Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Awesome episode. It was nice to learn more about herding along with Talon's personal life like her ex wives and ex husband. Also, Fluttershy and RD's interaction with the characters was awesome, especially with Talon befriending RD and falling hard for Shy. Hope to see more of Fluttershy with either Talon or Thomas.
Given how much Thomas and Talon loved the sight of Fluttershy here, Im amazed the ground didnt recieve an appreciation.
Now Shy and Talon are Hen Pen Pen Pals?
6592782 That about sums up everything, including my own desire for more.
6592809 Normally, I shame people for puns. But this one gets my stamp of approval.
Wasn't the herd explanation in a previous chapter? This is literally copy-pasted.
I beginning to think Tomas needs combat training considering how many mares are just hounding him.
Getting a bit tired about the proverbial pony stupidity when they meet humans "Ooohhh.., what a weird pet you have".
Specially considering they live in a world with several others sapient races, bipedals in this case.
6592865 Which parts exactly? I've been reassembling this story so much it's hard to keep track.
6592876 Working on it.
6592877 Sorry, but he's just unlike anything they've ever seen before. But don't worry. It'll cut down soon enough.
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The part about alphas and betas, I believe it was when Thomas had the meeting with Celestia's senior concubine.
Just checked, it's in chapter 31.
6592939 THANK YOU!!! and could you get him some sort of anti-magic defense or some ability to use in combat I'd kinda like him to beat face at some point.
6592955 Damn. Could have sworn I removed that. Oh well.
6592973 Just wait and see. I'll hint at something in a couple chapters.
This chapter was adorable
6593138 Appreciated
Sweet! Looking forward to more!
At the mentioning of harems, we came to a rather disturbing thought. The human could catch sexual diseases, now think of how easy he could get one or several from a Princess who has been living a active lifestyle. Verses a human alien to their world likely carrying his own issues medically, imagine how Luna would react if he got put into the hospital for any reason?
6593271 We all are
6593352 This matter has been considered and a chapter is in the works.
True, but it should also change the title of the chapter. The only mention of 'herding' was when Talon told Thomas that a harem is an open relationship as well as a herd. Doesn't explain much.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
That was a awesome read i hope Fluttershy and Thomas get together with Talon in more then just pin pals.I also hope one day Milky Way join Thomases herdthis just keeps getting better.
6593734 Meh. Just "Flirting" doesn't seem to fitting.
6593780 Working on it.
6593988 Just wait and see. Also, don't know who Milky Way is.
Just a future scenario I'm thinking about, but I wonder how Talon would feel if Thomas, now accepting the terms of herding, gets Fluttershy in his harem instead of the Griffon's?
6594263 Not likely. Visits aside, I want to keep Thomas out of the mane six's adventures in Ponyville for the most part.
6594083 Oh shes awesome just loke her up on google with mlp and you'ill see also look at her tumblr it awesome to .there is even so awesome fimfictions and groups about her.I think she is even related to Bon Bon.
Thomas HAS to have the hots for at least ONE of the Mane 6- I'm guessing Applejack's body and lifestyle, or Twilight's slight pudge and her personality being the most like Luna.
I think that the Lunar guard need to be better trained and preapred in a sererate corps that is designed to handle the internal and externan dangersto Ponyville.
Pritect Pinkie's targets, Rainbow Dash Crash landind protective system ans something to protect humans from being chased out by skull and pitchfork
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Disgrgard that last messege- I'm on ambien and things are as asnsical as a dream sequence right now.
6595134 Seen a couple hundred naked pony anthros, you've seen them all. Mostly he's numb to just the sight of their bodies, but it doesn't take much touching to set him off. In a way, he's attracted to them all, at least those he'll meet on this outing.
Didn't we see Moonlight's explanation on herding in a previous chapter?
6595738 You mean Sun Dancer. I fixed that part so that this covers some different material.
6596051 Well caught
now who next they'll meet?
6597471 well they were looking for twilight at the beginning of the chapter. So most likely her. And somehow I knew fluttershy would be like that when she saw Thomas.
That's so twisted, so deliciously twisted.
6604737 What part was twisted?
6605110 The entire fic is ! In a good way ! 8D
6605978 Cool.
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So Thomas and friends is planning to meet Twilight. Does that means that Spike will also make a appearance? And if so will Spike's anthro form will be age-up like this?:
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6615505 You can be patient until tomorrow.
6616291 Amusing.
Was that 'looks like my ex' bit a nod to sailor Jupiter
7147061 Fraid not.
Keeping
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pegasi https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/pegasi
6592809 How bout' Wren pen peg pals' ?
*sense
Why not? Also, it wouldn't surprise me at all to find it's not shaved, it's naturally that way.
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Ya know, I hadn't considered that, but it does actually seem plausible.
Hell yeah! I wanna see some TalonxFlutters, that sounds adorable. Here's to hoping you've already written it, eh?
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