Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Wow, I got to say that Thomas rescuing Apple Bloom and kissing Twilight to reboot her brain was awesome, especially with how it sent Moonlight blushing. Likewise, watching Talon and Moonlight organize a defense against the Ursa was awesome. The tidbit of Pinkie's explanation was confusing yet intriguing. Hope to learn more about it.
Pinkie being Pinkie?
Nope, nothing wrong there, makes perfect sense to me.
Maybe I should actually try reading the story to see what she meant.
M/L Space Theory is weird.
Thomas gave Twilight a quick script peek?
Good to see that Talon's efforts and lessons aren't being wasted. Way to go Thomas!
Forgot to ask, Moonlight's reaction to Twilight finding the kiss inspiring. Does she blush because she ships Twilight or because she thinks Thomas could help her with her novel via inspirational kisses?
6638746 Always happy to please my fans. But yes, that Pinkie thing will make sense... eventually.
6638756 That story is ongoing, so don't expect things to make sense right away.
More like he zapped her brain to get it into overdrive.
6638758 True, but I'm almost certain she never saw this coming.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
6638882 More like it's just something she really didn't see coming and it's kinda messing with her feelings at the moment.
Good chapter is good, I'm not entirely sure how I like the rafrancing of another story but I'll roll with it... I kinda wonder what will happen next with AB, He was thinking that he picked her up and run with her; Ohh Will little bloom have her first crush weee! Anyway its an intersting story and I'm still reading it its really good, Cant wait to see what happens next time on Horse People go Naked Z!!!
6639056 Always happy to entertain.
"...for his lips to meet hers."
goddamn waifu steal'ers
also ya got your thumbs up
x 5
Might wanna hunt those down with a quick 'find & replace all' command!
Let me know if you'd ever like another pair of eyes on your work, I'd be happy to help.
WOW/OMGthat was a awesome beyond awesome read ,thomus realy man up in a awesome way ,It wss awesome how he saved Applebloom and snaped Twilight in to doing what she needed to do.I hope she joins the herd and maybe applejack to in the future . I can't wait to see whats next.
Awesome chapter, but new questions about Thomas. Like what was that kiss spark? What was the tingle? What was going on when he saved Applebloom? Gonna be looking forward to the next few chapters greatly.
6639620 I think there's a spray for that.
6639688 That's not the plural? To be honest, it varies between works so I never thought there was any consensus.
6639778 Glad to hear it.
6640642 lol
6640534 The last one I can answer as an adrenaline rush.
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The most common version is "pegasi".
Though I prefer to refer to them as "pterippi", which is the plural of "pterippus", which means "winged horse", since Pegasus was the personal name of the most famous horse that had wings and not his species. He was the only one of his kind and all.
Though since canon refers to them as "pegasus ponies" you can only get away with so much... .
Hope AB doesn't get too bad of a crush on the human.
I think Smartycorn and Kissybeak need to be brought in on the while "Thomas has outsider knowledge" secret.
I need a better nickname for Talon... .
6640648 Pegasi is the plural I've seen the most.
I like to imagine pinkie saying that really really fast. Not enough fanfics with pinkie include her habit of long confusing explanations
This sorta reminds me of a concept I have running for the 3 different stories I am developing/ writing where pinkie basically IS the same character in all of them despite them being in different worlds. Same mind. She keeps occasionally referring to the events in the other stories or mixing things up by accident due to how differently things work out in each world and how some ponies do things differently even while the shows events move forward more or less the same.
It's rather challenging but a lot of fun doing pinkie this way
6641583 That does sound complicated, especially give how different some Pinkies act.
Looks like I'm not the only writer thinking the pony sub-species pinkius piecus can see multiple timelines when the crucial keystone moments arrive that cause the likely events-to-come.
Hmm, I suddenly start to wonder if in "Swarm of the Century", the reason she didn't physically grab anypony and explain about Parasprites and what the
bluepink blazes she was doing, was she had seen so many timeline variations of that moment, she thought she had...Thomas is a supa hero now ! 8D
6642771 Tis possible.
6643821 No he is not... yet.
Where was Big Mac?
One thing I really don't like is when author's mention something in one story that happened in another without any warning in the description. At least you mentioned and linked the story the event occurred in and I'm thankful for that. I hope nothing that happens in that story affects anything that happens in this one.
6647312 That was left in after an edit.
All that mattered is that affected Pinkie's one reaction. Nothing else.
Oh, no no no no no!!! I've caught up to current! Now I have to wait for each chapter to appear.
6648282 I feel your pain.
6642771 Did you know that Pinkieus Piecus is actually a sub species of Biggus Dickus.
Ok, so Pinkie acted like a shithead, and her excuse for what happened is that you were a shithead to me in another reality?
I know that, this being Pinkie Pie, there's a good chance that's a decent excuse, but I would point out that that is how crazy people talk. When it's harmless, that's one thing, that's just "Pinkie being Pinkie". When it's something like this, where peoples feelings are involved? Now we're in actual crazy territory. If I were Thomas, I'd be worried about the other infamous fiction that's out there where Pinkie isn't so nice and innocent. Even if you take what she said at face value, what happens if there was an alternate reality where Thomas was evil and needed to be stopped. What's to stop Pinkie from deciding to hurt him, to prevent him from doing something?
These are things Thomas needs to consider. I know if I were him, I'd stay as far the fuck away from Pinkie Pie as I could.
Because that's what you do when someone is unpredictable, crazy, and has the potential to become violent.
Is Thomas going to get powers
7683150 Yet to be decided.
7683604 hope he does at some point, even if its just a size and strength boost so he is on par with an earth pony. I like this story, but I wish he wasn't basically the size of a foal by comparison to everyone.
'Pegasi' plus several other incidences. (I've noticed a couple stories using 'pegasui' but as these stories were so grammatically challenged, I mean several hundred errors challenged, I don't thing the authors knew one mistake from another.)
Just waiting for Thomas to cop this next...
pinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw2881-Ponies_chanting_strip.gif
7900662 Yeah, I was really bad at this one. As it turns out, I'd gone back and fixed everything back in my Word doc, but seem to have forgotten to make the changes in the main story.
A Big MT toaster, at that.
*Your, and a comma after you.
That might be a little overly harsh.
Hmm ... "Thank Faust my house is still intact!"?
Please don't tell me the plot twist is "Thomas is secretly Discord."
8119273 It was actually a loose reference to an as yet unspecified connection between this story and another.
...scary...I can actually follow what pinkie says.
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Impressive. Care to say it back to me?
Pinkie Pie's explanation gave me a migraine...
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I guess that counts as a success on my end.