Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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You have no idea how quickly that tune can eviscerate your mind, dancing on the exposed nerve endings in a waltz of pure agony when you're hearing it non-stop for eight hours a day.
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I prefer the Campbell-O'Donnell version
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Okey! Thanks for answering me so completely,I can finally start reading again! And it did seem like Firestorm was written differently from the other characters. Honestly he made me think of James Bond. :)
I agree, Thomas does work like that and it make sense that he wouldn't get angry. Still, I can't help but feel that Talon knowing his secret from the beginning is wrong. This big reveal has been teased for a while now and we've seen how important it was to Thomas. He didn't like that secret but still did his best to keep it. So when we learned that Talon knew all along but didn't tell him, it kind of undercut the whole scene, I think.
Still, I love your story and I hope you keep going for a while and honestly, I'd put this story in my top 10.
And don't be afraid to put lots of kinky sex! :)
One of the few classes that people like to go for extra credit in?
3 weeks from the start to hear dam but loving the story
.... The hell did I just walk into? Talk about a paradigm shift.
With recent events; Silver being the lead through all of this feels like cruel foreshadowing.
Still, nice chapter.
you know i just relised that for a good time now toms been pretty much relegated to fuck toy and silver has had pretty much all of lunas attention. seems pretty cruel to him if you ask me.
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She's still new, so it's natural for a lot of attention to go to her. Things even out later, only for the next new batch to get a lot of focus.
I loved this chapter it gave Silver her time to shine with her own chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next .
lol