Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Thomas' interaction with Celestia's harem was entertaining (also damn, most of them really love their job). Still, I wonder what Celestia's past with Moonlight was like that made it so awkward for Celestia to mention and why did Talon get punished (also what exactly was her punishment)? Anyway, thanks for the chapter.
6303503 Talon was punished because she pressured Thomas into spilling what he and Luna did in private time. That's a big no-no in this occupation. The rest will be revealed in due time.
Why do I have the feeling that Celestia forced Talon to be there with either a butt plug or a vibrator shoved in her ass.
6303791 cause thats probably what happened
6303791 You have good instincts.
That was a good read .And it looks like Talin got a Royel spanking.
6306351 That is also a possibility
6307664 By your command
Nice! ^^ Looking forward to more!
Good ! I see that the plot is building and it seems interesting !
Can't wait for what comes next ! :D
6309119 Happy to hear.
Spoilers: I'm thinking of referencing JoJo's Bizarre Adventures at some point.
I am in love with this story! Keep writing it because it is amazing! It feels like it has the proper amount of flow to it, even the so called filler chapters I really enjoy reading; I so want to see the main character hook up with the Griffin, and perhaps Moonlight shield aswell; even if they are only f*** buddys...
But we will see what happens later on... But in the end I'm loving this story and can hardly wait for the next chapter!!!!
6306916 Does it make me a bad person for wanting to see what happened? *blushes* For some resin I want a sneek peek into Celestias royal bedchambers while that was happening.....
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Aaaaaw.... He knows what I like ! So charming.
Well, I'm looking forward to see that ! X)
6309636 I hadn't intended Thomas to hook up with Talon originally, but I may just have to give in to peer pressure.
6309645 Yes. It does make you a bad person. A very bad person. However, I am not a bad person for now planning something similar later on.
6310505 While I've been unable to find any decent copies of the sub or dub, save for tiny clips, I'm still so fascinated with the show. I thought, there must be some way I can do an homage in MLP. And then it hit me. The Stand names are like pony names, and so I found the perfect setting. Can ya guess where?
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*bows before the mighty Auther*
Whatever makes you happy; Its your story. I'm just along for the ride... I was just putting my two cents in lol!
6310610 Yesss... Yesss... Give in to your baser instints! Come over to the dark side! We have Cookies and Griffins over here!
6310615 Except for many stands in season 3, all stands in the other seasons are based on band name or music. Like Red Hot Chilli Pepper or Starway to Heaven.
For the guess, I think a batpony named Star Platinum could do the trick ! 8D
Or a unicorn from Celestia's harem named Crazy Diamond.
Or a female earth pony named Stone Free. Or better, cause it's my favorite stand : a pegasi named Purple Haze.
Ask me whatever you what I know all of the Jojo universe and the references in other manga and video games.
What was Talon apologising for exactly?
Sounds like Thomas still needs some help aclimatizing to Equestrian norms.
6310740 The dark side? Silly filly, if you've ever read any of my works on other sites, you'd know I actually have to struggle not to makes this stuff too dark.
6311032 Pressuring Thomas into revealing details about his and Luna's sex life. That's stuff's supposed to be private.
6311281 Perhaps, but the story moves on whether he likes it or not. Blame the plot.
6311645 Thank you, that happened several chapter ago, I didn't remember what was she apologising for.
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That I have not done... I mainly stay on this site. I've tried others but I just cant get into the stories because of how the site is set up it makes some of them hard to read. LIke not being able to highlight lines and stuff.....
6314418 Thanks
In your next chapter you should write that celestia needs Thomas at her day court and she wants to use him as her cushion. i know you all were thinking about it too.
6321949 Yeah. Really early on. Their interaction took up half a chapter.
6322210 Not gonna happen any time soon.
6322561 I don't remember reading Thomas going into blueblood's room when he wanted to meet him.
6322606 That's because the next chapter he explained that he flat out refused.
6322671 oh. And I have a feeling blueblood is going to be mad and do something to him.
6322697 That would be the logical conclusion. However, you have to consider the kind of company he keeps.
I feel bad for Tom, because he's so clueless that Luna isn't simply roleplaying. Hope this doesn't bite him in the ass too hard later on.
7484393 It might not, but she most likely will.
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Huh? I thought they were in Canterlot?
7896000 I believe that refers to later events when they go int the city proper.
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