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It well be good to see how happy this is going to make every one. Is he going to stay a Princesses ore become Prince Silver Star ones more or well he be a new and improve Prince Silver Star? He is learning so much more. Princess Luna, Princess Celestia and Princess Cadence wood be so happy to have him back.
Dragonfox
6590116 Regardless of her mentality, she has the body of a mare, and it took quite a bit of teamwork to make her into a prince the first time.
It may bother fate if she tried to recreate the exact body that died. Does she dare?
For now, being mentally whole is a grand step, is it not? How was the chapter?
Well, it's good to see Silver's got her mind back in one piece. A mind is a terrible thing, after all.
This chapter, I liked it, another please.
6590306 I'd love to hear more. Any parts you particularly dug, didn't dig?
6590145
I like the chapter a lot. I don't know if you made how he was peace together was your invention or it was borrowed from a different story but all the same, good job.
Dragonfox
6590369 The basic concept of having different aspects of the self is a very old one, but I didn't borrow from any specific place. They are all stages of Silver's life, as a child, adult, pony prince, and mother.
Should be 'slowly impaled'.
6590400 Good catch, fixed! Any thoughts on the chapter?
6590416
Ahh. Yeah. That would explain a good deal of the ah, loud and upset comments.
6590321 I liked the fact that you mended Silver, and that s/he finally got a victory without losing something in exchange. That was one of the main problems that I had with the story thus far, you never seemed to give Silver a definitive win, he always seemed to lose something in exchange.
Now I understand that you might not have wanted your character to appear as a Gary Stu, getting all the mares, becoming a prince(ss) that sort of thing, but the fact that he never fully won anything always bugged me. So far, that pattern appears to have been broken, and that is very nice.
6590605 That's a very good point. Silver is growing, too.
Even though he failed, he did it on his own terms, back when he died. He was on a mission of his own choosing, and he didn't try to blame anyone but himself for failing. He made his decisions.
Letting go of that a little was part of bringing him back. He has the power to choose, and to accept responsibility.
Sometimes that means letting go, to hug the ones you love.
David Silver this chapter is perfect do not change a thing.
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Hehe, sorry I think I have confused you. I may have said she but during those two paragraphs I was talking about two different she's. See, what I figured was that Twilight knew that Silver hadn't mastered the unicorn alphabet. I figured that since Twilight was surprised by the fact that Silver never mastered them that this could not actually be Twilight. I just figured that Twilight was actually Starlight in disguise or using transformation magic. It made sense at the time.
6591019 What a Twist! Silver would be miffed by this, especially if Twilight was hurt.
Okay, so the schisms have resolved. That's good, though Silver does have a point in questioning that (slightly) foreign influence.
Keep going! ;)
So... is Silver going to become a hermaphrodite dragon at some point? Because you like screwing with his/her shape and it just seems a hermaphrodite dragon would be on the list.
6783570 I missed a golden opportunity there. Was that really what this chapter made you think of?
Konami
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And no, it's understood, except perhaps for that something. Then again, marehood always was a foreign bit brought from the Princesses' magic.
Capitalize "mother" there, since it's being used as a proper name.
Technically, "Konami" should be capitalized, being the name of a company. I think.
Okay, trying to get back into the swing of things here.
I had some mixed feelings regarding this chapter, though I suspect that at least part of this is me bringing my own prejudices into things. What this chapter was supposed to accomplish was fairly straightforward: Silver's acceptance of her libido, as exemplified by her male alter ego. In that regard, the self-acceptance was done fairly well, with Silver talking (again) to various aspects of herself and embracing them, both literally and figuratively.
What felt off to me was that this level of self-affirmation was necessary at all. Going through a process of accepting who you are is what you do when you've purposefully denied yourself (whether consciously or not) up until that point. However, this problem wasn't one of Silver's own making to begin with. Fluttershy deliberately kept that part of Silver from herself; this was Silver taking back what somepony else took from her to begin with, rather than needing to reclaim something she'd decided to throw away. To that end, I'm not sure how much it was necessary to have Silver meet and embrace the myriad facets of herself; she's done that before, and there's been no indication that she's lost touch with those other parts of herself, so why show us her embracing them again?
To be fair, her meetings with them are all cordial and quickly resolved; as mentioned above, Silver is at peace with most of who she is, so in that sense it's entirely understandable that her encounter with the other parts of herself is little more than a nod and a hoof-bump. But the idea that her sexuality is tied to her previous, male incarnation, which died violently, would be so filled with self-recrimination struck me as odd. He wasn't apart from Silver because of a sense of having died, he was apart from her because Fluttershy locked him away. Why tie her sexuality so specifically to her previous incarnation? Why is he struggling to even want to come back? I'm not sure I get it.
I did like that we saw Fluttershy in there - in two aspects, no less - and the part with Twilight and the others joining in was nice as well. I'm not sure if they were really supposed to be there or if they were Silver's understanding of them. I do wish they - especially Fluttershy, as the "jailer" of the missing part of Silver - had played a larger role. This chapter took an external obstacle and internalized it, and that made the whole thing feel a little off-kilter to me.
6915563 Fluttershy got in the way during the ritual, though she didn't realize it. She set up the roadblock and let that part of Silver wither on the vine.
He was quite beaten up and abused by the time Silver came to rescue herself from the darkness, so give the guy a little break for not being at his best. Silver went down the road of her mind, passing by many friendly houses with friendly ponies. She waved at them, and they waved back. What a delightful trip! And it's so nice to touch bases with the neighbors. They were on the way, it'd be rude to not say hello. As you mentioned, the meetings with them were handled simply and easily, as there was no real friction or harm to be dealt with.
It's also part of the larger thing. The ritual must be done properly, which means not just rushing to the missing part and giving it a hug, but getting everyone involved to do it without interruptions or missed parts.
I hope that makes sense, also welcome back!
Reminds me of this.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=V2elkcnZSLo
2:35
Reminds me of a quote from “Northern Lights: Drained but still conscious.”