Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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hum well now this is a vary interesting test and may lead to other things.
Just hope Silver didnt roll a critical fail, or she could easily have suffered an annurism? or other physical mental fail due to blood pressure and signaling storm.
7983398 Meh. Whatever the case, I'm sure it'll end in a comedic fashion.
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“You said you would give me something, of which you now show you plainly have no knowledge of.” (just a suggestion)
SNERK, tarnished Silver, out with the Brasso™ it needs polishing.
7983636 Good catch.
Great chapter. I loved the ending
......Giggity
Despite your misgivings this chapter looks like it works to me. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
seemed good to me. i think it did what wanted and was funny
I missed the update here. At least the wait doesn't seem as long as before. Great chapter as always. I'm looking forward to the aftermath.
Yes...
7987309 Oh, just wait.
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Oh no
Nice!
-Ru
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I'd go with o'erweening pride, myself.
You made this m.c. bitch in to a Ho? This story is just like 'You and your Human' shit. Damn these Slave stories.
This was delightful!
Yeah, you keep telling yourself that.
A little of the special sauce?
I'm not sure that this is an accurate test. She was supposed to treat Luna as a normal pony, not Blue Sapphire. All this proves is that Silver can order others around. I actually thought Silver was going to turn around and see Luna in that maid's outfit.
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These are just the preliminaries. Wait until the next part.
That was a epic read it had at the eage of my seat when she was going to find out and LMBO when she did Ilove it I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Uhh. We back? I guess.
My suspension of disbelief can only go so far. Does Silver not believe that magic can change the size of an outfit or something?? It's just too much for me to take in that she doesn't immediately recognize the "new mare" as Luna. :/ The writing was still good, but it's weird that Silver suddenly isn't very clever anymore. Funny ending too.
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and her starless, lifeless mane
their
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It's more like her perceptions of the kind of person Luna is (aka a goddess) is clashing with reality.
Somewhat strange, but well done.