of this latest development (e.g. it feels odd that Twilight is the one who keeps getting on Silver about looking/acting like a prince now)...but that's an extremely minor complaint. After all, insofar as Equestria knows, Silver is still "Stud of the Land," so claiming/knocking up another mare is probably par for the course insofar as the public is concerned.
It was sweet that Silver was worried about Night Watch not being there for him one day, but his overreaction was a touch disheartening. Yes, that will be sad one day, but that the simple thought was enough to drive him to tears reflexively makes me want to smack him and tell him to toughen up...which is sort of what Night Watch did. The talk about zombies and vampires felt largely incidental, particularly since it didn't really relate to anything except what those labels meant to lunar ponies. It would have been better to have had that talk serve as background dressing while some sort of action was being undertaken, otherwise random conversation is random.
That said, I'm rather surprised that Fast Change is literally incarcerated for what she did. It's not so much that that's inappropriate (since it's not; Fast was really dumb for what she did), but that I'm surprised Twilight was willing to go that far. That seems a bit more harsh than I'd expect from her, not to mention it's a bit odd that she has a cell (let alone a sturdy enough one to hold Fast) in her castle to begin with. I'd make a conjugal visit joke at this point, but with Fast it wouldn't actually be a joke...
So now Night is going to tag along to keep Silver out of trouble? That's actually not a bad idea. Maybe she'll be able to keep the insanity down enough to let Silver and Tumble have their date. Presuming that Nefertari hasn't already beat the poor colt cuddler into the ground already. Also, it's worth remembering that Nefertari claims that she's both Silver's mate and nurturing his unborn child as well...I wonder if she'll have any reaction to the events with Pinkie Pie in that regard?
6501300 All fixed!
6501331 What's that, Twilight obsessing over how things 'should' be? That's really not like her at all (super sarcasm alert, man the battle stations! What do you mean the men are on vacation?). Night Watch keeps things practical, as is her desire.
I'd apologize for Silver being emotional... but he is, and so am I, especially in regards to things reaching the end of existence and then not existing anymore, which is one of those unavoidable parts of life that we've created countless religions and philosophies to, with varying degrees of success, deal with.
Let's find out just what sort of training Nefertari has started with to get Rough Tumble into shape! It depends on how 'advanced' she likely feels he is to begin with.
For having a couple of foals, this herd doesn't spend much time with them.