Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Do the spoils include road head?
There we go.
How does this society function without Tom Lehrer, Weird Al, and Bob Rivers?
Probably this option.
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Road head?
I don't think that was a correction.
Peacefully, apparently.
Yup.
The proper title for a female knight is "Dame", unless you're going for different naming conventions than what we have.
I haven't noticed if you've used "Sir" as Moonlight's title before or not but I noticed it this time.
I think I might know what Thomas is getting Luna, and it should be fun to see.
I also want to see Blade Grace get some lunar attention if you know what I mean.
Celestia can be a bit... intense at times.
Really loved the interaction with the other combines. I wonder how and when Sun Dancer is going to collect her "interest" on Thomas borrowing her phrase.
Looking forward to more.
8227381 Road head: receiving oral sex while operating a vehicle. Or at least in one while it's moving.
Congrats on having your story featured once agian
Is there any common human food stuffs that the ponies dont have yet?
Then again, does Thomas even know about Chip Butty with Mushy Peas?
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Different naming conventions. Happy to please.
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Seriously? Awesome!
your paragraphs are separated by larger than normal gaps. Not sure if you intended that, but I felt I should mention it, just in case.
I'm actually disappointed in Thomas. He's been banging the local Moon Goddess for months and it never occured to him to quote Neil Armstrong while doing it.
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It seems to be a bug in the new site.
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I'll keep that in mind.
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Do you copy/paste onto the chapter editor, or just type it all up there? I know the return key sometimes gets weird when copy/pasting.
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Copy/paste. It always worked before.
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Try manually redoing the spaces between paragraphs once it's in the chapter editor. If that doesn't do it, then I don't know what will.
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I did that the last time. Seems like a needless pain they'll hopefully fix for later. As is, there isn't really a problem.
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Alright.
yay! good stuff
Are we back to more regular updates or is this a special occasion?
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Since my birthday is this month, I've decided to honor the occasion with weekly posts. We'll go back to the regular schedule in July.
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well happy b-day then.
A fruit tree... He is giving her a fruit tree right?
Phrasing! Lol
Thanks for the props. I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes.
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This is not a "bug", is it a "feature". in the upper right of the chapter , FOR THE READER, there is a button called "A Formatting". The second to last option in this pop up is how the paragraphs show up, with only three options: "Double Spaced", "Indented", "Both". This formatting option overwrites the author's formatting choices when it comes to how paragraphs are laid out.
A lot of people, both reader and writer, have complained about this for various reasons. Personally I don't like it as even "Indented" has an excess of white space between paragraphs and doesn't seem to actually, you know, INDENT the paragraphs. -_-
I lost it right about here. You should do more of these.
I believe you mean Lady Moonlight
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Out of curiosity, will Thomas tell those stores?
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Eventually.
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In the knight tales of old, a knight, be it male or female, was reffered as Sir.
I love this chapter it was epic/awesome. I hope Grace joins the harem more so I hope she joins his herd.This just keeps getting better and better.
if i where him. at some point i would of told sun dancer to ether shut the fuck up. or ask celest permission to punch her in the clam.
This.. honestly just makes me feel sad..
Deliscious....that's the clue !!!!!