Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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will you update this more often now or will there still be a few months until next chapter? also want to say that i really like the slice of life bits in this.
I am sensing some animosity toward a certain marshmallow unicorn. But, also, reunited, and it feels so good.
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I'm shooting for the previous schedule of two updates a month, one here and the other in MLO 2, plus any extras that come up. Slice of life is certainly the bread and butter of this story. Although, some people have been asking for greater focus on the darker elements. I'm trying to balance the two, which will hopefully pay off in the big fight at the end of the arc.
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Wouldn't you be in this situation? Also, yes it does.
Always good to see the girls, the Mane Six again. Even if we see them for pretty much everything.
It truly is good to see you back my friend, Welcome back and good tidings to you Typist Gray.
damn, dat world building doe
Hell fucking yes I am so happy go a new chapter
I forget, why is Thomas scared of Pinkie and the other members of the Mane 6?
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We see them a lot less with the show over, but you're right. Their presence is always welcome, and it feels good to be back.
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Yeah, that's some of my favorite stuff to write.
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Thank you.
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Thomas is nervous around the mane six out of fear that he might interfere with the show's events and potentially hurt someone. He's afraid of Pinkie in particular for reasons even he doesn't fully understand. Suffice to say that she said some things with cosmic implications that threw him for a loop.
Whenever I see the main six in the picture, I fear for Thomas’s safety. Trouble always follows them.
Jet is just looking for bad things to think about Humanity, it seems like. Thomas specified he was talking about corporations, but she just took it as the entire species being dishonest.
This is gonna be good!
It's good to hear from you again dude!
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Indeed. Fortunately, the havoc of this episode is relatively minimal... or so you'd think.
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Some people just have a bad attitude about things and it takes a while for them to come around, if at all.
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I certainly hope so.
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It's good to be heard.
Human appeard and the ponies vanished?
Pastel they were, and Golden eyed?
SNAP.
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She has a bad case of spook-itis. Typical symptoms are paranoia, unwillingness to share information, and a tendency to try to get people to forget she's there.
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Spookitis... I'm using that.
i dont remember without actualy re reading this whole thing, which i may just do for a 10th time anyway. but how far does toms knowledge go? how far into the show was he when he got popped? and will the store jump some times into those unknown futures? i love the fact this story can go for years. but i dont want you to burn out before you finish it.
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That was never specified. I'm thinking around season 6 or 7, but that may change.
Oh snap, I have to check my notification settings. I missed welcoming you back by four days. Sorry about that.
anyway good to have you back.
also it's good to come back with a chapter that re-establishes where the story currently is on the chronology of the MLP storyline.
Can't wait to see what small innocuous thing Thomas does to snowball into a near disaster. I see that Jet knows just enough to worry but not enough to know how to act.
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Ya, I mean if she's gonna take part of a conversation out of context and use it to make sweeping generalizations...how good of an intelligence operative is she? I see her and the goon squad doing something stupid and screwing up Thomas' trust in the ponies.
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Yeah, it's good to be back, and that was a pretty nice coincidence. Also, I think you'll be surprised with how things play out. I like packing these stories with all manner of references, including lesser-known MLP fan works.
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Ironically, that basically means she’s thinking just like a human in that respect. We’re pretty much known for ignoring inconvenient little facts that don’t support our opinions while snapping up every detail that seems to back us up ourselves, after all...hm, I wonder if pointing that out could be a way to logic bomb her in a pinch.