Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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The happiest and long lasting marriages come about when the woman realises that theres no difference between taking the male child for a walk on a control leash and harness, and sending the husband out to work as a bigger child, as long as the husband realises it as well, and accepts it.
As that great song lyric goes.
Enjoy yourself, its later than you think.
Its a good job Luna didnt bring in Celestias Mane 6 photo from the album. Escpecially as theres a very good chance that on Thomas waving at the photo, Pinkie would wave back.
Thanks for the chaoter. It was entertaining to see the girls enjoy Thomas' acting skills and the fact that Luna loves South Park. Likewise, it was nice to learn more about pony/human culture, especially with hoe herding/studding works.
this is vary interesting as to how the hole herding is described in this chapter it makes total since. and the studding part that is really a way for mares to rise foals who would normally never get the chance to tell the truth in this case I would be all for it.
now as to the bade pony Firestorm I am really wondering just what he is up to.
7738191 Happy to serve.
7738195 World details are rather tricky, but enjoyable to write.
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I will say you pulled off this chapter perfectly.
You said the princesses were familliar with Tom from a past life but aren't sure who he was, right? This means he could have been a cool wizard! If that's true, he might gain wizard powers again! There's too little HiE wizard fics that are well written, and don't get cancelled on this site!
7738488 To clarify, Thomas shows many of the signs of being a past lover, but actually isn't. There is a connection, but that won't be explained until much later. However, regarding your other comment, I won't spoil anything, but I will point out that, sometimes, Thomas' wrists itch. Pay attention to that.
wouldnt it be relavent for him to explain to them artifical insemination in humans and how it oft performs the duty of a stud for families looking to have children who otherwise couldnt have them and how single mothers aren't the best looked upon in human culture either?
I must say, the way you describe herds does make it seem like a surprisingly stable system. The only other story I remember exploring polyamory this well is in a Tenchi Muyo fanfic called, what else, "The Harem Saga".
The most impressive thing about this story, besides your skill with OCs, is that you've created an alien culture that the human protagonist has to spend time adapting psychologically, emotionally and physically to. Too often writers extrapolate from the show too much and make the ponies virtually identical to human society, so there's very little problem for outsiders adjusting besides, y'know, magic being a real everyday thing in Equestria.
Though Thomas does raise a very good point at the end. I would've thought Luna would've been hard enough satisfying physically and emotionally. Just how many ponies can be added to the herd before our human becomes burned out? Great chapter, can't to see what happens to all these tangled relationships down the road.
7738529 That sorta sounds like the surrounding magic is doing something to him maybe. My first thought was "magic spiderman" but that might be silly. The possibility of magic powers is pretty cool though! I hope he turns into a wizard, but I won't be sad if you do something else with him. I like your story, dude!
We wonder if because of all the 'Greek' mythology displayed in this world, if the race known as 'Ipotane' hadn't been heard of in the past. Maybe outside of Equestria because that would be the 'likely' result of when Thomas and Moon do have children.
There is the 'daily' quota for mythology for thou. ^..^
P.S. a Satyr is from a human and goat, sheep and/or ram relationship possibly.
P.P.S. He shouldn't have been the 'first' human to that world right? o..o maybe some very old records outside the country? Maybe the Minotaurs would offer a interesting reaction to him.
Twilight better be a part of Moon and Tom's herd, or I will find you, and I will kill you.
7738588 Even if he'd remembered, that would likely be dismissed. Foaling without sex is not a concept this Equestria would be very appreciative of.
7738602 Most of this is largely based on the Leroverse stories. That has a fantastical functional description of polyamorous relationships. I'd recommend reading the Xenophile stories.
7738626 Humans, in this world, are creatures of myth, suggesting that there has likely been some sort of contact between the races at some point in the past.
7738845 Unlikely, as I wish to keep Thomas' story as separate from the main show as possible.
7738891 damn right.....Twilights mine
7738866 yes, while the main form of artificial insemination that people think of dont involve it, that doesnt mean that the couple has to go without
7739112 They're fine with their current, natural, insemination.
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Damn. Seems I read where you were going wrong. I guess what Talon was saying wasn't foreshadowing. Was hoping it was, cuz' there aren't that many good stories with Twilight shipped with a human. The ones that are good, I've already read.
Honestly, the only thing I'm taking away from this chapter is that Celestia had no right to tell her harem about Thomas' origins without his consent, and that he and Luna need to confront her about it.
7738891 Istill hope Twilight joins there herd.
This was so awesome ????
I think I remember a few chapters back that Luna's private chambers had strong enchantments to prevent people from ears dropping; also I now real uncomfortable knowing there's a peeping tom a few words behind me a I read
Indeed this was a might fine chapter, opening new avenues for the story as a whole.
Speakin of those, our stallion of mystery seems to be in crosroads. On one hand, he could simply put that whole scoop and most likely get promoted in whatever journalits career he currently has. Naturally it would take milliseconds after bublications before entire upper echelon of Canterlot would be doin to him the whole Assange thing, nobody likes whistleblowers.
