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6192941 Mmh hmm!
Lol, not sure if it's worse being blue balled or being done so in the presence of foreign royalty.
Keep going! ;)
Silver just got trolled big time.
I am thinking there are too mares that are going to be busy that night.
I just letting you know that I am steel enjoying this story. Keep up the good work you are doing.
Dragonfox
She we are loosing bright but gaining Oman to the party. Think silver using some magic is what cause those two to get playful? And also Turkeys? What's next deer( probably moose, elk, and whitetail or mule)? Great chapter and I got a feeling that the next chapter will be a bit frisky.
For some reason, this was my first reaction to this chapter:
Turkey. My favourite meat. Are all sorts of meat sapient in the Majickal horseworld?
Take the "s" off of "demands," since he's referring to more than one individual.
On freeing "our" new friend from it.
There are two spaces between "Bright" and "Eyes."
Silver felt "put" on the spot.
There are two spaces between these sentences.
So, did anyone else read this and immediately think of this (specifically the part from 18:00-18:22)?
6194715 Typos thrown in the fireplace.
6194958 An amusing chapter, this leg of the story seemed intent on tying up various loose ends and laying out new plot-threads. While sometimes these types of chapters can feel boring or obligatory, I quite enjoyed this one. That was because that characters were allowed to just bounce off of each other naturally, and the resulting amusement felt very natural.
It is a bit sad that we're losing Bright Eyes...is what I'd normally expect myself to say. However, I honestly can't find myself upset or concerned that she's leaving the group. That's not because I didn't like her character, so much as I felt like she was never getting her chance to shine. Given that the story is focused on Silver, and she was intent on keeping away from him as much as she could (and monopolizing Shei while she did), she was quite clearly tugging away from the main focus of the story. As such, letting her go here felt like the right thing to do, both for her character and in service to the overall narrative.
In other words, this is what it's like when a character arc reaches its natural conclusion, and is allowed to be gracefully let go. I suppose we might still get a scene of Bright Eyes formally parting ways with the group (e.g. saying her goodbyes), but that's not strictly necessary at this point. My sole critique is that now Silver needs another mare that will exercise his oft-neglected dominant side. That's not just with regards to his sex life, since he's still not totally comfortable with the more forceful duties of his royal status, so I do think that he needs another mare that will need to be put in her place. He really can't seem to keep that role filled...
Having said all of that, it was great to see Bottom become more uppity here, to the point of downright anger at having her life-choices continually questioned. This was a good thing because an outburst like that required at least some degree of self-actualization. You can't express anger unless you feel at least somewhat confident in yourself that you're allowed to do so. More than anything, this affirms that she's doing what she needs to be doing. Of course, the one person that she didn't get angry at was Silver himself, who has questioned her choice more than anyone...but I doubt she can bring herself to go that far, at least not yet. It might also be a non-issue if Silver stops needling her about that, and he does seem to be getting better on that score.
Overall, I suppose you could call this "the rise of Bottom."
In the meantime, the group is headed - not to the land of the Anubians - but to Turkey. Normally I'd go into an extensive analysis on what that likely means with regards to the national relationships between Equestria and Turkey, but...well...I honestly can't get past the idea of a land filled with talking turkeys. Really, that video I posted before is how I view them, and it's pretty hard to imagine them as anything more dignified than making "gobble gobble" sounds and acting like flustered birds. Oh, and of course there's absolutely nothing sexual about them at all. It's a good thing that Silver still has two harem girls, because he's definitely not going to be getting any action from the locals while he's there.
Still, it is intriguing that the other half of the artifact is in a museum. By itself, that's so against the usual tropes for recovering an ancient artifact that I immediately like it. Now if retrieving it can become an adventure of politics and diplomacy rather than combat and exploration, then we might have a very different, and very enjoyable, sort of adventure on our hands. I really hope the story rises to this particular challenge!
6196558 Bright Eyes was just not working out in the group dynamics. She wanted to go, and the opportunity was there, and she eagerly trotted to it and didn't look back. I wish you the best of luck, you filly fooling captain.
I found it amusing that you just wrote this up as I was finishing the next chapter, which touches on this, so I'll let you enjoy it!
The turkeys seem harmless overall, but they are a relatively unknown factor, which is always a danger all of its own. What's the worst that could happen?
It belongs in a museum indeed...
"Bringing ponies to the Light of Harmony, eh? So that's what you named it, not Little Silver?"
"Thanked."
7779119 Fix'd