Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Remind me, are condoms a thing in this Equestria? If so, the potential for 'fooling around' at certain times of the year is greatly expanded!
Shouldn't this be part 2, not part 3?
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The risk of pregnancy is such an infrequent and predictable occurrence in Equestria that there's not much demands for the same variety of birth control methods as we do. They have pills for those mares who aren't quite ready, but mostly the onus is on those mares to listen to their bodies and take personal responsibility for their life choices. That said, it would still be frowned upon to fool around with blood relatives of the opposite sex in heat, even if pills are taken.
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Thanks for the catch. Was in a bit of rush to post and got careless.
Hmm. Wonder if things will get more diverse down the line in the way of species. Talon and the Minotaur in sunbutts group shows it happens. Will be interesting to see what/who pops up next.
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Well then, that solves it! Thomas isn't related by blood, so, no problems. Preemptively, if you are going to reply with silliness such as 'Apple Honey won't get pregnant by Thomas' or other denials, you will be known as 'Typist Gray, Great Honking Spoilsport!'
In other words, until you expressly write it in story, please don't spoil my dreams. Princess Luna, especially, would be quite put out if you did that.
I love your work, and shall eagerly await further updates!
Im glad a story finally addressed the incest thing. There are so many that gloss over it or ignore that incest is frowned upon when it comes to human standards. I mean, yeah, it's hot to have Tia and Lulu do it but dude, they're sisters.
So, just how many applicants DO you have planned?
Also, what are the chances of one being turned down by Thomas, who then gives reason to which the others agree?
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Indeed it will. However, like a lot of long running shonen, I run the risk of having too many characters make the story cluttered.
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I feel the same. This issue was a long time coming, but I feel reasonably satisfied with what I came up with.
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So far, only one more. There are a thousand and one different ideas swimming in my head that it's hard to plan too far ahead while staying coherent. Mostly this story is born of free writing, so for now I'll work on making these two fit in before seeing how I feel about any more.
As for rejecting someone, it's something I'd like to do at some point. But again, it's whatever feels right for the story.
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Maybe a McGuffin item of some sort that lets the cast change race/species for an hour or something. That way you keep the same cast all ready there, just now there is a potion/MagicMcGuffin that spices things up for a small time.
i am pleased
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Me too.
Intresting, Dyslexia. Yet another intresting miss processing of information I can add to the list of things theoretically that can affect bidirectional recursive beysean neural nets.
The harem is coming along nicely. Suprise is going to have to get a bigger wardrobe for all these extra characters she is going to be disguising as?
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You should either remove 'which suggested' or 'suggesting'. Also, of developed should have a space. Not to mention, I'm not sure if it works in the sentence. Maybe development instead of developed.
You should remove 'she."'
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Don't be silly. Surprise wouldn't need a wardrobe. The hammer space inside her mane has more than enough room.
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So weird. I went to check where I keep my main story, but found none of the errors described, yet they were here on the site. To avoid the annoying automatic double space that happens whenever I post directly from Word, I did as someone suggested and posted to a Google Doc first. Maybe that interjected the errors, somehow.
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I was surprised to see all of those mistakes in one place, and wondered how you didn't notice them. They're also mistakes I've never seen you make before. Google Docs definitely explains it.
Yay you and it is alive.
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Had to repost from Word and just muscle through the double spacing.
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I stuck by my four week limit. Nothing unusual there.
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Do you mean bayesian?
a vary good chapter.
i am happy to see you are steering away from AJ kind of thinking, she grates on my nerves a good bit.
That was awesome I'm loving Apple Honey .I really hope Thomas gets some upgrades soon like shape shifting and other magic he deserves it buy now .
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I'm afraid patience is a virtue.
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Speaking of Surprise, I couldn't exactly tell; is she in the harem now?
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Nope. There's been no informal induction ceremony yet.
Will any stallions join Luna's harem other than Thomas?
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Eventually.