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A mud pony? The scandal amongst the nobility!
Silver as earth pony interesting and he is defiantly holding a large amount of magic.
and a possible visit from Rough Draft and Trixie and to see there new foal I am so excited.
Sounds like Fast Change needs a front seat view of the 'not-magic' of Pinkie Pie. See her explain all of that away.
Yes, having learned how to control his mana it would certainly be easy to demonstrate his enhanced state, in any form...
Keep going! ;)
I think that's meant to be "I want him to be treated well"
6473891 Fixed!
Yay yay YAY!
Not an error per se, but this should end with "and they each enjoyed the company of the other."
There are two spaces between "his" and "reference."
6494838 Fixed! Only two? I'm improving!
6495130 This was a fun chapter, but once again surprised me by changing its focus while only being partially clear on why things kept altering so fast. Like the previous chapter, it never went so far as to be off-putting, particularly since the characters did a good job recognizing and reacting to it, but still caught me off-guard.
The chapter skips right to Silver and Night Watch being together, and it starts out being exactly as amorous between the two of them as I'd expected, since the two of them quite clearly have the strongest bond out of all of Silver's many paramours. And as the kissing and nuzzling grows more heated, they...start updating each other on what's happened and what they're planning on now. It's a rather awkward derailing of what seemed like an obvious sexual encounter, and I'm still not sure how it happened. To be fair, neither is Silver, as he flat-out asks "how did we get here from where we were a few minutes ago?" Night Watch's answer is honest, but I'm still not sure that it clearly connotes the message she's trying to get across, which I think is "I'm happy just being with you, it doesn't need to be sexually."
That said, their talk about the state of things was a bit of a mixed bag for me. Night Watch mentioned that she'd finished her tasks...okay, but what is she doing now? That was kind of a big deal for her, since she was unhappy in such a podunk town. Now that she's no longer gravid, and her job from before is finished, is she just being idle again? I get that right now she's overcome that her beloved is back, but at some point the high from being reunited will fade and this issue will come back up again. Also...so there's no further reconciliation necessary about how Silver wanted Luna to brainwash her? I mean, they did deal with that before and all, but I sort of thought it'd come up, even if only briefly.
I'm also not wild about the focus, even as brief as it was, on other-David. I just really find his character superfluous.
After that, we got more of Fast Change, who once again completely stole the scene. Did I mention just how much I'm enjoying her character as a character? She's so awesome! Her having a racist streak towards earth ponies is so freakin' good for her character; flaws, as a rule, tend to make characters more interesting, and so I can't tell you how much I like having Fast have a bit of prejudice in her. All the more so for the fact that it's towards such an "elephant in the room" issue as how earth ponies don't really have anything notable compared to (spellcasting) unicorns and (flying) pegasi.
This goes right to a major aspect of MLP:FiM, since it was only at the end of the fourth season that we were outright told/shown that earth ponies have magic at all (though there'd long been hints that they have some kind of magic). Heck, that whole "strength to work the land/connection to nature" bit still seems kind of thin. When's the last time we saw Pinkie Pie do either of these things (though she's clearly got "party magic" all her own). Or any other earth pony that isn't a farmer, for that matter? Though, conversely, there's the fact that Tirek's rampage sort of out-and-out proved that earth ponies have magic, since he had to have drained them of something, after all.
Coming up next, a date with Tumble while incognito!
6497906 You hate him sooooo much, even when he isn't on camera. Goodness.
Night cuts to the quick, and always gets Silver right by the heart, and that's the way both of them like it. I find it amusing that you reviewed this just as I'm sitting here writing more Night Watch interaction. Their relationship is a special one, truly.
Fast Change has every reason to feel earth ponies are weaker, especially with her lack of knowledge of earth pony magic, which is pretty shared among a lot of ponies. What IS earth magic?
I can’t help but saying, “Earth ponies rein supreme! Earth ponies rein supreme!! Earth ponies rein supreeeeeeeeeeeme!!!