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So... when does the next one start? :)
The Text is kinda a manipulative dick. Dunno that I see how inviting him to be a godparent is NOT a bad idea. But it's completely in character for Silver Stars. Can't wait for the next one. Same typo time, same typo channel. Now it's back to watching Batman cartoons.
I give this chapter two foals up.
6373115 Well, there are two foals up.
Nova Path and Girded Branch. My nominations, just for the Josh of it.
Really knew what the ring was the moment she presented it, didn't figure it out fully before then though. Definitely a surprise!
Keep going! ;)
Every time I see a new chapter I get really excited, and for this one the feels are there in force. Can't wait for the next installment!
tears I am siting here with tears. this is a perfect ending to a super story.
exultant work David Silver, and I am sure every pony that has followed Silver to this point in his young Alicorn life will say that this cliff hanger is perfect.
Harts Fire
There are two spaces between "guilt" and "that."
That "brown-furred, lavender-maned" foal.
6374700 Tweaks made!
oh my god the foals are cute but what about princess celestia ,princess luna and princess cadence foals. I want Alicorns foals to.
PLEASE images.wikia.com/victorious/images/8/87/Mlfw3493-135440_-_animated_pinkie_pie_please_puppy_dog_eyes.gif
6374726 That could be a whole story in itself. Cadance by herself could be a story.
6374742 COOL!!!!!!!!
Names count as cliff hangers!!! And please don't let one be Typo!
The image of somebody beating somebody else to death with a coffin just popped into my mind.
It was funny, disturbing, and angering all at once
6374725 And so Silver's journey (and perhaps his entire story?) come to an end, and I have to say, that ending was markedly poetic.
I was a tad bit surprised to find that I thought that, since I expected to be a bit miffed at the various secondary and tertiary plot-threads that were unaddressed at the end of this story. The reformation of the Anubians, Shei's finally burying Aila, issues with trying for an alicorn foal, etc. These weren't completely ignored, but they were gently nudged to the edge of the fic. Leaving aside that they're all grist for the (possible) sequel mill, I had thought that leaving these issues unresolved would weaken the end of this fic. But instead, just the opposite happened; the story shed all of its peripheral concerns and zeroed in to the aspect that was most important to its central character, and it nailed it.
That's because the ending was quite heartfelt, focusing on Silver's focusing on reconnecting to the ponies that are most important than him, those being his primary wives and his two newborns. While I was a bit taken aback at the nature of Twilight's "gift," Silver's appreciation of it is entirely in keeping with his personality (and his having been female, and pregnant, before certainly helped). It was also a nice shout-out to Castle Sweet Castle, where we see that memories can apparently be encapsulated (though for pictures, there).
This also dealt deftly with the idea of how ponies are named, since the whole "their names just happens to match their personality/cutie mark/special talent" bit was nicely avoided that way. Even more on-target was how this folded in the nature of The Text here again, hinting without giving anything away.
And of course, the actual, final part of the fic was a perfect place to close out, with Silver about to name his children. That was excellently done, as it presents an ending that leaves us wanting more, but without the tension of what I'd call a "real" cliffhanger. This way, we're left wanting more while at the same time enjoying the heartwarming feeling of the final scene, rather than the nervous anticipation that would come from a more dramatic ending.
Overall, this was a great way to close things out. Hopefully Silver will get the peace and quiet he so richly deserves now...I mean, as much peace and quiet as could be reasonably expected, at any rate.
It's nice to see that Text isn't purely aloof and uncaring. Nice twist with him being involved in the naming destiny gig.
But that ending cliffhanger there... Soooo want to find out those names, and perhaps some adorable foal-time antics.
Oh god, have alot to read... Well, might as well do something that Chicago football players do all the time... And Bear down!
6382326 First time in the series? Welcome!
6382430 no... Last time I commented on your series I was Some random Charizard. And I'm about halfway through your last story. (The one before this one)
6382508 Ah, my mistake. Welcome (back)!
6388413 AKA You tease.
space shuttle. can't for the sequel!
6396402 I demand we get a scene where they figure this out.
6397109 That would require either continuing this story or making a new one(sequel).
6397528 My statement stands.
6424849 I've been aboard awhile I just stopped for a short bit because I had no time to read so much.
Oh and I hate otter correct. The Damon thing keeps screwing with men
Do you mean strapped?
7248105 Fixed
I'll not remain anonymous!
To be honest, I did enjoy most of the ride. The down-vote was mainly for one scene. Maybe I'll change the vote (though probably not).
8800138
Thank you for your honesty, at least?
Cool, a memory stone ring!!
HAHA!!
What’s her mane color and her tribe?