Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Great Chapter! 😍🙂
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I did enjoy thomas at least reminding Moonlight that he comes from a world where the rules are completely reversed.
Yes, I did. Thank you "special Patron."
And thank you for posting.
9481767
Just ignore them Typist, it's just people being pissy that it isn't some testosterone poisoned fantasy version of them that is the main character instead of a fairly realistic depiction of someone who has to deal with Autism and depression.
9482395
Umm? This fic is quite literally "oestrogen poisoned fantasy self insert" which makes it typist ironically. Also no, autism and depression does not make a fully grown man act like and abused 9 year old girl.
9483570
Whatever you say, but all things considered i'll take the "abused 9 year old" over the typical Alpha Male Gary-Stu most harem fics on this site try cramming down the readers throat.
9485071
That opinion is very disturbing and telling but either way. Thomas as a character is pathetic and every way and the story agrees that he as a person is pathetic in every way, hell within the framework of the story seems like emasculating him is the default setting but the story still continues that cognitive dissonance is what irritates me. If he was a character in a cuckold story or a sub in a futa or trap story it would make sense but not in this story.
9485081
So you're saying you'd prefer a male lead that basically just showed up and instantly had every mare on their knees begging to be fucked? Because if so there are a few hundred other harem stories on this site.
This was by far the hottest chapter I read.
9485084
No, I want a semi believable character in a semi believable story. This a Harem story... l got that... having a alpha male as the lead make sense or even having a normal guy as the lead make sense but you can't have a whining spineless adult that acts like a child as the lead and still have it make sense.
9485093
I'm guessing you've never actually met someone who has depression before, while I will admit the Autism might be stretching it, as someone who did (and still does) struggle with depression I can safely say that Thomas's behavior is very much in line with someone who has depression and has been forcibly ripped away from what he no doubt considered his comfort zone. Because, unlike a lot of the harem fic leads on this site, Thomas was suffering from depression even before he came to Equestria (and without any flashback scenes it's difficult to say how severe it was.).
Quite frankly it's a miracle that the stress of finding himself in a new world and having to adapt to an entirely new set of cultural norms didn't make him attempt suicide because god knows I probably would have thought about it just to puss out at the last second.
9485106
"I'm guessing you've never actually met someone who has depression before"... really? People who say stuff like that usually are trying to push something political. Either way depression has characteristics those characteristics do not line up with what the main character of the story does. Suicide attempt would make sense acting like a beaten dog doesn't.
9485130
Maybe it's just me being a little jaded and burned out on the whole "Alpha male god-mode Gary-Stu" male leads, but while, yes, Thomas IS on pretty much the opposite end of the spectrum for the pre-mentioned "Alpha Males" (or maybe it's just cause every one of those types have played the jerkass trope to a T and I got sick of it) for me he's a nice change of pace from the norm. I also accept that I may be ignoring the more negative aspects of Thomas's character (your "beaten dog" analogy) in favor of being able to relate to the depression aspects of his character.
9485143
Look at me and drake565 fimfic this is how you can have a disagreement and still be civil in the comment section lol
I'm at the other end of the road I normally only read HiEs and most of the main male characters in HiEs act like 12 year old girls so maybe like you I'm jaded. So I guess I could say we agree to disagree.
9485151
I can live with that. (That reminds me for whatever reason, I need to go clean out my fave list).
9485151
I apologize for opening this can of worms again (I'm probably grasping at straws so double apologies) but the comment about Thomas being a "Beaten dog" got me thinking. I read somewhere that abused or threatened animals and children will try to avoid drawing their abusers attention to avoid being hurt, I wonder if Thomas, knowing that most of the Ponies around him could snap him like a twig, isn't subconsciously falling back on those instincts.
9485200
That would make sense, and help explain why he acts like he does but I think we're looking too much into it. This is a heavily fetishized story, where a certain kind of person is put into a certain kind of situation that in reality would never actually happen.
9485153
Also if you dislike the alpha male archetype, do you dislike Luna or Celestia in this story because they are very much the alpha male archetype. Or do you dislike the alpha male archetype because they are male.
9485712
I just realized why we have such different views on the whole "Alpha male" trope, every time I've seen it applied it's been to characters like Lightning Dust and Gilda, people who act like they're the greatest and everyone else is meant to fall in line or get belittled and ridiculed so I just assumed that that's how you thought Thomas should have been. Clearly I was mistaken and I apologize for the assumption.
9485090
Always happy to please.
9488755
I agree this most be the hottest chapter so far, the gentle femdom was so good to read having Moonlight and Surprise team up on Thomas's smaller frame was really fun to read.
Also, there is no such thing as "overexposing the readers to sex"
The readers demmands mores sweet sexy femdom chapter
9522067
That's nice to hear, and I had a lot of fun with the gentle femdom as well, although I must strongly disagree on the latter. Too much of a good thing is ALWAYS a worry, especially for an artist. For instance, I find just jumping right into the sex to be boring. There needs to be buildup, character, and some kind of story, even in the shortest of clops. In other words, foreplay makes the climax all the sweeter.
9527754
Yeah I’m definitely one of those types of readers who can’t read an endless supply of sex chapters. Just gets boring and predictable for me.