Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Jet is quickly becoming a favorite, though is still hate that they are spying on him under the order's of the princesses when Luna already promised him no more secrets that could ruin his trust of her.
Spider bat, Spider bat. Does whatever a Spider bat does.
Looks like they're making progress!
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Does Thomas still have that spell on him that allows...Firestorm? I think?(Can't remember his name) to hear everything that Thomas says? Cuz if that's the case then I'm kinda surprised that Luna and Celestia haven't sensed it yet considering how powerful and experienced they are.
Why is the pony fbi even spying on him again? I'm not sure you ever put who prompted them to.
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I'm pretty sure Luna isn't aware of Jet's agency doing this. They're 'generously' providing extra security for a massively unknown phenomenon.
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I'm ashamed I didn't think of that. Well done.
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True, but is it enough to handle what's yet to come? Here's hoping.
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Sweet. Thanks for pointing that out.
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He does, it is, and this spell was designed with them in mind. It basically goes inert in their presence. They're lucky Thomas is such a creature of habit. For example: if he were to encounter multiple Alicorns somewhere he doesn't usually visit, the spell's automatic triggers might misfire, thereby alerting said alicorns, and probably resulting in some raised voices, to say the least.
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It's more like the pony CIA. And like ours, they operate with a degree of independence to pursue perceived threats. They're more loyal than ours, but Thomas is such an unknon that they feel compelled to keep an extra eye on him. I'll try to make these points clearer in future chapters.
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Ok I get it now, sorry I don't mean to hammer this so often it's just I have a thing about liars and betrayal and both princesses have already toed that line with what happened with the whole "test" with Blueblood that they put Thomas through that in my opinion was unnecessarily draw out by them. for no real reason.
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In my defense, this story has been very stream-of-conscious, with very little thought put into advanced planning. It's no excuse, but it is what it is, and I'm doing my best to keep everything consistent.
To be fair I come here for the fact that it is just episodic, meandering, laidback, slice-of-life, sometimes with clop and hasn't gone off on some world ending tangent like so many stories that start this way do.
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Hmm. Funny you should say that. While I plan to introduce more of an ongoing story, the laidback stuff will remain the primary focus.
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As long as Thomas and Midnight keep being nerds, Honey keeps being a weeb, Surprise keeps being Surprise, Silver keeps being adorable and Luna keeps being horny, I should be well entertained. I can take it or leave it on if Jet keeps being tsudnere.
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Honey is not a weeb. She's a down-home country girl with mild weeb interests. As for the rest, that should remain pretty consistent.
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Nah teenager would be better. Because he acts too timid to be in his mid twenties
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Late teens then, and lots of people really are that way as adults.