But Firestorm seems more reasonable than just that, he knows that there is high rewards for his actions on short term, but on long term such action will only backfire on him. Regardless of freedom of press, revealing national security matters is something that will be interpreted as treason, but he knows that.
He will most likely play smart, with something like "There is breach in your security, I know shit you do not want public to know, I want exclusive right on you, deal?" This way everyone wins, Firestorm is not wanted for treason and what not. Protagonist and CO can deal whit things as they see fit and Firestorm? He has personal golden goose that he can milk for all his worth(I just realized that in this setting interpretations are more horrible than intented)
We shall see, in any case, author delivers some good story.
7740389 Eavesdropping and a masterfully crafted spy spell are two different things.
7740599 Glad you're enjoying the story so far, especially this chapter. However, have I really given the impression that Firestorm is a journalist?
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I am familiar with the Leroverse. Haven't read Xenophilia or it's spinoffs all the way through though. I guess his fanon about herds has been widely adopted by writers on this site.
7741872 Without question. You should definitely give the starter story a look, along with this criminally underrated gem https://www.fimfiction.net/story/206699/dusk-shines-saga
7741807 Journalist, not necessarily. But at the same time information he holds can most likely be traced back to him once the whole thing blows. It matters not how passive or feint the magical signature is, it always leaves something behind( magick is bullshit like that m'kay) thus it can be traced back to him, because how many individuals has protagonist been in contact with, not that large of an controll group.
And besides, you have created individuals that are smart and know their stuff, maybe they have libidos that would raise a few eyebrows here and there but they are still smart and skilled ponies that know how these things work. Maybe you have something completely different in mind, and I most likely will like it.
Keep at it, this story is funny and so on and so forth.
7741969 Reading this chapter made me wonder a couple of things:
1) Will Thomas's herd need a stud service in the future if they want to have kids?
I believe they would because even thought Thomas is not sterile (I suppouse) he is not a pony so the chances of him getting Moonlight pregnant are very slim, which is something good to have sexy times during heat and thus avoid unwanted pregnancies but not to concive a child, that is unless there is some kind of spell or potion they can drink if they wish to have a baby, be it a human or a pony one.
Now to the second thingy since we are talking about heat, something I have never give some thoughts in the past.
2) Do gryphons go into heat?
I was starting to wonder if Tali will go into heat at some point and seek the atention of some male but I never heard or read a story before that addressed this kind of subject, from a biological point of view birds don't go into heat, but thats the thing, gryphons are half bird but also half feline and felines do have heat periods.
Mmmmmh I thing I will go and ask in some of the groups in this site about this.
And finally Since Tali consider the harem her new clan.
3) Dose that mean that she is considering joining Thomas's herd in the near future?
Since the begining of this story they have all become really attached to each other specially with Thomas sooooo I don't believe that posibility is so out of the question.
7742478 Fair enough.
7743318 1 No. I pray I won't burn out before getting to this point, as it will be far in the future, but I can safely say that Thomas' herd won't need to employ an outside stud.
2 No. At least, not at the moment. That may change in the future if I think of a way to make it interesting.
3 No. They're good friends, sex friends, but there's nothing romantic there.
7744534 Thank you :)
Now that the truth is out I kind of want Thomas to recall Tali's dismissal of guns and show her how wrong she is via dreamscape.
Well... it only took like two weeks and not paying attention in my lectures... but i finally made it! Holy shit that was the longest grind (no pun intended) i have ever done on this site.
my head hurts...
7775484 Well I'm just pleased as punch to hear you say that :D But I'm also sympathetic, as I've also done more than a few grinds on this site as well. Also, thanks for the favorite.
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I'd be farther in if not for work.
I am actually really interested in the socio-political workings of this universe.
7790464 Me too. Maybe we'll get into that more as time goes on.
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'comfort' or 'comfortable positions'
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Sooo what if Thomas is a reincarnation of that Nightmare thing the luna killed a thousand years ago?
FUCK YES. Now this about to get really interesting.
I actually love exposition chapters, I love it when an author has a well crafted universe, and you've definitely got it. New info that doesn't conflict that much and builds the world up; this is the stuff my dude.
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After what? Thomas' arrival to Equestria?
Unless I'm reading Google incorrectly and not understanding the definitions, I think you mean
*fair
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I like writing these chapters, too. World building is such fun, but its all heavily inspired by other stories I read. Even wrote a chapter where Discord gives a semi-classical explanation for the origin of the universe, which is up on my Patreon if you're interested.
just for future reference.. humans get morning wood because as we sleep our brains mix the signals up for arousal and the need to use the bathroom. this is so we do not piss ourselfs as we sleep, because as the penis becomes engorged, it becomes ni impossible to take a wizz..
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Fascinating.
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It sucks getting caught in that trap.