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Remember, officially there was no foal-napping. The Princess was "organizing the library". This is a matter of national security. Debriefing will be at 11:30 a.m., sharp.
In the show, he already had his date with Twilight. He made her pull him in a giant golden chariot to the ends of Equestria and fight a Tatzlworm.
Cadance enjoyed it though!
6628176 That was a test, not just to hang out, and see what she likes, and he likes, and actually get to know one another.
6628212 Are you jealous of Silver's warped life? He/She has been through the blender both ways. No lesson is ever easily learned.
6628212 My name is Kiki Charles Steen. My fathers name Was Charles Edwin Madrie. I am sorry your life is boring.
edit: and THIS is what happens when I try to be friendly online while drunk.
Wait, did they forget to hint Celestia top The Plan? I think Silver did a little, but I thought her and Twilight were going to be a little more obvious...
Keep going! ;)
wow this chapter hade a little chaos and disorder in it and it worked so good.
exultant chapter DS.
Harts Fire
Silver looked to Spike, who shrugged, then at Silver - Twilight(?) looked to Spike, who shrugged, then at Silver
There are two spaces between "We" and "have."
Not a typo, but I'm not sure if Celestia is purposefully not calling Silver "Prince" or what, here.
"Each's magic" is very awkward phrasing; I'd change that to "their magic."
Don't capitalize "alicorn" there.
That should end with "I assure you."
I get the feeling that this sentence should begin with "Twilight" rather than "Silver."
This chapter largely acts as a transition, ending the first part of the new enemies' introduction and moving into that episode with Discord.
To that end, it serves fairly well. I was struck by how the meeting with Celestia was her (mostly) asking about what happened, which is somewhat paradoxical; she originally asked for that meeting before Twilight and Silver were foalnapped, so what was her original agenda for it? Again, the story didn't say, but in this case I think that it did make the answer known: Celestia wanted confirmation that Silver's "male" aspects - e.g. Silver's being at least somewhat comfortable with violent confrontation - was back. To her credit, Celestia handled that much better (and it was amusing to see Twilight starting to blow up, especially when she had Celestia on such a pedestal before). Even so, the meeting still felt somewhat aborted. They got there just long enough to have tea, answer a few questions, and then were sent away. It felt rather perfunctory.
Though it might have been for the best, considering that Twilight was so rearing to go that she and Silver ended up doing it for the entire train-ride home. The conversation about them being so in love that things like sexual preferences and gender roles didn't matter was adorable, though I question the degree to which that's necessarily something which should be lionized. I recognize that that can sound hypocritical coming from me, given how much I was pushing for a Silver/Tumble pairing earlier in the story, but that was largely due to a combination of Tumble being such an incredibly sympathetic character and the fact that it felt somewhat unfair of Silver to be so in favor of free love (especially among his multiple wives) while still shying away from a colt-cuddler. In this case, the underlying idea seems to be "true love transcends sex and gender," which sounds like the pinnacle of love as a virtue, until you realize that the flipside of this becomes "therefore, if you let sex and gender be factors in deciding whom you love, you're not realizing your greatest potential virtue" which I think is going too far.
That's not really a big deal here, since both Silver and Twilight came to where they are via their own choices (well...at least lately), but still, the sentiment is one that can lead to some unintended consequences. After all, it was just a few chapters ago that Twilight was pointing out how much she loved her friends, and yet she had no desire to be sexually engaged with them. Advocating the virtues of transcending all barriers, no matter how righteously presented, can lead to something libertine very easily.
Putting all of that aside, it's interesting to see how Twilight is going to react to Discord's prank here. In the show, Discord was acting (to my mind) genuinely mean-spirited; he wanted to make Twilight upset, just as he did by crashing her day with Cadance a season prior. Yet he usually ends these deliberately provocative pranks by suddenly trying to appeal to everypony else's better nature to escape any harsh feelings or punishment, whereby he can hope to just "hug it out" with the others and all is forgiven.
That's why Twilight is so down on Discord; he's earned that level of antipathy from her. Given that, I really don't see her attempts to be his friend as working out. He's acting in bad faith, despite Silver's assurances, and so I'd be surprised if Twilight's efforts aren't doomed to fail.
6946886 Typos fixed! Discord's approach was far less hamfisted than it was in the episode. I would agree, in the episode, he deserves every nasty bit of biting he gets from Twilight. In this case, he didn't drag her away, or do anything wrong at all. He didn't go out of his way to grind it in either.
You're making great progress! But I will admit I'm not likely to report everything going on in my characters' heads, leaving something to be decided for the reader, and I'm alright with that, even if they decide differently than I.
This doesn't read right.
Maybe you and Fast are having a bad influence on me.
this would be better.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=hAz7tqiYe1M
Did Twilight jump into Silver’s hooves?