Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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You get it right in one area, but miss it in the more important one
This is one of the most assuming chapters. I really liked how nervous Silver Bell was when meeting Thomas and how she accidentally ended up having his face on her rack. I also liked how they attempted to politely ask each other out (It's great that Thomas is getting the guts to ask someone out) and I laced when Silver Bell stared at his butt.
Silver Bell? Thats rings a name.
Ah, Pavlov, that was it.
Looks like the new girl will be specialising in oral, especially if she demonstrates exceptional polyglottal capabilities, would be assigned head cunning liguist?
Silver Bell might have been in the part I skipped over when Thomas was disguised as a filly. So, no, I did not see this coming.
7050265 I assume you meant "amusing." In which case, I'm happy to hear.
7050264 Shame on me. Thanks.
It's about bloody time, mate!
I for one have been expecting this, and am curious if she will be starting off as a French (Prench?) maid. If Luna is aware of that particular fantasy, she might not be able to pass it up given that Silver gets along well with Thomas.
(Edit: I believe the mares from earlier actually held the position of Personal Attendant if I recall correctly. I meant to imply that position, but with a focus on maid-related activities and the uniform that would accompany the fantasy.)
Even though I do remember the bathroom part with silver bell.
I Ember will gladly except the punishment of those that did not notice.
7050311 A thousand wagging fingers of shame upon thee.
I knew this was coming and I have to say I have not been disappointed. I am truly looking forward to getting to know silver bell and see how she interacts with the rest of the Harem.
7050390 I will neither confirm nor deny the presence of maid skirts so high they do nothing to cover the bottom in a world where folks don't normally practice the use of underwear.
7050472 Me too.
Thankfully I slaved through the Thomas to filly chapter, so I recall her
EEEEEEEeeeee SHES SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awkward meeting but I must say she sounds cute.
and as she is one the smaller side this may get vary interesting.
We cannot wait to see how Twilight is like or has 'changed' since Thomas having met and kissed her last time, we bet it would be glorious or if perhaps before that Twilight Velvet paid him a visit. XD
Since Twilight's family was born and raised in Canterlot.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
7051015 Here's hoping.
7051401 You seem to be overestimating Thomas' impact. That said, I hadn't considered bring in Twilight's family. That might be interesting.
7051521 Who wouldn't remember their first kiss? Also Twilight's near perfect memory from constantly studying all these years? She'll have methods to keep that experience fresh in her brain while thinking of Thomas.
Also because she's Twilight Sparkle. -..-; Study incarnate and possibly the next coming of a new alicorn, if he hadn't fucked that up already.
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I thoroughly enjoyed the Thomas-filly parts and hope to see more.
Silver is just to cute. The dynamic with her and Thomas is adorable as well. The entire courtesy competition idea is very endearing.
7052031 Good. All good.
Level of cuteness? *checking my meter* Yeah....like i tought....i have diabetes now ~_~"
7053841 Yay! That alone makes it all worth it.
What happened in my pants while reading this chapter :
Louée soit Silver Bell ! Gloire aux batponies !
VIVE LA PRANCE !!!
*get naked and go dance on the beach under the full moon*
WUZZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA !
7054183 Been a while since I had to say this, but calm thine horse tits.
7054834 My horse tits are on fire.
7054867 Well then ya better shake em around until they aren't anymore.
7055447 X'D how pervy of you !
How strong is her prench accent?
7056094 Not very, mostly because I don't really want to change how I write dialogue just yet. However, it's definitely in her voice and easily recognized if you heard it.
7056431 I am here if you need prench advices by the way. 8D
7056487 I've been asking for an editor.
7056717 Well, my english is way to bad for that job. Or else, I would be writing my own fictions in english.
I loved this it was funny and sweet ,And its aweome Siver gas finnly shown up I hope avything works out.
seriously though, Thomas needs to explain that trope to them at some point
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penning (and that's one long 'donkey' sentence!)
SNERK my favourite term, CAT EXPLOSION!
It reads better without the 2nd 'that'
Ring-a-ding-ding Silver Bell is finally back.
7056717 And not getting one?
When did the Armstrong family change their name? Also, she's not sparkling enough. Maybe they're just Armstrong cousins?
Comma
At this rate it seems more like bending her over after drinks.
8120052 I'm always looking to recruit.
A shame you didn't make that comparison back when this was written. I'd have probably incorporated that into her character.
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HELL YEAH. We back baby
Given the nature of the story, exactly 100%, thanks to Chekhov's Gun
Hold up, isn't Moonlight a bat pony as well? Damn, I hope I didn't forget something like that.
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She asked, intrigued, never
Question mark
grâce (don't blame you for wanting to just ignore accent marks LOL. hated those things when I took French too)
Need another line to make the paragraph
8581210
Moonlight has always been a unicorn. She summoned a big magic shield to fight the star bear and even talked about the spell in her cutie mark story.
If I saw it coming, could I still have Luna punish me? Maybe a firm spanking?
"If there is anything on this ship more important than my ego, I want it found and shot now."