Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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It was predictable; as the only current member of Luna´s harem, Thomas will be roped into politics and manipulations from the Night Court. This said, Velvet was pitifully obvious in her intent. Did she seriously think Thomas was an actual teen, who would fall for the old "I have boobs, you must obey"? At least she should have probed him a little, being a member of a unknown specie.
Plot twist!
Blueblood had a romantic dinner all set up, but Thomas didn't show.
Well, I for one hope he'll have more going for him than just chew toy joke character the protagonist can abuse whenever he wants to without any logical consequences. That happens far too often, unfortunately.
Story is still very good. Very much enjoying it... I just know something is about to give though in some way... He has already been made a target by this Lace mare which i'm sure will come back to get at him somehow...
Along with Blueblood which could also turn out to be a problem someday.... Aside from that I'm not sure entirely what will happen next... All I know is that I'm really enjoying the set up you are providing thus far in this story....
It's nice to see Thomas being so loyal to Luna and the offscreen scen where he acts LK and sings Can You Feel The Love Tonigt was romantically sweet.
6392108 It has already been established that Thomas looks young by pony standards, so it's only logical that yes, she would think that plan would work.
6392331 I can safely say that this will not happen. Just wait till next chapter to find out.
6392621 Something big is coming, but not for a while. Blueblood, will return next chapter.
6393045 I thought so
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That's reassuring! I've seen so many stories where Blueblood looks at the human OC, whines to have him executed to his aunts, and then gets beaten up a lot without anyone batting an eye... it's become a little repetitive.
6393178 Um... It's not exactly like that.
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Calling a human an "animal".
Not to be disrespectful, but haven't the ponies looked in the mirror lately? I'm pretty sure that they are what we humans prefer as animals because they have fur and we don't.
And the song is a really heartwarming melody.
6393995 dude one word perspective
6393995 That's a culturally subjective thing. Chimps look like us, yet we call them animals. Hell, we used to call black people animals.
That's why I chose it.
6393995 Matter of perspective- given they've never seen a human before? This would be a standard reaction. Ponies don't see themselves as 'animals', like humans do, they see themselves as any other sentient species on the planet.
6393995 plus ya know we are animals...unless your a tree
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A tree, huh?.
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I know. In Equestria, the ponies are sentient creatures in their own way. I'm merely stating a fact from Earth's perspective. Just talking.
6397638 lolz
6398368 That's because this is the prologue and the protagonist hasn't gotten used to the native nouns. The next chapter fixes that.
6399057 The first is just a thing I'm in to. It'll be a while, but I'll experiment with one chapter to gauge people's reactions. If it's too negative, I'll just imply it later.
6399107 Yeah. Isn't that suspicious. It's almost like I'm setting up for something
6399170 Just finished reading it. How long til they finally just admit their feelings for each other? Could also use more mares not wearing any clothes. I know they're nobles but they wear clothes way too much.
I finally take the time to read this chapter !
And I, the Ghost Pony Rider, find that this chapter is mostly entertaining !
I love the scene with the mare who try to take advantage of Thomas' position. You should develop that kind of stuff. And I'm sure your planing to do so.
That was great I got to see and learn more about them.
I loved that ending. I dislike those elitist. I hope Thomas and Luna have a very thorough talk and soon. This can't be good for Thomas' self-esteem.
Wow! He is a wimp! I would be boiling POed at the mere suggestions by the zoo staff themselves, much less the bigots calling for "unknown species" to be sent to the zoo or dropped in the wild forthwith. He has obvious hands -just like that world's donkies, minotaurs, griffons, etc... If I was any of those non-pony citizens, I'd be snowing the newspapers and royals with angry letters about Poncy Ponies once again assuming a bipedal non-pony with hands is an animal just like their other previous "First contacts" in their history...
Bud, not butt. Sorry, that kind of thing bugs me.
6478046 I have some surplus agent orange. And some napalm, too! Can I help? Or do you need less cancer and burning and more pinpoint accuracy?
and here come the endless Turnip requests.
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Don't know about cougar pony, more of an ocelot!
7896275 Good one.
Suddenly, turians?
*conceding
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Same thought about the chapter title.
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To be completely fair I'd rather not be represented by mainly rich snobs, although that is probably most fo the modern political climate.
I would have made the suggestion that the night workers don’t get overtime pay for just working night, but instead get a pay increase from what the normal is. Like if it’s 15 bits normally maybe 18 or something
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They're still experimenting with different strategies.
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I was thinking on somewhat similar lines- Thomas has experience with the human world, but perhaps not night shifts. He could’ve added an anecdote that those that work nights get a bit more on top of regular pay, and any pony or person that works over a certain amount of time in a week would get overtime regardless of day or night shifts.
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Plus just making assumptions about him being animal when to anyone who bothered paying attention they would have seen plenty of signs that he was a person not an animal is pretty stupid. Fluttershy at least meant no harm and probably just saw something unknown and assumed it must be a new animal.