Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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By the way you refer to Melody as an Earth pony at one point there. Might want to check that.
Nice, been waiting for this lol.
Nice chapter. Are you going to write anything about how Thomas didn't got to blueblood's room when he requested him and didn't go?
Interesting chapter. We saw more ponies and there was reference to another episode. Are we going to get more? And when is BlueButt going to show up again? He is a character tag after all.
The chapter was nice. Thomas' reaction about being a member (in a way) of Luna's herd was funny and the speech therapy scene was nice. Great chapter.
6328104 Thanks for the catch
6328202 Eventually
6328241 His presence has turned out to be more minimal than I expected. I may remove him from the tag, but he will have a future presence.
6328256 Appreciated
Me. Needs. More...
Well I am enjoying the fic so far. And even if I don't quite see where you're going, I'm sure it will be interesting.
I wanna know more about Moonlight Shield !
But why did I see the word thestral so often in fictions with batponies ? Isn't it a term proper to the univers of Harry Potter ? Is that a sort of fanon ?
Please forgive my cluelessness. :/
That author's note... .
But yes, another naked horse person. Such a shame she's so uptight. Then again the thing she's uptight about is just what she needs to relax. But, sadly, I do not foresee it being with Luna.
More bat ponies are needed, hopefully one's without sticks up their plots.
6328458 Thestrals are from ancient Greek mythology. A simple google search would show that.
Thank you for your kind words.
6328473 Most likely you will get your wish.
6328546 Damned... On google I only found Harry Potter wikia and more Harry Potter fansite... v_v
Damn you, mainstreamness ! X)
Thanks for the hint anyway.
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No problem, I know how it goes sometimes. You write a charecter and half way through writing you decide to make a change. Then sometimes you don't catch all the changes.
By the way, Courtesans had other talents that suited the tastes of the court they served, ie musical, artistic, acrobatic, or even combat talent. Because he is always with Luna, and he needs to be fit anyway you might want to have the guards train him.
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A "simple Google search" reveals that the term "Thestral" is a pure invention by Rowling.
Winged horses, or at least THE winged horse, Pegasus was his name not race, come from Greek myth. There are no mentions of bat-winged leather-skinned carnivorous equines to go along with it.
I'm one of those people who are very against using the racial name "Thestral" for the bat ponies. Aside from the wings they have nothing in common with Rowling's creation. I don't really make a big deal about it if that is what the author wants to use though.
FanOfMostEverything uses the phrase "chiroptera", which is the taxonomy order for bat, and I like to use that, but I'm also the guy that calls the ones with feathery wings pterippi, basically "winged horse", so take this as you will.
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that's the pitfalls of Google search if you don't use the right filters you might end up with Harry Potter porn.
6328691 Gods, it's complicated ! I'll just take batpony. X)
6328698 Not with thestral I hope ! X'D
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I don't see the problem borrowing the term, bat pony is fine but doesn't feel like a proper term. Pegasus was the name of the winged horse just as Medusa was the name of the Gorgon. Yet many fiction still use these as the name of the species. So I see no problem using a term from a popularized fiction.
6328689 I'm afraid you're too late. I've already written Talon as his trainer, in both the physical and romantic. All the same, thanks for the suggestion.
6328691 Really? Damn. I was certain I read it was Greek in origin somewhere. One story called them Lunar Pegasi, but because Luna basically created them, I don't feel that'd be appropriate here. Oh well. I'll stick with the term just the same. If I'm gonna pull from modern mythology, it might as well be from something good.
Also, there might have been bat ponies in Greek mythos, because that sounds like the sort of thing they'd make, but I hear 90% of Greek stories have been lost to the ages, so who can say.
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It's all the same, the point I was making is you can use it to have him pick up any number of skills. Combat could be fun later, having him pull a Yoda on some badies. But you could also have him pick up guitar, or any kind of skill you might want him to have later.
6328717 I don"t see any problem either. But you point something interesting ! Is there a fiction with gorgons and satyrs and monsters of the sort ? =D
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I'm not too fimiluar with the work, but I belive Percy Jackson uses Greek mythos to wide effect. Kinda has to since that is the setting. And isn't Mythology like some of the oldest fiction.
ya a few typos like a missing a. would help more but its to much of a pain when using a tablet
6331013 Oh well.
6331562 ya sorry bout that the lazy is real
That was awesome read but the teacher was a bitch.
6331928 As she was meant to be.
6344782 It amuses me how much this prospect has scared people. Oh well. Read the next chapter and find out.
Found a little mistake"but not shirt at Luna’s request." That's all
So Thomas is the Senior Concubine, but far as i can tell he's Luna's only one.
Melody
From Luna Eclipsed in MLPWikia.
So most Bronies refer to them as Thestrals, whether it's Thestral Pegasus or Thestral Unicorn or Thestral Earth, sort of like a genus then referring to tribal species. Although two of these are very rare as most are Pegasus.
I think you meant "speckled," but I like your version better. Got a hole in your wall? Just shove a gem in it!
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she needs to be bent over and given a good dicking