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As a wise man once said, "Let's kill da ho. Beetch!!!"

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A young man goes to a convention and finds himself in Equestria with the powers of a Kamen Rider. Not just one though, ten of them. And he'll need that power to fight the hordes of monsters lurking in the shadows. Can he face this threat? And can he protect the ponies that call him friend? The answer to both of those questions is:
Henshin!
(Now with co-writer: shagohad12 )
Edited by: Voldine
(A Kamen Rider Decade Displaced fic)
(All images and characters belong to their original owners.)

Chapters (54)
Comments ( 695 )

I skimmed this fic.
Chapter 1:
You meet the protagonist and his parents. Protagonist get sent to Equestria via Con. I doubt we will hear from his parents anytime soon.
Chapter 2:
Protagonist wakes up in hospital, doesn't know how he got there. Twilight invites him to live at her place. Becomes a super hero.

Skimmed it because Wyatt (the protagonist) is a stranger to me in chapter 1. I was curious about what kind of relationship he has with his parents (something I haven't seen in the dis-fics I've read). I was actually kind of disappointed, all I know is that they were both down with him going to the con. Based on their conversation with their son I suspect Wyatt to be very young, maybe twelve, no older than 16 at least.

To sum up:
The protagonist is nothing to me, I don't feel invested in him.

Advice:
Focus on your character rather than moving the story forwards. I feel focusing on the protagonist's relationship with his parents in the opening chapter. A rewrite may be in order.

6594867 I'll keep that in mind, thank you for the advice.

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Have to agree wit that but I'm still going to stick around. Mainly because, Decade was the Rider that got me started watching Kamen Rider and Super Sentai and I want to see where this goes.

Other then that, keep up the good work!

this is making me so nostalgic for the 90's tv series all over again, I cant wait to see more

6594867 I revised the first chapter if you're interested on giving me your thoughts.

I love Kamen Rider and Decade is my first and favorite to learn the Kamen rider universe
plus Decade has the powers of all the main riders on cards and while Diend has the side rider characters.

Interesting, so the Displaced ride cards would be how he eventually calls out others. My guess is the tokens would merge with the cards, or images of the specific Displaced appear on the card after they've been summoned and sent back.

I wish to crossover with you, take my token, good story by the way.

6705400 Thanks, but I still have to get approved by the Displaced mods.

6705413 It looks like you will to me, let me know when you are.

6705420 You did message a moderator right?

6728926 Yeah, still waiting to hear from them.

6797812 I mean, he got the power of the character he was dressed as. Decade uses the powers of the 9 other Riders of the Heisei era that came before him through cards that he inserts into his belt. And he is only able to use the other Riders' powers one at a time.

It is the mark of an exceptionally poor reporter to tell an audience what they should think. Which is to say, I have never encountered someone portraying a paranormal reporter as a kook quite as succinctly as you have without defaulting to the one-word soundbite of 'Aliens' or 'Bigfoot'. Well done.

Very interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Yeah! I'm also hopping for another chapter to released soon, I'm very curious about the Displace Ride cards. Does this means we'll see other Riders like Kuuga or Den-o in the story? If so I'm very excited to see the reaction of the main six if Wyatt turns each of them into their perspective Final Form Ride since that's one of Decade's specialty.

Due seriously. Is Wyat the only Rider in Equestria or what!? When will another chapter be out

13 months and next chapter is still not here....
Y'know, if the story's on Hiatus, you can switch out the "Incomplete" tab with the "On Hiatus" tab. Seriously, I think your readers deserve an explanation.

Alright, great to see this back!

Shago tells me you've been working with him. Can't wait to see more!

Glad to see this started up again. And what a great chapter to start out with.

The fight scenes were really well done. The character development for Wyatt was really good. He already accepted his full hero job. And the princesses have some closer.

But there's still the question, who is Oni?

The answer to both of those questions is:
Henshin!

A Go Go Baby! ... Sorry.

8409091 Never apologize for a Viewtiful Joe reference. They're always welcome here. :raritywink:

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Viewtiful Joe is my fave. He is so cool!

8409097 Agreed, loved both his games. He gets ten Red Hot Kicks outta ten from me.

Glad to see this is back in gear!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
(BTW Decade is my favorite Kamen Rider)

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Same! Red Hot Rumble was boring but Double Trouble was awesome!

Is... is Daring going to become Kamen Rider Skull?

Ore... SANJOU!

I read the Sargent Pepper scene to my dad earlier and he had a good hard laugh at the scene and its reference! XD

8409238 Glad you and your dad liked that scene. I know Shago and I got a good laugh out of it too. :pinkiehappy:

Well. This is getting unexpectedly intense.

Man, you're doing all the Rider's aint ya?

This story is really starting to shape up.
I'm rather intrigued to see where all of these threads are going.

So two more Riders enter the stage. OOO makes way too much sense not to give them to the Dragons, and Hibiki... I've never watched Hibiki, except for his episode in Decade. Old world themes maybe?

And Kamen Rider OOO reference!
... man this is getting exciting!

Not bad, having a lost fight is always a nice way to show that transformations doesn't necessarily equal a win, but there better be something important planned or else that aside where Wyatt ran off into the bathroom to suddenly bemoan leaving ... someone(s) will be something of a black stain on the story.

“As do I. There is one more thing she gave me.” Celestia reached into her dress, offering him a trio of coins. Unlike the others, these were ringed with gold. Each was a different color, red, green and yellow, and depicted a different animal.

His nostrils flared again but his pupils remained unchanged. “Those ones feel different from the others,” he commented. “What are all these coins?”

“I don’t know, Spike.” She took his hand, placing the coins in it. “But, they were hers, and now they're yours.”

Henshin Spike!! That would be so cool!

I thought you said you weren't going to do all the Riders, I suppose what you're actually doing is most of them.

sweet kamen rider w and decade awesome

YES OOO THIS IS AWESOME

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Is that crossover still open?

I had a blast doing this crossover, and I wouldn't be surprised if readers shipped Wyatt and Cassie, XD

interesting can't wit to see more

pinkies dad is skull I'm calling it now. it was the way he talked and he is an old earth pony

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yep, definitely pinkie's family mainly due to the fact that gaia memories come from the earth, and with rock farmers, who could be closer to the earth?. Gray mare would be any of the sisters, though money is on Maud as she seems the science-y one of the trio. Makes me wonder who Accel would be regarding that group.

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