Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Cheers! Happy Thursday. This was a welcome break from the three projects I have due today. You rock.
I guess that counts for magical spells and the likes aswell. If ponies can't even think past those few positions, then I doubt it that they would have thought about alot of ways to harnass combat spells and the like.
Nice a great chapter as always.im really enjoying how things are geoing so far,i just hope you dont include another male as it just doesent sit well with me. but its your story and im sure ill enjoy it regardless.
For some odd reason, I'm skeptical about this new guy. There's something about him that doesn't sit right with me.
Very suspicious indeed.
Great chapter. Love fe how the females are attracted to Thimas' knowledge about sex. The new character makes me curious to know more about him.
ok this story just found a hole new level of interesting.
and we have a Villon coming to the front I am super interested as to ware this is going.
7016975 Very much indeed. *sage nod*
You know what, the size disparity between Luna and Thomas is not exactly accurate for reference. But a naughty bad idea, Moonlight should "experince" The position with Thomas. With clothes on ofcourse, but somethings just need to be experienced first hand in order to describe it well.
That was a sweet and awesome read it is so awesome howclosethey are getting together.
So I bet that the orange pony is actually Moonlights dad. That is just my guess anyway. Not sure how he lost an arm, but anyway can't wait to see if I am right should be fun no matter what he actually is.
7016859 Yes. Yes I do. Thank you for noticing.
7016883 Ponies in general aren't all that creative. A few geniuses pop up now and then, but there's very little innovation.
7016918 I'm honestly still iffy on that. However, one thing that I can say for sure is that it won't be happening for a long time.
7016975 Same here. You'd almost think he were a spy or something.
7017093 What's so villainous about spying on people in a semi-public library?
7017418 Patience.
I think its a good thing Thomas hasnt read, or at least looked through the Kama Sutra, Im pretty sure that only Discrd and Pinkie could carry out All the positions, and Ill leave that nightmare to demonstrating to the occupants of Tarterus what they face next time they leave their nice safe prison.
7017784 not a thing it all depends ware it leads from there.
Hmmm...
I like the way you introduced an ambiguous suspicious character without giving any real indication of good or bad other than discreet spying. While probabilities suggest Firestorm is going to be some kind of antagonist, there's nothing certain yet. The mystery makes him appear quite interesting. Really looking forward to seeing what his reasons for spying and his job are.
Continuing to enjoy this story a great deal.
7017768 Highly possible. Either he's hired by someone, or he's a part of a organisation?
7018163 And I look forward to fleshing it all out.
This new character puzzles me think of think of it as another reviewer that this FireStorm is the father of Moonlight, but consider the possibility that he could be considered a threat to Thomas Equestria.
Will not see the time to learn more.
Two chapters in a week?!
Oh My Gods ! I just noticed !
But you are writing a fictiom about two characters writing a fiction !
This is the fic-ception !
Anyway, gimme mooooooore !
7017767 well its all good in any case i just like the dynamic between these three as it is and i feel adding more could upset that but as i said the choices are yours
Ho my Glowing Luna YES! All Hail The princess of the Night and this Author!
7022205 Much appreciated. Also... glowing Luna? I may experiment with that.
7023155 Gladly to be at your service sir
Will the story they're writing actually be released on this site?
7024102 Fraid not. It's more of a background prop.
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word missing (oh Leste is a word missing!! )
Dam? Skippy? You asked for it! (sorry, Aussie humour!)
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Comma
*roles
Oooh boy, this is spicy. Unless I'm reading this wrong. In which case, this is still spicy, but not as spicy.
:0 oh man, a mystery! Some outside conflict again! This'll be good...
You sly dog, holy shit.
:/ Nvmind
Nice chapter.
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Yes, him sitting on her lap putting the base of his cock above her waist line and pointing up and her cunt well below his ass facing down totally works!
195.
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Huh. I thought there were more.
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That's debatable depending on who recognizes whom. It could be as you said atleast 195 or at most 206
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I could have sworn that there were over 300 countries recognized by the UN, but a chunk of them could be territories on principalities.
In the name of science can be used to justify a lot of things.
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On top of the countries not recognized, too
EDIT: Tf? I’m pretty sure I was replying to somebody else, idk how it tagged this guy’s comment