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BlackWarGreymon, created from 100 Control Spires to do evil, died being a hero.

But as death start to grip him, fate has other ideas. Now in Equestria, his life can start again. Making unforgettable friends, facing deadly foes and experience feelings and emotions he never thought would ever happen to him.

(note: this story takes place after the events in Digimon Adventure 2 episode BlackWarGreymon's Destiny and some time after MLP FIM season 4)

Chapters (49)
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Good start, but you need to drop the colors when a character speaks. for one, it gets annoying real fast, and its also hard to read for a few colors. Also, do not do this for thoughts.

(“Because he can sense trouble and had to get away from it?!”)

Italicize like so.

“Because he can sense trouble and had to get away from it?!

otherwise, good start.

I can't wait to find out how Black WarGreymon and the ponies are going to react to one another. I can see them thinking he's a dragon like Spike.

I like it so far but personally I prefer the japanese terms like Chosen instead of DigiDestined.

The same for the levels: Child/Rookie, Adult/Champion, Perfect/Ultimate, Ultimate/Mega.

I agree with KaijinZero the color text does get annoying and kinda of hurts my eyes too, especially the yellow tone text.

But as for this chapter I think it was great, nice way to set up the first encounter even though I can predict the outcome given BWarGreymon's appearance and the Mane Six's personalities. In other not a very good one. I know Fluttershy will be afraid of him, that's given. Dash will be in his face about his 'motives' and such. Pinkie will want to throw him a party. Rarity will complain about his attire. Applejack will be wary since he has two uh, gauntlets? with three sharp blades on each one. And Twilight.... The Digital Gods help him once she gets past being afraid and wants to learn everything about the Digital World and Digimon as well as about himself.

The same for when he meets the CMC.

Anyway I look forward to the next chapter!

mah so far.... I give it a 3/5

Just to give you readers a heads up. I've read some comments and by the time I add a new chapter, I will make some changes to future and existing chapters. I will ditch the use of colours in speech and italicize thoughts. That's all for now!

Ohhh! Time for a Black Wargreymon vs Tirek smack down!!!:rainbowdetermined2:

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This story is becoming very interesting so nice story so far man. And I'm curious to see what new abilities that Equestria have given Blackwargreymon maybe a Biomerge ability that will enable him to Biomerge with each of the mane 6 and Spike each Biomerge having different form and abilities similar to Megaman's cross fusions from the NT Warrior series like here a example: When he Biomerge with Rainbow Dash he gains some of her traits and abilities like her personality and speed with his body and armor is blue, Boy, I really don't want to see what would happen if Blackwargrey have Pinkie Pie's fourth wall breaking abilities.
And the latest chapter's ending reminds me of this pic:
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Yes... just... words cannot describe the level of awesomeness this chapter is.:rainbowkiss:
:pinkiehappy:Now to wait for the Princesses to show up.

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This story is excellent so far man. And I'm curious to see what others new abilities that Equestria have given Blackwargreymon maybe a Biomerge ability that will enable him to Biomerge with each of the mane 6 and Spike each Biomerge having different form and abilities similar to Megaman's cross fusions from the NT Warrior series and from the Digimon Tamers series like here some examples: When he Biomerge with Rainbow Dash he gains some of her traits and abilities like her personality and speed with his body and armor is blue, Boy, I really don't want to see what would happen if Blackwargreymon have Pinkie Pie's fourth wall breaking abilities.:pinkiecrazy:

6452091 or the biomerging could let him access the X antibody. Seriously look up wargreymon X. Dudes awesome!

:rainbowhuh:Is the new villan Apocalymon? :rainbowkiss:That would be so epic if it was!

6566289 Unfortunantly Apocolymon doesn't have horns

I get the feeling that we're talking about the ORIGINAL Digimon badguy :derpytongue2:

I eally loved this. Blackwargreymon gets little love and he was an amazing digimon and character. Also maybe in the future he can gain acces to his x form(blackwargreymonx) or a slide evolultion(Gaiomon/Samudramon)

I'm LOVING this fic so far, I can't wait for the next chapter, I wonder who that Digimon was at the end of this chapter

6625285 Because of the digimon timeline i can say its Devimon, Paimon, Apocalimon or Daemon. Still i hope its not Daemon because im kinda tired that the 7 great demon lords are the scapegoats in all digimon storied

I'm calling it now, BlackWarGreymon/Luna pairing! The ship is now under construction in my Head-Cannon Harbor.

