Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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OK, I love this chapter. The competition between Celestia and Luna was a fun background event and I really liked how Moonlight and Talon interacted along with how Silver helped Thomas mingle with the aristocracy. Likewise, the ending with Moonlight and Thomas having a moment...and Moonlight making Silver jealous was a sweet and funny moment.
With him being Jack, I keep expecting him to break out into song with This is Halloween.
Preferably the Marilyn Manson version
7239772 Happy to entertain.
Mascaraed = Masquerade.
Skelington = Skellington
dower = dour
Other than that, fun chapter. Always makes me squee to see you've updated!
7239804 The first two are optional, but thanks for the third.
Machinations and machinenations in the background but no Mariachi band?
Time for some Cuban Pete. Discord, take it away.
Watch out for fully unrestricted free trade, you find out abut the ultraviolet catastrophe far too late because of lobbying against renormalisation.
7239829
yay
I'd like to take the time to thank you for your consistent update schedule. You give me a good story to look forward to every Monday.
7239829 What does a failed theory on blackbody radiation have to do with economics?
i cant believe nobody spotted this mistake yet at the very beginning: at 8 a.m. *should be p.m.
7240085 Happy to oblige.
7240186 No. It's right as is. Day foals get candy in the PM while night foals get candy closer to AM.
7240198 A mysterious pony who keeps popping up now and then. Half of Chapter 61 was dedicated to him but he first appeared in 54.
7240229 ah ok. got me confused there
Can you try to devote some time on creating more sexual tension between Moonlight and Thomas, or at least have them both go out on a date? The two of them have become almost a couple in my opinion. Try to get Tali to push them to get together.
I can see Moonlight and Silver Bell have at each other in a cat fight somewhere in the future. Poor Thomas.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
7240266 Chapters have already been written. Just be patient.
Both Moonlight and Silver want Thomas. More than likely both of them will end up in Luna's harem. The question is...who will be first?
7241362 Correct. The question is not who, but when.
I love the movie referred to in this chapter.
this chapter is really good and it looks as if Moonlight is finally showing her feelings a bit.
Really looking forward to what happens between moonlight and Thomas, more pls
7242244 As is everyone else.
7241530 next few chapters please
Smartycorn and Sweet Wings need to just hate buck each other and get it out of their system.
And Smartycorn and Moon Lover need to stop being so dense and admit to themselves and each other that their bond is more than just friends.
Maybe if both thoses things happen we can get past all this drama.
7242803 One can only hope.
I think that all depends on how strong your economy is. If your industrial base can't compete with the foreign bases, your economy will be overwhelmed by cheap goods of higher quality than your own, giving you no chance to bring your own country up. I believe such a thing happened to Mexico when they entered a free-trade agreement with the United States and Canada.
Moonlight getting protective of her little stallion.
"He is mine you bat-whorse MINE!"
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And that hug scene with thomas.
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Insulin! where is my insulin?!
7245024 Awesome kitteh picture.
Omg good job Silver good job keep it up mare ,And Moonlight it still han't seen she loves him hope she realizes it soon.Still a awesome read. And go Luna keep rockin that bunny mare shut lookin all fine as all Tartarus.
......*one twitch and slowly my left off start to get in between my leg but i quickly hold it*...HURGH....
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7629202 And fun times were had by all.
......*one twitch and slowly my left off start to get in between my leg but i quickly hold it*...HURGH....
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7629351 Would be Sensasinal to read a Scene when Tali Flip the bird , she is my second fevored character after Princess Luna
Masquerade
per Collins dictionary
Not a snarky attempt, just providing something to show the difference, not relying just on my word.
7241530 Hope they wake up and see that the likelihood of being herdsisters is extremely high!
*biased
I think I really need to reread some chapters. This little rivalry is confusing the heck outta me.
Just make a herd you two and call it a day