Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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COME ON, STROKE THE KITTY! STROKE THE KITTY!
Talon really wants to get a head of the game by egging on her compadres, non?
6822691 I'm stroking. Sheesh! What more do you want from me?
Good stuff. Looking forward to seeing how this continues.
The threesome was very hot, especially since this is the first time Talon has shown a glimpse of her concubine skills. I hope that one day Thomas doesn't hesitate to please Talon as well as Luna...though something tells me he would have less objections to pleasing a certain guard of his. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.
I have to ask to Thomas and Luna get married or something. Or did I miss that in one of the chapters
6822717 EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Jumps around like a crazy fan girl on to much sugar*
That was one sexy chapter.
Does this means more clop in the next chapter?
"Fun bags"? That's a new one. I gotta remember that.
6822822 A certain guard? Why, whatever would give you such impure thoughts?
6822958 Not really, but yes, you did miss that chapter. They're secretly herded.
6822960 Typical Pinkie.
6823101 Probably not, but you can never know for sure. I can, but not you.
6823169 Yes you do.
Yeaaaaaaah ! Some griffon action ! 8D
And poor dearest Thomas ! I hope he will not die in duty ! 8D
Long live to the royal funbags !
I wonder if Talon will finally have a piece of that chimp ? Mwahahahaha !
By the way. She is drunk out of wine ? Poor Talon, tomorow will be a hard day. Red wine is a bitch with hangover. XD
Keep writing Gray-boy ! Each chapter brings me closer to my El Dorado ! 8D
6823867 Hmm. El Dorado? I wonder what'll happen when we get to the Canterlot Wedding? Or maybe I'll just skip ahead to the part where the group get's involved with the Cult of Dio?
6823897 Aaaaaaargh ! Massive nosebleed !
Well, impress me ! 8D
This was fun! Thanks!
This was a awesome read Tohmas had come so far I'm proud of him.
6822717 Well if you're asking, another chapter would be quite enjoyable.
It would have been nice if Thomas and Tali teased the Tidal Temptress more. To have the Tidal Temptress beg for satisfaction. For Thomas to tease and tease, slowly building up her pleasure and desire, while Tali teased the Tidal Temptress' fun bags and ran her talons through her hair and over her cheeks. Maybe even across the lips.
I will say I didn't really care that the scent of arousal would actually rob Thomas' cognitive functions. Maybe it might make him more amenable to having sexytimes, but to completely remove his ability to make conscious, rational decisions? It was more deus-ex-machina than I would have liked.
Another area that would have been nice, is having more description as Luna strip teased the other two. Did she start by showing more shoulder, or did she start by showing more leg. Did she stand up the whole time, or did she lie down? Did her hands run over her body, or trace the junction between cloth and skin?
Another thing that could have been done is for Luna to request that Thomas eat Tali and that it would please her a lot and make her aroused to watch Thomas bring oral pleasure to Tali. He'd have the option to refuse of course, but I could definitely see how doing so might lessen the awkwardness and distant atmosphere/ feeling between Thomas and Tali and help Thomas become more receptive towards fornicating with someone that wasn't Luna, close friend or not.
Peace,
AuthorGenesis
6825456 All good suggestions. I'll keep them in mind for later.
6823304 next question does Luna actually love him or is it because he is in her harem that she acts like she loves him
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
6826371 I'd recommend rereading, as these questions have already been answered.
Forgot to ask, what mistake did Talon wanted to correct after seeing Thomas going to town on Luna's carpet?
6830249 No idea. Wrote this weeks ago and haven't really looked at it since. I'm afraid you'll have to point to exactly what you're referring to.
6830643 it was this paragraph:
Out of the corner of her eye Talon saw what had triggered the alicorn so, and to say that she was shocked would have been a bit understated. It was virtually unheard of for males of any race to engage in oral sex, at least when they were the ones using their mouths on females. There weren’t exactly any rules against it, but it was seen as more of a female’s task and thus was simply not done. And as Talon watched Thomas bury his face into Luna’s marehood, making all manner of agonizingly arousing slurping noises, the griffon made a solemn vow to correct this grievous error… eventually. For now, she had other priorities.
6830701 Ah. That could have been worded better, but the error was that males don't give oral to females.
6831463 That's quite the double standard for guys to have in a bisexual population, isn't it? I mean nearly the entire population is bi, so odds are that stallions go down on each other yet refuse to do the same to females while the gals are willing to give head to partners of both genders.
6831490 It's not really a double standard so much as no one ever put much thought into doing it. Like they say, it's not forbidden, just not something that occurred to them to do.
6822701
Ha ha ha! Bird puns! (I feel Trollestia would make a good Sebben...)
Delightful chapter all around. Our protagonist is seeming far better off these days. Not perfect, but it seems he's getting what he needs. Even if it's by giving Luna what she needs.
Poor sexy moonlight when will she get the chimp meat
6836825 Eventually. When I can work out a way that feels good... pacing wise. Thanks for the favorite though.
6837039 hey no problem mate and if it helps at all I think your doing amazing with the story plus I really can't put my finger on why I love the way you have been potraying moonlight so far so keep the good work
6840152 Let's hope that style can be maintained, then.
6831547 Still a bit confused. By error does Talon plan on stopping Thomas from going down or she plans on getting males to go down?
Did we ever establish how big Thomas' dick was? Seeing as how much bigger luna is than him, unless he's real big, it seems like pleasuring her would be fairly difficult.
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