Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Good chapter, my dude
Now... For the Rainboom... Can't wait!
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Thanks.
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I suspect you'll be surprised by what I do. Sorry, but the Rainboom is secondary to the real events.
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Aww sad face... I have faith in you to make it good despite the lack of awesome rainbow booming stuff.
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Stuff booms. However, Thomas and company are off on the sidelines dealing with a whole other mess.
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Well I hope at least Twilight will be ok. Don't need her being too tainted.
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But at least an assassin would end your suffering unlike fan girls
Hey
Just wanted to say ive been binging this story for a few days. Stayed up a little late a few times and, may have possibly, been reading it when I'm supposed to be working. You're doing awesome and I'm loving the story and the characters.
Keep up the good work
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Thank you so much, and I have every intention to. Please, let me know if you have any constructive criticism, or just anything noteworthy that you like. Feedback from my readers feeds my writer's soul.
Avatar reference nice
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Everyone has their own way of writing, myself included. I don't have any particular criticisms that I can currently think of. If I think of any I will definitely share them.
I will say that I do look forward to a moment where Thomas does something that contradicts his timid nature. Like if he was disguised on a date with his friends and someone did something completely uncalled for and Thomas just snaps and goes primal violent/protective human mode in their defense, for example. Maybe even something that gives Thomas' friends more insight/perspective on Thomas himself.
But that's just something I personally would like to see. Not trying to twist your hand or anything. I like how everything's going so far and you're doing a tremendous job keeping me hooked.
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Yes, indeed.
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Plans are definitely in the pipeline for Thomas to get more of a backbone. Don't you worry.
Phineas and Ferb?
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Was that not obvious?