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She looked off where the others had hurried off to - She looked off to where the others had hurried
off to. - my inner grammarian says, 'don't end a sentence on a preposition or prepositional-phrase' but I leave it to you, the author.cockamaney - Ooo... a new pony-pun. I like it!
struck her hooves together - Nefertari has hooves? Did she close with Starlight and clap her hooves together?
explosion who's - explosion whose
down the slow - down the slope
*****
Interesting turn. Perhaps not the most mature way for these two to resolve their differences, but certainly in keeping with their personalities. Hmmm... difficult to figure odds on this, both have talents that have not been revealed, both have an indomitable pride, backed by competence, but pride nonetheless. Barring outside interference, it should be an interesting battle and hopefully there will be no casualties amongst the non-combatants. I figure: 40 percent Starlight, 40 percent Nefertari and 10 percent of Silver having to intervene in battle form to keep them for killing or seriously injuring themselves or others.
Also interesting to note that Starlight never really answered what she had learned about Silver, only about Silver's magical creations, and what Starlight was not personally interested in among those. She's not off to a solid start in winning Silver's heart, I think, but I also think her heart is, if not in the right place yet, at least moving in that direction.
I did not see this coming but it is on.
I am giving 2 to 5 on starlight coming out on top.
6705641 Typos thrown in the path of their exchange of power, may they make pretty lights in the fire.
This conflict came as much a surprise to me as anyone else. Nefer entered the scene, and the sparks started flying. None of the 'adults' on the scene were the sort to be able to reign in either successfully, and it shot right up to where we are now. Twilight would likely have hauled Starlight away by the ear. Shame she's busy at the moment.
We were wondering when she was going to challenge Nefertari. She may think that speed is her only trick, but that will soon pass.
Who's betting with me she won't even need her war form?
Keep going! ;)
Uhhhh.... was somepony supposed to watch the foals? It's okay it's not like foal-napping sun-cults are a thing....
6705933 "War form" is more of a "need/want" than a "need" I would think. I'm betting she'll show it off whether she "needs" it or not.
6707969 Kind of is, kind of isn't. It' more a statement on the emotional roller coaster you put your readers through.
chose
Pony + Dog = Catfight...WHAT????
6985763 What's the worst that could happen?!