Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Ok, this chapter was nice. Really like the new depiction of Blueblood as an asshole that is loyal to the crown and acts as an intermediary between the royals and the nobility as he kinda reminds me of the Blueblood from My Best Friend Luna. BTW, does that mean that the previous scenes with Blueblooe will be altered? Also, I laughed at how synchronized Moonlight and Silver act around each other and how they seem to have a rivalry over Thomas. Thanks for the amazing chapter.
BTW, two questions I want to ask. 1) What did Blueblood meant by the "You are welcome" comment to Talon that left her so flustered? Did it had to do with Celestia's punishment? Will we ever find out what Leste did to Talon to discipline her?
2) Why do Moonlight and Silver have such a strong rivalry?
7220512 Because of the harem anime rule of picking up chicks...women are attracted to the guy that wants nothing to do with this shit.
I really want Thomas to teach the ponies this song while he's dressed up:
Im waiting to see if Blueblood now contines along the line of actually being not just useful, but capable, which among stories is so rare as to be there when Tirek screwed Discover so hard he gave him a family.
With the blades, wouldnt it be Freddy Couger? Or was that his sister, Freddie Couger, who seduced the unknowing into the back alleys before taking them for everything they had?
I wonder if anyone is up for a remix of Lunas song, with Christopher Lee instead. I mean, you want a haunted house? might as well go for The Black Duke and The White Duke.
7220512 Those past scenes will not be altered. I think my Blue Blood is just going to be the sort who craves a lot of negative attention. The other concubines are aware of this and play along.
Some things are best left unsaid.
It just sort of happened as I wrote them and I decided to roll with it.
7220554 Just wait and see.
So you've retconned Blueblood, you realize for that to be possible you would have to change the scene that made him a complete tool right? You know, the scene that was responsible for the first three attendants getting expelled? And provided the foundation for their vendetta against Thomas which you have brought forward into a position of prominence with the Firestorm sub plot? Frankly the scene that damned Blueblood is too deeply tied to later events to actually retcon without a major rewrite of several scenes.
7220624 I'm rationalizing that Blueblood likes the negative attention and goes out of his way to make an ass of himself sometimes, especially when asked to do so by the royal family.
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Good, because if you wasted this golden opportunity, I'd have to track you down and smack you.
Wow that was cray i hope blue butt is the victim of the chimp toss haha
7220654 next few chapters please
7220654 So, you're just retconning his motives? Then you need to find a way to show his motives around that scene. Perhaps a short scene from his perspective after the confrontation with Luna? If the character's motives have a significant impact on their character we need to see it not just be told in a AN... though that does fix the issue of the Butterfly Effect screwing with later events.
Remember, the contents of an AN are not canon to the story. Only what is in the story is canon... hell the AN could be a blatant lie to throw us off the trail prior to a big reveal.
i have always thought of blueblood acted like that because it's a noble thing and almost every pony sees him as "prince blueblood" and not simply blueblood.
Sweet i love it when BB is more than a cheap gag charecter or a 2 bit villian. There is so much potental with him, both good and bad.
Midnight was the guard right? That ending says that she knows she likes Thomas, right? Am I misreading these events, or confusing characters?
7220891 No, you got them right.
a vary good chapter and it sounds as if fun is a foot.
In4 Silver is the one giving Moonlight her first cozy moment with Thomas.
It is Krueger, not Crougar.
Someday I'll find a HiE where the human alien to Equestria shows up for Nightmare Night as... an Alien..
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I sense a lot of funny shenanigans in the next chapters.
NOOOOO don't give bluebitch redeeming qualities.
He exist to be hated by all
7220781 Check out my patreon for a bunch of future chapters.
7220794 We shall see.
7220891 Midnight Chain is a former attendant, not a guard.
7221865 Perhaps.
7221898 He's hated enough everywhere else. After reading more, even I got sick of it and decided to do something different.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Finally, someone else who doesn't depict Blueblood as a total, one-dimensional jerk! I mean, yeah, he's an asshole, but he should at least be shown as a competent one. For that, I thank you.
7222736 Full agreement and appreciation.
This was 100% awesom even with blue ballsAnd I'm soo hyped looks like Moonlight is f8nlly making her move..
7220554 that song kept repeating over and in my head when I read Thomas' costume description
earth pony or unicorn
That's out of the way, I'm worried about Moonlight. I mean, if her relationship with Silver is bad now, how is she going to happen Silver becoming officially a concubine?
I think that blue blood has something in mind, this pompous arrogant fool, never does any good if not an end to itself. however I am very curious, and I will not see forward to see how there will be the Night of Nightmares.
Er small my curiosity. since I'm on the subject, I think that in the future, a clop with Moon in version, Nightmare Moon would fit ^^.
Great job as always.
ch64
I wonder if ponies have to contend with ticks in this world, Uh! Spoke too soon, here's one now...
Masquerade
'Krueger' or am I missing something?
Like these guys?
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I know they aren't but 'sisters from another mother' seems a fitting jibe.
Ok, I get that he's the badguy (if not an altogether bad guy) but really, that's just unnecessarily mean.
Hell, I know plenty of adults who'd rather the first option.
Does a failed party make him really angry?
8120304 I see what you did there
.....Just fuck already!!!!
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Yeah. I was real good at building this up, wasn't I.
So why doesn't Moonlight like Silver Bell again?
In any case, time to go to a party
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Call it over protectiveness.
Silver's accent went from Prench to Germane.