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Heh, typical male, doing last-minute shopping on the holiday's eve! Old habits die hard I guess?
We think our little servant-manager mare will be a little upset at getting gifts like that, but I think she'll appreciate it eventually...
Keep going! ;)
super good work DS it is funny as I was going to bed last night I was thinking of fast change.
Well the original herd is ALMOST back together *pours a little soda on the ground for little moony. She's gone but not forgotten*. Let us remember the dear departed this Hearth's Warming, which oddly comes after first winter but before Nightmare Night. Artificial seasonal variations be blessed by Celestia on high,
6565751 Technically they have her still, or at least most of her. She's remerged with Luna, who has become more and more absolutely adoring, at least insofar Silver is concerned. Perhaps never to her level...
6565245 Equestria timing is not something learned easily. Poor humans need to be constantly reminded what is coming up when. I think Silver did alright for herself, non?
6565834 si, at least she was lucky to find everything in one day!
Put an apostrophe in "Zecora's."
"Bookstore" is a compound word.
Finally! After what felt like much too long, Silver tracks down the missing part of her herd and brings her home.
I was a bit surprised that Fast Change was staying with Zecora, but given that Fast (and, for that matter, Night) doesn't seem to have formed any close friendships outside of her herd, I suppose that would have been true no matter whom she was shacking up with. I'm half-wondering if she and Zecora were intimate while she was staying there, given both Fast's amorous nature and that she had no reason to restrain herself, since she thought that her herd was disbanded. By the by, although Silver (and Fast) had no way of knowing about it, this would have been a good way to patch things up between Zecora and Night...but Zecora seems to not want to make the first move there, since she didn't say anything, though I'm not sure if that's from anger, feeling shunned, or because she wanted Fast and Silver to make up.
As it stands, I'm rather shocked by how Fast (in her disguise as Zecora) didn't react when she opened the door and saw her dead lover. Fast left before the resurrection attempt, so why wasn't she open-mouthed and bug-eyed when Silver showed up, alive again?
Still, their reunion was one that was sweet, if a bit odd for how it suddenly lurched from "I feel like I betrayed you" to "no more sexy fun times?!" and back again. As it stands, I'm still wondering when Fast is going to bring up the issues she mentioned before, like why Silver apparently didn't mention Fast when he was about to die (and how Fast found out about that...I still think Rainbow's to blame). That, and this is the second time Fast has left when things got tough, I imagine that there's going to be a lot of conversations to be had when she gets back, since Night Watch was likely to be very hurt by her leaving as well. As it stands, nobody here was truly in the wrong - everyone reacts to grief in their own way - but Fast's way of coping only made herself, and Night, and probably Twilight too, all the more miserable. This needs to be addressed, not just forgiven and forgotten.
Also, it's beginning to become a little conspicuous how Fast keeps going on about how they need a stallion to be a herd. That's true, but it's just a technicality...call their arrangement whatever they want, they're still all in a committed, emotionally-intimate relationship. Why is it so important to her that they meet the literal (and, I presume, legal) definition of a herd? What sort of recognition does she feel that they, and she, aren't getting unless they have that?
Ah well, all of the heavy stuff is for after the presents are opened tomorrow morning. For now, they can just be glad to be whole again...but that doesn't mean that there aren't discussions to be had. The idea that love is always a wonderful/peaceful/joyful feeling is one that I've never subscribed to; a lot of the time, love is difficult work, and sometimes it can be painful and frustrating. That's what makes the nicer parts so worthwhile.
capitalize
How bout socks? Then she can knock em off.
I don’t agree with winging.
Isn’t suppose to be “Heart’s Warming?” You put Hearth Warming.
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