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Should I have laughed at that? Because I did.
The twists this story takes
Also, you missed a Sky.
Should be Sky.
6719448 Oops! Glitch in the spell. Fixed!
6719448 Damn it! I must be losing my touch I didn't notice that at all. I'm glad Silver has all of us out to catch them errors.
You missed a perfect opportunity to say, "I shall call him.... Mini-Me!"
shove over Silver Sky I would like a chance at the other teat.
a good chapter and they are slowly finding thee way threw the ship.
Did Luna make Silver Stars pregnant? When did this happen? I feel like I missed something!
they saw at the entrance - they had seen at the entrance -or- they'd seen
I continue to be surprised by the twists and turns of the story, but am intrigued now to see where this all goes not that Sky's fate is tied to that of Stars and Fast.
Also, as Cosmic Flash noted above, and which had slipped my mind as I was trying to take in all this new information in the previous chapter as well as being worried for Silver Stars with every hoof she plants on that infernal ship, when on Equestria did Silver get knocked up and who is the 'father' this time? Also how did nopony notice, though perhaps it's still so early that only a libidinous construct with the resources of a scientifically advanced ship would have a chance to detect.
Still eagerly awaiting each new chapter!
Well this is a new twist. I like it. Good job on this chapter so far, Keep up the good work.
Dragonfox
6720262 Typo fixed, and one should be worried, stepping into a place where they died once. Where's a save point when you need one?
Upon second reading I suddenly think that, if they all survive this experience, Sky may find itself as a pony reborn...
I have no idea if I should laught at the pun made in the author's note.
Like having your own make Cortana!
Curious at the ship's motives. If it wants them in the medical bay.... Hmm....
Not getting identity bracelets this time it seems, that's even more foreboding we think.
Keep going! ;)
sounding
6985879 Oops, fixed!
Reminds me of Donna Noble’s kids in the Doctor Who episode “Silence in the library.”
More typos:
One fix is “is” → “it”, as the previous commenter already suggested. Also, the comma before “instead” is a comma splice, so it should be a different punctuation mark. I think a period works best:
9991620
Finished the run through this story.