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i so hope he will get that issue with his magic fixed soon
6159977 For what it's worth, I disagree. Drawbacks and disadvantages are often the most interesting aspects to a character.
There's a space between "bowl" and the comma after it.
Made of tougher "stuff" than she was.
horses on a flying carpet? I have no idea why that terrifies me
6160015 Fixed, and spotted another typo while re-reading. Total victory!
Faster by carriage, faster by flying carpet, even faster by flying carriage carpets! But, nothing beats portals!
Keep going! ;)
You Sir are killing me with these cliff hangers! I'm ready for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
What will happen with sheI's family? And will silver get Bottom leave his stick be? Great chapter but is it always with the cliffs?
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6160465 I do love me some cliffs.
...and that's why humans wear clothes most of the time.
Good thing Silver have somepony to take care of that boner and resulting blueballs.
On the other hand - Silver clearly want to fix Bottom's oversubmissiveness.
And we don't know how much of that in Bottom is a result of being a cocksock/fucktoy for pirates and how much is just him loving dicks so much.
I'd imagine more of being broken in and less of being that enthusiastic himself.
6160842 I would say it's a little bit of both.
this chapter is looking up for every one lets hope things stay good.
I only see one little problem coming up.
Shei telling her family about Aila that code go either way.
6160049 Silver prepares for his imminent arrival in Saddle Arabia, though it largely turns into him preparing most of his retinue for their arrival instead. It was notable that this chapter showcased to a "T" just how he relates to all three of them.
Bright Eyes had the least presence here, which fits perfectly, as she seems to have little use for Silver overall. While it was her idea that he take her in, I suspect that she made this decision more from necessity than desire. Of all of Silver's servants, she's the only one I can see possibly leaving him someday. For now, several gestating foals are weighing her down, but after that, I wonder what will become of her...Silver said he was going to master her, but at some point he's going to have to do more than just talk about doing that, and actually do it.
Bottom occupied the spotlight for most of this chapter, which wasn't surprising given how much help he needs adjusting to normal life. It was cute how embarrassed Silver was that he's Bottom's favorite meal. Is that Bottom's particular taste, or is it because of that cursed item Silver has? Either way, it was sweet of Silver to introduce him to vegetables, given that he won't be healthy just eating bread and whatever he can get from Silver.
I particularly liked how the story noted that Bottom was almost supernaturally aware of even the most subtle shift in Silver's moods. That makes total sense, considering that the mood of whomever he was servicing would be the deciding factor on what happened to him; as such, learning to read someone else's attitude and respond appropriately (or at least, his version of "appropriately") is absolutely a skill he'd develop as much as he could. As such, Silver has his work cut out for him, since he'll need to work hard to keep Bottom from reading his reactions like a book...though it might be interesting if Bottom's perceptiveness could be put to other uses.
More telling was Bottom's hopeful question about Silver loving him. It seems to be an inevitability at this point that Bottom is going to fall for Silver pretty hard. Similar to the situation with Tumble, it's difficult to imagine anything else happening, simply because that's the natural reaction to someone being so kind and so selfless after living in a such a miserable state for so long. Indeed, Bottom's surprising announcement of "I want to be with you," rather than staying out of sight during the visit, was telegraphing that development. Essentially, Silver has little choice but to get used to having male lovers now, since there's not going to be any way to separate Bottom from him, even if he does rehabilitate him.
Finally, poor Shei is afraid of facing her family, and the why of it is obvious. She's scared of their reaction, scared of the shame she's going to go through when her family's disgraced daughter comes back to say that their other daughter is dead, and she won't be returning the body. Of course Silver's going to go with her, I can't imagine her trying to do that all on her own. That's going to be a bundle of drama all by itself, and could go myriad possible ways.
But that's for later one. For now, onward the greeting from the royals!
6166924 Silver's doing his best. Of course, thing is, is it ultimately bad if the shapely unicorn wanders off, provided she doesn't return to piracy? Having her wander off and start a new life would be far from the worse outcome possible, provided she's treated well and has minimal reasons to be angry.
No, the attachments are much more complicated, and he's going to have to deal with Shei and Bottom somehow.
No typos just guffaws at the innuendo sort of implied in these too close statements. Silver going to find Bottom + He ran into Celestia = 'Sunbutt'. That odd choice of character name is going to play merry Tartarus with the rest of this book in a " I can't wait to get home to stroke my Pussy" 'Mrs Slocombe - Are you being served' kind of way. I needed that pick me up, Thanks.
6160898 Maybe Bottom should have been called Dobby if you're going to give him clothes. Nah then Silver would lose his servant & it would just cheese off J.K.R.