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Ok Twi kind of deserved that one.
WoW
6469128 Good or bad wow?
6469320 good WOW man
So Twilight was pussy blocked? Lol!
Keep going! ;)
lovely chapter a grate amount of love between all but at the same time twilight is paying the price for her curiosity.
There are two spaces between these sentences.
I'd change "setting yourself to be" to "setting yourself up to be" instead.
Even acting like a princess still got "to" her at times.
Capitalize the first letter of Twilight's name.
That he forgave "her."
But that "wasn't" what was wanted.
6484953 Typos cleared away.
6484966 Okay, so this chapter had some rough spots, but I liked it overall. Still, it felt like there was an unexpected sharp turn, both in the direction that things went (from "date with Tumble" to "I-missed-you-sex with the wives") and in how things went with Twilight specifically. That said, this was largely ameliorated by the characters displaying an unexpected awareness of how things were going slightly off-kilter. The end result was an odd, but not unenjoyable, chapter.
The thing that stuck out to me most was that I couldn't get a read on what sort of sex game Twilight and Silver were playing. Twilight was teasing Silver while saying that she wanted to know everything he did with Celestia, and then asking him about the other mares he bedded. To me, that was clearly her way of saying "talk dirty to me, baby." But Silver didn't seem to play along, instead flatly stating "trying to knock her up almost killed me," and then "I'm infertile." That pretty much seemed to kill the mood, and even Twilight ended up shifting her attitude from arousal to confessing her sins in response to that. It honestly seemed like he misread her attitude rather badly. (But I also can't rule out that Twilight really did want to know everything, including the technical details of what happened, while she was teasing him...but even so, that really seemed like a faux paus on his part.)
If we look past that, however, I quite liked the dynamic that Silver and Twilight had going between them. Fast's catcalling about how Silver was "supposed" to be the one dominating her and not the other way around helped throw this into stark relief (which made the chapter better for it). This wasn't simply a round of "boy gets turned on and sexes up girl." Rather, the two of them had a way of doing things that worked for them; they know what works for each other, and they're (mostly) comfortable with that. The role-reversal (with Silver teasing Twilight by not giving her what she wanted, intellectually or sexually) was a bit more unfamiliar, and I get the sense that this was them "trying something new," but it also felt cute in that newlywed sort of way.
Insofar as Twilight's odd confession went...my suspicion, since I was completely unfamiliar with the chain of events she was referring to, was that this was in reference to one of the other fics (that I haven't read) having a brief crossover with this one. Either way, I'm not at all sure what to make of that, since it's not ringing any bells for me nor has it apparently had any lasting impact.
Things ended with them going to find Night Watch, which I feel very conflicted about. Night is one of my more favorite characters (though Fast continues to eclipse her), and I really want to see her and Silver be together again; they just work so well! But it's coming at the cost of Silver getting something more than a quick tussle with Tumble. As I mentioned earlier though, this complaint loses its heat in light of the fact that the characters directly acknowledged this, and are still planning to make up for it. A date in disguise? Surely that will go off without a hitch...
6494813 Twilight is a scientist. Even when she wants to have knowledge partially for the sake of tittalation, she wants knowledge. Every horrifying fact only made her more curious and ignited the curiosity in her. If Silver hadn't shut her down, Twilight would have extracted his entire story and done what mares do while focusing on the more 'interesting' bits to keep his mind focused on the right mood.
Silver probably would have enjoyed it.
They'll get their chance. Plot's calling!
Y'know, when this all started a couple chapters back, I thought this whole situation would be Rough and Bottom (hence the chapter title "Bottom's Up or Enjoying a Rough Tumble").
Also, like Alzrius, I'm confused by the scenario Twilight's describing. Who? What? When...? Huh?
I suppose I'll find out in a chapter or two?
Is this another connection to One Step Two Step?
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