Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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this was very nice, great to see what our bird-brain was up to
Tali-i.chzbgr.com/full/8818107392/h35DBB8C9/hur-dur-burd
Always great to see the wily griffon.
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Indeed.
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Kinda.
10602283
Yup. It was nice to bring her back.
Nice chapter
10602939
Thank you.
yes Tali, yes it has.
also: flustered Silver is best Silver.
also, also: I think you did well with Talon's return
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Glad to hear it. I think we all missed this lovable bird, so I tried to put in the extra effort to make her return something nice.
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Indeed
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Sorry if that wasn't clear. Moonlight's father didn't want her to end up like Blue Blood
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That's politics for ya.
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Not sure what CBT is.
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Unlikely, but we'll see.
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Hmm. Well, there is a clop mini-arc coming up.
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Well, the idea is certainly starting to percolate.
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So I've been told.
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Pog
Nice chapter, just managed to finally reach the latest one but now I need to wait for updates
I personally enjoy these filler chapters (e.g chapters that focus on one or two characters so it takes the focus away from Thomas, or that portray the group together having fun). Nevertheless, I feel like the conflict is taking too long to build up. I really appreciated the chapter with Firestorm since it gave the reader some insight regarding his operation, or the chapters that illustrated the mares who got kicked out from Luna’s service and blamed it on the protagonist. Granted that the former is still a mystery for now, but it felt nice knowing the story isn’t just the mares fooling around and having fun; that there’s a bad guy out there plotting something big that’ll shake Thomas up and the gang.
Either way, great story, keep it up dude!
I'm curious, how will the harem react to "The Phantom of the Opera"? Just a thought.
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I know that feeling, and it's terrible. Even worse when the writer seems to be taking his sweet ass time, but we all endure. I hope to get back to entertaining my readers as soon as possible.
Is this story on hiatus?
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ye, the author had some stuff to handle. hope all goes well for 'em
10771218
Unfortunately. I don't want to cancel and have plenty already written, but it needs to be organized.