Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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I really don't like LONG chapters.
Thomas's biggest problem was that it was so easy for him to be totally disproportionate in his response through totally different work philosophies.
He could have just done totally nothing.
The Earth Pony Dowsing rods make me think of a cross between Hydroponics, and Commercial Death Field crop fertilisation, where excesssive fertiliser liquids and pellets are injected into the soil through equivalent to seed drills? Latest designs use AI tractors linked with IR crop and soil sensors and GPS positioning compareing with satelite scans or maybe custom drones of the fields?
Okay, who the hell is Firestorm and his group? Yeah, Tomas is an unknown with a different perspective, but surely he isn’t that dangerous?
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I just double checked and he'll be the primary focus of 126.
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I appreciate that, and see your point. I'm aware of these problems and will hopefully be addressing them in due course.
I wonder why mystery woman is mad that thomas joked about telling villains to not act retarded.
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She sees Thomas as a threat. While not physically or magical, Thomas could bring danger to Equestria. Truth be told any human could. Ponies are peaceful with few instances of violence in their history. Humans are the opposite. We don't shy away from conflict, nor do we hide it. Even with Thomas passive demure, you can see the influence our rough culture has on him. I get the feeling this mare is going to do something rash involving Thomas.
Firestorm and co I feel are about to find out the Luna and Celestia are not as naive as they think especially when dealing with the violence and treachery dispalyed in canon history of mlp.
this was great, loot foreword to next
“The hardest person to beat is yourself. Nobody knows how to kick your ass better than you do.”
-‘Iron’ Mike Tyson
Honey is really doing him good in the future for helping him like that.
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Probably someone who takes their job (which may or may not deal with such bad guys) a bit too seriously.
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This new lady thinks the princesses have gone soft in these times of peace. In my version of the story, there have been wars and other hardships. Luna is especially renowned for her fighting prowess. However, the princesses do have a bias in this instance, one that could be viewed as a weakness.
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Always glad to hear. Thank you.
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Considering how well this is going over, I'll have to expand on this for future installments.
As long as it is Luna’s plot I don’t see the problem here.
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Good thing this is not a dark story because if Equestrian villians were a little more competent they could probably kidnap Thomas and use any kind of despicable method in their power to force dangerous information out of him, the kind that could put Equestria in big peril.
I can only imagine the stress this could put on the minds of the harem members, specially Moonlight because not only is she his lead mare but also for her desire to protect him as his personal royal guard.
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The problem is all the brown nosing petitioners. It's mostly just one class of citizen and Honey is looking to diversify that outlook.
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Then don't read them.
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Truthfully as long any people have good and bad in them anyone can bring great good or bad. Sometimes even well meaning people can be idiots. Consider the revolution war if both sides had willing to compromise on the issues maybe things would be different today. But since England didn't want to hear our side we couldn't even being to compromise with them. They probably thought they were totally in the right and didn't really think that compromise could be better for everyone. But because of pride a mistake was made that change things.
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A certain changeling queen comes to mind as a prime suspect. Even “just” the canon version isn’t entirely incompetent, and while Thomas doubtlessly knows about her, he’d likely have some trouble identifying her in disguise unless she were to act so characteristically “her” that the penny just had to drop immediately. (This is especially true if her disguise was sufficiently unfamiliar to him that he simply couldn’t tell whether or not she was acting “out of character”, in and of itself.) Plus, in a pinch she still has mind control as a possible trump card.
Not to mention that in this universe one reason for her to get into Canterlot might be precisely to help herself to some of that love-filled harem goodness, anyway -- that’s not a motivation you see often, but here...?
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All I'll say is that there are plans for the changelings.
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Considering cadence doesn't exactly seem to made much effort in trying to be a friend to him considering friendship is just a form of love and considering that for a while his only real friend was Luna who made the effort to try to know and have him know her. Celestia has only been observing him and learning about him through Luna.
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Hmm, that's a good point. Thomas' interactions with the other alicorns have basically been nill. I'll see about remedying that.