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I think you may be lost.
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I’m glad you appreciated my insightful commentary!
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By the end, I'd say all the drama was worth it, but even I was raring to quit early, and I was pledged to read the whole thing.
2723321
Glad to hear that I've been of some service. It's good to know that I wasn't completely alone, either. Did you have the editor coming after you in the comments as well?
It was tragic, really. The setting was painfully interesting, the situations were brimming with potential, but the plot required the protagonists to be so irredeemably stupid...
Maybe, just maybe, if you can't imagine a way to make your plot happen without brain-melting levels of idiocy from your characters, you should go for a different plot.
And then there were those tens of thousands of words wasted rotting in prison...
Did things get any better after I left? I suspect I checked out right before Rarity caused a major diplomatic incident.