Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Interesting chapter, it feels like it should be filler but is very much needed as a interregnal.
Also, now maybe he'll take a closer look at his little body guard.
Just refreshed my feed and lo and behold! Can't wait to read it
This chapter was beautiful. Luna finally talked with Thomas about her past and helped him overcome his feelings of insecurity. One of your best chapters, so far.
6846984 I hope he learns some more, also I can't wait until he starts seeing signs that he could not before and starts understanding them... And oh man the new Concubines to come!!! Eeee!!! That could be fun! I would love to see what happens when they start coming in and the reactions he gets along with what will happen after..... giggity lol so much fun!
Great chapter, cant wait for the next one
6847138 YES!
So what's happening with what's-her-face that he met in the restaurant?
The one that was going to apply for Luna's harem?
I want to know how she'll react to finding out HE was the mare she'd been talking to.
Well, this should ease some of Thomas' fears. Plus, morning has to come.
6847266 I am so waiting for this. I'm positive she will not know who he is because they never really met so it will be interesting to see how she acts around him not knowing that he was the mare she spoke to before. It's going to be an interesting development.
6847449 Oh morning, I hope it will be an interesting and kinky... lol
Taking Thomas into the dream realm feels more significant than he seems to realize. It feels like Luna is truly extending a extensive amount of trust to him by allowing him to experience what so few others have.
Also can't wait for those interviews to start. Seems like a perfect set-up for shenanigans!
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Now I want this to happen
That was a great chapter. Really feels like they're strengthening their bonds and slowly clearing up the misunderstandings they've been dealing with.
Also heralds some kind of incoming shenanigans. This should be fun.
I wonder why the dream realm feels familiar to Thomas. Maybe it had something to do with his arrival in pony land? I wonder if this quirk will be something that gets expanded upon.
ok this chapter is rather powerful Luna has a vary good talk with Thomas.
I like this chapter vary touching.
6847266 I suppose you'll get your answer when the chapter is written.
6847065 Appreciated. Comments like these help get me through the week.
6848001 Shenanigans are basically the bedrock of this story.
6848063 Something along those lines.
That was... Not cute but... What is the word ? Touching I guess.
Well, it gives me the "d'aaaaaaw..." anyway.
Would it be risky for me to assume that a certain prench leather winged pony will join the herd at a certain point of the story ? 8D
Hummm ? Hummm ?
6849020 What part? The Dream Realm bringing him there, or that it's something that the plot'll get into?
The pace is very nice. The only time I feel a gap in before a "clop" chapter, which sorta leaves me breathless, (much like the characters) and waiting for more. Look forward to your future chapters.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
6849316 Never been much of a gambler, myself, but you're free to give it a shot.
6849847 Spoilers.
6849926 As do I.
6850579 Aaaaaw... You're such a tease Gray boy. 8D
6850732 No. I'd be a tease if I said a future chapter was planned around poison joke. But I'm not saying that, therefore I am not a tease.
this was the sweetest cutest best read yet I loved it all of it.It was great to learn about Luna's past herds mates .I'm happy that they really got to learn about each other and get even closer to each other and fall even more in love with each other.
6858345 Me too.
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So Thomas is gonna to interviews some potential candidates for Luna's harem others then the bat pony like a female Diamond Dog like this and a huge female busty Minotaur and maybe a female Centaur that live in Equestria?
6870175 Probably not a centaur. Their lands are too distant.
Why do I get the feeling Tali is going to be a willing or obliging yo-yo, not saying she wouldn't enjoy it I bet.
What on earth part of the fandom is this, and how can I go about continuing to not find it?
8032854 It was a couple chapters in one of the expanded Leroverse stories. Basically, being horses, they have no taboo farting all the time.
His was a nice little heart to heart. I'm glad that you're having these two talk and act like normal people and ponies.
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I feel like you were supposed to remove one of the "sexy"s and keep the other.
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Me too. Despite the very foundation of this story, I admit I really don't have these two just hang out like friends terribly often. It's as disappointing for me as anyone, but my writing style is very free form. I start out with a simple premise and just let the words flow from there. Usually I just need a few small edits and a chapter is formed in just a couple days. The problem, as I have explained to others, is that the story doesn't always go where I want it to. I'll be writing along the main story one day, encounter writer's block the next, and then have to start a whole new ark, or even a whole other story just so I don't waste my few writing days. It's annoying as hell, but thus far it's been serving me decently.