Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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I loved the interaction between Luna and Thomas in this chapter. It was very sweet for Thomas to realize that she chose him for his personality, though I wish he realizes that Luna is practically telling him that she loves him. Also, thanks for the world building you did for this chapter.
6446839 Glad you liked it, but she also loves him for his unique body.
The issue should have been called "My Little Porny: Friendship With Benefits."
Damn it Luna! The words are never too obvious to say! Say them already! Three simple words in the proper order! Though with your slipping on the modern language you might have a bit of trouble on the "I" word, and maybe even the "you" word... OK maybe not so simple for Luna... . Still! Tell Thomas how you fell with words, not just actions. I'm pulling my hair out here!
In less ranting news the position of attendant being a forerunner for harem member makes so much sense I feel a little silly for not having thought of it myself sooner. I guess I'm with Thomas and Luna here that those three just don't "click" as harem members. You'd probably have to walk that pegasus though every step of sex and that's no fun... .
Does open the position for some new characters though, looking forward to seem whom they are.
6447283 May use that title in the future.
6447306 You really shouldn't say things like that, because now I'm starting to enjoy frustrating my viewers by prolonging this. But don't worry. They will confess eventually, and that won't even be the end of the story. God willing, I plan to take this baby to season 5.
Glad you liked that idea.
After her harem grows during some celebration there should be a two princess harem orgy. Talon could finally rustle Tom's jimmies.
6450966 It could happen. Not confirming or denying, but it could definitely happen.
what gonna happen?
6451273 Just a guess, but probably something involving naked horse people.
So, Luna had that disappointed look in the last chapter because she realized that they just wouldn't click as a herd?
6451626 Disappointed that the mares didn't make a single move to defend their stallion, proving they didn't view Thomas as such, thus confirming her suspicions that they did not click.
6451679 Well, Talon is already in Celestia's herd, but I have a feeling Moonlight would have stood up for Thomas even if she wasn't his bodyguard.
6452080 Ya don't say. Hmm... I wonder
6452163 What do you mean 'or'?
Argh ! I can't believe I missed futa Luna because of the silly straightness of that damn Thomas ! X)
6452971 Funny thing is, here, Luna is the straight one and Thomas is the one who's bent.
6453357 Whatever ! Make it happen ! Or else I... Will make something really nasty ! Yes !
6453380 Clearly you have been ignoring subtext. Luna is straight, meaning desire for males and females is the norm. Luna also wants to expand the harem. The pieces of the puzzle are there for you to solve
6456272 Hopefully to return when he is needed.
That was a very sweet momment between Luna and Thomas :)
He already had Fridays off, not Thursdays. Chapter 14;
6965244 I'm not even keeping track anymore. Having these specific days was too much trouble to begin with.
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Yup!
...and we're back to the Battle of the Bulge!
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7898631 Ah. Good one.
Damn it, Thomas. Man up and suck your girlfriend's dick.
8025118 I'm not sure how I feel about having written a story where that makes sense.
8025345 if I remember correctly, I am pretty sure the he had Fridays already
I'm seeing the autism here easily.
If there is a group that takes autism stories, I suggest you submit this story to it.
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We shall see.
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I'm wondering why you got a downvote. I'm seeing it too (as someone on the spectrum. None of the sensitivity or anything, just shitty social skills) and stating so is not a bad thing. I'd dissapoints me how much autism has been stigmatised by the general public to the point where it's seen as a bad thing, even used as an insult with a similar meaning as retarded.
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I'm glad you're liking this. I was a little paranoid about making my protagonist a Mary Sue and knew the best way to counter that would be a pretty sever character flaw, but one an audience could also relate to. Also being on the spectrum, Autism seemed like the safest bet.