Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Am I the only one that kinda wishes Talon would join Thomas' herd?
7926209 Probably not.
While I understand the concerns, the others have about Thomas and his position, I kind of feel that it's not fair. But I can also see Thomas agreeing with them. I'm interested in seeing how Luna will react.
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Silver, "Thomas, stop getting catty with my tail!"
I don't think I've ever seen Twister played with so many body parts and colors. It just allows for combos that are physically impossible (ex: red right foot and orange right knee, unless someone had extremely long shins, that's physically impossible) and positions that are just plain cheating (ex: if you sit in the middle of the mat, then everything can reach everything else without causing you to fall). I'm fairly confident that the colors are red, blue, green, yellow, red, blue, green, yellow, and the body parts are just the left and right hands and feet.
7926209 My good sir/madame you are one of many. Now quiet and drink your tea. (this is joke play alongside this)
Royal Twister. Celestial Yellow and Luna Blue spots. Endorsed by The Crowns.
7926256 Not fair in what way?
7926309 Yeah. Clearly that one was confusing me.
7926328 That's what trial runs are for.
7926356 Thomas hasn't been given a chance to show that he could be a good leader. In this Equestria, everything moves at much quicker pace than they would be if they were in the human society. People can build themselves up to be leaders. But here, it's sink or swim. I don't think Thomas would mess up and choose someone who is incompatible for Luna. In fact, he would ensure that they are perfect for her. But the time constraints is working against him.
7926384 Except you illustrate the point exactly. Things move too quickly in Equestria than he's used to. That's the mindset everyone already has, what's expected for any given job. I suppose that ties into the cutie marks thing where you generally don't go into a field unless you've already proven you have a knack for it, so less time is devoted to training and such. Thomas mind adapt to this mindset eventually, but eventually isn't now.
7926402 awesome chapter my friend and I can't wait for the next upload of this story I'll b waiting my friend and keep me posted thanks
if there is no monopoly then it shalt be made
I wonder if the ponies have games like Risk or Scrabble.
7926753 That's basically how patents start off.
7926755 If not, they will soon.
The only complaint I have is that the chapter was too short. I want more daggummit!
-Ru
aww twister it has bean 40 + years for me.
7928129 The best complaint a writer can take, I suspect. However, I do post chapters early on my Patreon, if you're interested.
7928215 Interested? Yes. Monetarily capable? Sadly not.
-Ru
7928215 Um, maybe it's just my computer but I tried your link to Patreon and all it showed were the options at the top of the page and a blank blue screen.
-Ru
7928242 Worked for me, and it's only $3 a month.
I still love this story. A lot.
Crackpot theory time, Thomas was either the reincarnation of NMM or the "earth pony goddess"
7940916 I do not know what that means.
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I was making stupidly wild suggestions that Thomas is actually the reincarnation of Nightmare Moon, or The Earth Pony the constellation was based on, who may also not be an earth pony.
I wonder if Silver Bell's nectar taste like mango?
Hmm I hope Celestia's concubines aren't making a mistake by trying to demote Thomas as Thomas is making some very quick progress, and going behind the back of a human is not a very wise thing to do and could endanger the friendship between the day and night groups here is hoping Sun Dancer and Celestia can set things straight as both Thomas and Luna are adjusting to a new world while Luna may be familiar with some aspect both are unused to the current time they are living in.
On the idea of gifts I believe one thing that would work for all of them would be seeing the human world like Luna did so they can see and understand Thomas a little bit more and seeing a world without magic would be quite a surprise I imagine.
Anyway sorry for the late post got a lot of things going for me, but I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
7982434 Thanks for the comment, and only time will tell.
7942190 that would be awesome and even more so if he retand her powers,and a awesome read as he slowly gets them back and uses them for. good.
Sweet Wings should be capitalized.
Settlers of Catan! Betrayal at House on the Hill! ... Spades? Oh! Cards Against Humanity!
Well, that much is obvious.
What game of Twister uses your nose?
They clearly have a different idea of what constitutes 'clean family fun' too.
*would
What is Luna recovering from?
Why? Why is it necessary to have so many members of a harem and why do they have to do it quickly?
What the hell? I don't see a problem here. Thomas and Luna should be allowed to go at whatever pace they choose. And replacing Thomas? He's just now getting over some of his self-confidence issues. Replacing him will destroy him.
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Nightmare Moon.
Alicorns have major libidos. Luna's is relatively subdued given the toll Nightmare Moon had on her body, but she's recovering.
Just wait and see.
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I would like to see an unknown applicant to see how the others would screen them. You know....like more bat ponies....or a certain griffon....or one of the mane 6....or a certain big red stallion. So far we've been dealing with the main characters. I wonder if the harem could be infiltrated by a nerdowell?