Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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this was fun as hell
Noooo, the Murkey twins shouldn’t have won!
Other than that, good filler chapter.
Why am I thinking this ain’t the last we heard of those two walking stereotypes?
Nice
10354249
What I was hoping to hear.
10354304
Eh. I wanted to do something a bit different, and sometimes assholes just win.
10354310
Probably because it'd be fun to have life just dump on them for being jerks.
10354621
Thanks.
10355113
Yeah fair enough. Just desserts and all that.
I honestly thought you were channelling a bit of MXC there.
This was good. I laughed at Honey. Caterlot has jerks. Slime is fun. Luna was missed. Gameshows are wierd. My feet itch.
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Don't know what that is.
10355397
Terrify play-by-play.
meh, I kinda expected that they would lose, but what’s really important is that they had fun at the end of the day.
Honey should relax though.
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She'd probably relax more if she got to hit things more often. Especially things that had it coming.
Are you going to finish this story
10391951
I have no idea. There really isn't an endpoint in mind, though I'd at least like to make it through season 2.
Damn, I was kinda hoping for an update today, ah well. Good story you have here, but I do have some questions -- how much time has passed since thomas arrived in ponyland? At this point it seems like less than a year, but there hasn't been a direct reference to the show events in a while. Also, how old is thomas supposed to be? When this story was much younger it seemed like Tom was in his early 20's, but in the chapter where him and silver hang out he mentions he's closer to 30 iirc -- which struck me as really weird because Moonlight was stated to be older than him but last I checked she was a Private in guard ranking -- so unless in this story royal guards have years of training as recruits or are pulled from other branches after a few years or are only promoted when senior members retire -- it's super weird to have a [close to] 30 year old E1/E2.
I know we're several chapters off from that but I remembered that nagging tidbit of info when I checked this page and figured I would ask, at the time of reading I chalked it up to the story being 5 years old and you subconsciously aging the characters as well -but- I could have just been reading it wrong this whole time.
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I've deliberately kept the time stuff vague, but you're right that's it's been a little under a year. Let's also say that Thomas is around his mid 20s and Moonlight is late 20s. Let's also say that ponies live longer than humans, and so tend to take longer to progress through things like rank, if at all. Moonlight might be perfectly suited to where she is, which is the sort of thing that happens in a world of cutie marks.
I'M IN THE AUTHOR'S NOTES. I've made it big now.
10452016
Congrats. Let's see if we can't get a repeat.