Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Wow, Talon is really perceptive if she realized that the job as a Royal concubine has a deeper meaning than just sleeping with Celestia. Also, I didn't realize that she used to be married, thrice to be exact. Still, I feel bad for a Thomas' self-esteem since he doesn't think that Luna likes him. Amazing job, as usual.
Great chapter, but wow Thomas needs a confidence boost, and a good smack on the back of the head to clear those negative thoughts out of his head. Sorry Thomas but dude seriously the voice in the back of your head is reminding you of those times for a reason.
They missed the opportunity to take Thomas to a sex shop.
6200139 I'd hardly call it perceptive if she's been doing it for 6 years, and had a run down before accepting it.
Appreciated.
6200162 It's more than a self confidence issue, but I'm glad you like it.
6200215 Royalty are held to different standards.
6200264 Both are applicable.
6200763 Umm... probably not.
6200959 I know. I wanted to go there, but couldn't quite work it in. Maybe next time.
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Depression will do that to you. Replaces your self-worth with doubt, pity, and hatred. Can't be smacked out, either. You have to pick and chew through every line of emotion and f*cked up logic to break up the thoughts; and even then, new problems pop up- and to prevent that, you have to go through an entire restructuring of the emotions so you can fight the doubts yourself.
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How does extraneous apply in this situation?
6201698 Thanks for realizing the problem.
6201728 Don't do anything too stressful, but also don't do anything you really shouldn't and get yourself in trouble.
6202481
I think you and I might be working off of different dictionaries.
That was a good read ,Shit got real.i hope he will get promuted to coltfrind soon.
6202596 Just wait till you find out where he actually stands with her.
6204535 Good to hear.
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
6209020 The sentiment is appreciated. Take solace in the knowledge that I intend to post weekly and have already written several chapters ahead. Also, we haven't even gotten to the sex tag line yet, so there's that to look forward to.
Also, thanks for the favorite.
I hope Moonlight and Thomas get together PLEASE MAKE IT HAPPEN!
6209154 Why not Talon? And where's the love for Luna? That's what the story's about, after all.
This was a very interesting chapter. I can see why Thomas has doubts and insecurities. He's in a completely different society than he is used to. I don't remember if he ever had any type of relationship before. Plus, he is a completely different species. He has a lot to work through.
6212331 You are not alone in that.
6212389 That and one other big thing that should become apparent over time.
6212490 If you even try, I'll send you to Fluttershy's shed.
Don't worry i already blew up that shed infested fuck stand, and i even mutilated Fluttershy's body to pieces hahahahahahhaha
6218856 I don't care to speak to you anymore.
Good, hope you enjoyed that little show i put on for everyone in this god forsaken comment section, Nightmares are coming, and the end is near.
6202619 oh I can't wait to find out .
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Man, you miss a good opportunity to make a joke about Fancy Pants not wearing any pants. And is Derpy gonna make an appearance in this story?
Did he ever go to meet blueblood?
Oh god that's the main conflict? The protagonist waffling and psyching himself out of any kind of emotional attachment when that attachment is exactly why he got that job in the first place? That goes beyond being thick and enters into the realm of painful to witness, due in part to the deep-seated need to throttle the man.
Frankly I hope that isn't the case. It's over-used and just annoying to encounter. I mean yeah the running gag is men are idiots about feelings but it's.. not really funny, not really true, and not really enjoyable to read. I mean romantic tension can be nice but at the same time when it's completely one-sided and due to stupidity rather than anything else, it's just "Wow, he or she is after a complete idiot."
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I have to agree.
Such things can be rather painful to read. In some cases it was so overused and ridiculous that it made me stop reading entirely and look for something else because the "Romance" in those stories seemed to only consist of struggle and denseness for way too long.
Leave it to Grey to figure a way to make being a concubine complicated, but in a more interesting way. I await more.
7878826 Thank you. To be honest, the story has largely written itself with me along for the ride as much as my readers.
6209434 I think they'd make a good trio herd, good blend of personalities.
Have a hankering for Neapolitan myself occasionally, as long as it has a decent chocolate, some are downright horrible.
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This is always a good one.
Then a local made Lime flavoured,
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7895852 Just wait and see how things play out. Also, if you're interested in helping me out as an editor, keep it up.
A solid argument, firmly logical.
He sounds like his high school schedule just got changed around.
If this doesn't eventually lead into a "The hammer is my penis" joke, I will be very disappointed in you.
And thus began the rise of Nightmare Hooman.
Wow.
You wasn't kidding when you said depression.
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That, right there, is a very dangerous thought process. And not the good kind of dangerous.
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Yup, and all too common.
6212490
Oi, cut it out with that edgy shit. That shit is more annoying then disturbing