6679901 possible. What if Luna gets a digivice? :derpyderp2:

Good chapter. Well ponyville has ascepted him but im looking foward to the metting with Celestia. Also i can say the other digimon and Tire's master is either Devimon or Daemon

Una

Good story. Hope you update soon!

BlackWarGreymon/Luna pairing!

Una

Good update! I love how Blackwargreymon's emotions keep evolving (pun not intended) its touching. Its also nice to see a badass being in the pony world who isn't underpowered. Update soon!

*Puts some antlers and bells on Kuro (BlackWarGreymon)* Jingle bells, jingle bells... *trails off*

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I reckon that this is a story with plenty of potential keep dis shit up

Those Dramon Destroyers are going to come in real handy next chapter.

good job. picture was alright, just could have used a slightly darker color, or if not a darker background color. was a little too pale to see easily

I wonder if magic could help him get stronger. Maybe not him learning magic but possibly work like the X-antibody? Because that'd take him from awesome to uber-awesome.

No you didn't, Twi, no you didn't.

Ok took the time to read all the way through before commenting. Sooo with out further adieu The story is funny and entertaining while still holding the serious feel much like the digimon series itself. And thank you for not making Celestia a bitch I know it's easy to paint her in a negative light but i'd like more stories that show her as the true kind and caring leader she was meant to be.

Now the negative of the story. In the begining you had BlackWarGreymon (BWG) say and do things that would be strongly out of character. For instance the Ridem cowboy bit he did to Tirek while funny is still not something he would have done. The Stong vs weak argument he made yes he would do, but antagonizing, gloating bit he again would never do. He didn't have a funny bone.

But that was the beginning and since then you have taken back to his roots a bit character wise. You've had him ponder things that would be expected of him due to his "What is my purpose?" attitude. Sooo good on ya. So bottom line thus far your only faults have been BWG's sense of humor, and various spelling mistakes. I don't care to point out spelling and grammer mistakes cuz i'm not a grammer nazi and they don't affect the story too badly.

next few chapters please I love this story please continue the story

You've got to continue. I've seen a lot of stories that had BlackWarGreymon back. But this is the best I've seen yet!

OH ..... MY ....... FUCKING........ GGGGOOOOODDDDD
This story is epicness incarnet awesome chapter hope their is more on the way

.......and this is what happens when a full adult dragon meets a creature that stared death in the face and made death himself back down out of fear......honestly I'm suprised he didn't finish the job via killing him since he must realize that once the dragon recovers he'll just return for a rematch.....but I'm guessing he lives cause of plot. Regardless, beautiful fight, love how he unlocked a new ability to Shrek the lizard in the dome, I'm excited to see how Celestia and the rest react to him returning victorious with a sleeping luna in his arms

Keep it up. This is getting good!

So freaking awesome! We need moar!

A little info for those who didn't know.

BlackWarGreymon used the ability "Dragon Crusher" in the PS1 game "Digimon Rumble Arena"

He also had another advantage in his search. During his time with Princess Celestia, he felt her power signature. And since Luna was her sister, recognizing her power signature would be easy.

I read this line and then I looked at the "Also Liked" list, for whatever reason, and saw that it had three DBZ fics in it. I laughed for 2 whole minutes.

Reads the "looking into each other's eyes" seen
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‘Impossible. It’s just an old dragon’s tale. But could it be true? Could he be… the Demon Lord?’

:rainbowderp:Yes. Just.... yes.

6649339 it's Diaboromon of the first and second movies.:trollestia:

The ships commence!!!!!

Wow. Great job, Discord. Important info lost to the chaotic mind you have...

Finally a new chapter man thank you i love this fic hope u make more

Looks like Rainbow has some real competition now.

well using my knowledge of Digimon, the digimon that Discord was talking about would have to be...... Myotismon

Great job as always keep it up!

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