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Yay for the feelz.
chapter #3 for the day is a home run. good work DS.
ok if I have this right the bracelet is for sex drive.
the necklace is for strength of hart.
the shoe's help his earth pony magic.
that is 3 parts of a 5 part set.
I am going to just throw this out and say the last 2 parts will be something for his wings and his horn. this is all guess as only the authors muse know for sure.
Harts Fire
6238316 There you go, assuming I have a plan.
6238935 as we have talked in the past and I know how you wright or should I say don't wright I understand that.
if you look closer to the last part of my comment you will se I acknowledged how you work.
ok I really need more coffee it is way to early.
Harts Fire
"Fast" Change is going to want to see him.
Also, there needs to be a quotation mark at the end of this sentence.
Change "he's" to "he'd."
There are two spaces between "and" and "it..."
This makes it sound like they voluntarily got abortions, which I presume wasn't your intent?
6244050 Typos sent to the Anubians as a gift.
6244092 Well, quite a lot happened here!
We got to see Night Watch for the first time in a long time, and Silver's conversation with her was...very well-crafted. It felt true to both their characters for things to proceed that way. It didn't escape my notice that Night Watch was imagining them back when things were much simpler, back when it was just herself, Silver, and Celine; of course, she wasn't with him then, but I have to wonder if her harkening back to that shows just how upset she was, that she's starting to long for another time. That's not a good sign...whether or not Silver has repaired the damage is something else again.
What struck me most, however, was how Night dangled his vow to leave the other mares if she wanted him to in front of him. Shockingly, he refused, though he did so more gently than I'd have thought him capable of. That was very mature on his part, since it showed that he recognized that he can't keep tossing responsibilities aside for the sake of love (though I suspect that he was thinking that he couldn't toss aside the other mares who loved him just for Night's sake). That said, Night was right to rebuke him for having Luna try to mess with her head...but his explanation felt less than sincere to me. The idea that those artifacts were messing with his head was, to my mind, stretching the truth. Yes, he felt lusty, but any influence that had on his decisions was very indirect, at best. Blaming them for his recent mistakes felt like a dodge.
Still, that's a minor point. As it stands, the girls back home are missing him something awful, especially the new mothers, and I suspect that being gone so long, and missing his children's births, are starting to strain his relationships. Absence only makes the heart grow fonder for so long before it begins to erode a relationship completely. Night Watch is a big enough girl to realize that Silver has important jobs to do, but she's not wrong to press him to let them go and come back after he finishes this last one.
The other revelation that we got was that Luna's plan to breed more lunar unicorns into existence isn't working, and here I feel like we've been thrown a major plot twist disguised as a minor one. This is not a minor detail. Quite a few - possibly even most - of the lunar unicorn foals Silver is siring aren't surviving gestation. The question is why. We know that it's not because this type of magic can't work; Luna was able to bring about lunar pegasi, after all. So what's different here? Well, the obvious answer is the father: Silver. So what could this mean? Well, maybe something about him was off before he had that bangle attached to his balls (I'd presume that that thing heightened his fertility, so that means those pirates he knocked up will be just fine)...which would mean that Luna is calling things off just as it's starting to work.
That said, the issue of why he's different can't be ignored. It's not something fundamental, since he knocked up Night Watch and Twilight...but then, both of those children had very special circumstances involved in their gestation, so they're far from being test cases. So what is it, then? This is a mystery, and one directly connected to Silver. Is it just that male alicorns also have a hard time knocking up mares, the same way female alicorns are virtually impossible to impregnate? Is it some legacy of his human life? Something about his mangled aetheric net? There's a good story here, waiting to emerge...let's just hope that it does.
6244477 I'm amused you're focused on that particular part. That is, alas, not likely to see much more viewship before the lense before Silver takes care of other things, and gets himself home to the mess he left behind. He owes his wives something far more than wondering about the foals he sired with the assortment of mares. Your views, well, some of them are quite accurate!
It feels a bit mean to harsh on Silver for not standing in Luna's way harder. He was extremely distraught and distracted and she went 'I can solve everything!' and was gone shortly afterwards. It was Luna's bad. She will have to apologize properly.
accomplished
Like having yet another wet one all over Celestia?
But worth to fork then up through and through on the first opportunity since that's exactly what they do all the time to you. Worth to strike first when you can.
Oh, I just realized! Hooficure and other services for hooves aren't available for him anymore, are they? He can't remove these trinkets after all. Might be a problem if his hooves still growing. And yes, normal hooves grow like nails. Cause they are. Let's hope magic trinkets made feck how long ago know how to treat pony hovers properly.