Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Got to say that I found Moonlight's perverted imagination to be hilarious ad the interview scene was entertaining. Great job with this chapter.
6377681 Awesome. I'm certain those imaginings are just harmless fantasies and won't lead to anything down the road.
You know, I was expecting, considering the setting is a world with multiple sapient races, that a being which has proven able to think, talk and dress wouldn't be labelled as "animal " or "pet ".
Dammit, Thomas, you may not want to embarrass Luna but it wouldn't hurt to stand up once a while. Grow some balls outside the bedroom
I hate when the human protagonist acts like a whimp with the ponies.
6377710 Thomas is still new to the world. This is his first official introduction outside of second hand sources, so the press really doesn't know what to think other than what they've heard in rumors.
Also, in Thomas' defense, not only is he naturally socially awkward, but he's been forced into an alien culture with creatures much larger and more powerful than himself. Wouldn't you be a little intimidated?
Firstly I think Thomas should just man up and tell Luna how he feels
6378364 Except his feelings stem from insecurity. Don't know if you have much experience with that, but it's hard to open up about, even with someone you care about for fear they'll think less of you.
6378388 no I get it but, as inside looking out its easy to say "man up" when in reality you your self cant. But I'm all about keeping Luna for ones self
6378463 Sadly, that's not going to happen. Thomas is a concubine in a harem, meaning the harem's growth is inevitable. Also, kind of a spoiler, but Luna kind of needs a harem for reasons that will be explained later. But if you'd like to help make the transition easier for Thomas, I recommend checking out the description in this chapter.
6378511 man all my hopes and dreams are dead and buried...
6378715 Instead, why not look forward to Thomas getting used to the idea of being in a large harem with other ponies to sleep with.
6378727 I am conflicted. But I'll see how it plays out
Something tells me in my mind that nothing good will come out of this once the interview is out on papers.
6378912 You don't know that. He could just be really excited to have such a juicy story.
I've got to say that so far I've been enjoying this story and the harem makes sense for both regents of celestial bodies having them over just one. With Thomas being the head concubine means he's the go to person so he in the end will spend the most time with Luna. So I'm with that as well. He just needs to man up a little more. As I can still see the bit with Blueblood coming back to bite him later. Which I kind of want to see happen, it would make a good point for Thomas to grow a pair with Blueblood pushing him too far. Just a character development suggestion. It also makes me wonder if Celestia is going to interact with Thomas directly with in a protecting of Luna like manner or something serious. Both I wouldn't mind seeing in this story as well.
Not sure if it fits your wants but a good story I found was The Teacher, the Sorcereres, and the wonderbolt.
6378955 Blueblood will return. Hopefully in a manner readers will appreciate.
6378994 I tried searching, but to no avail. I need a link.
6379043
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/29178/the-teacher-the-sorceress-and-the-wonderbolt
that should work.
6379082 Alright. We shall see.
Sorry, I have no recommandation to suits you.
Anyway, I like that chapter. But I want a big one !
6381334 Personally I prefer these lengths, but I'll see if I can get them closer to the 3000 level.
6381812 Be praised if you do. 8D
Moonlight has a lot of imagination.... I like it.
I must ask. Does Thomas walk on bare feet, or is he using some kind of shoe?
I assume ponies are walking on their hooves, since they don't really need any type of shoes.
6381824 Also, spoiler. I've decided that eventually I'm going to take the characters to pony Egypt. I'm guessing you know what'll happen there.
6381954 This has already been answered in chapter 8.
6382439 Whoops, guest I will have to check that one out XP
This was a awesome read and Thomas is finnly revilde to every poony.
6382435 YES YES YES !! *explode in his pant*
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Does that means that the anthro Jackals that appears in the 24 issue of the MLP comics will make appearance in this story?:
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It also would be interesting that a Jackal become a part of Luna's harem.
6390216 That's enough spoilers for you, mister.
Interesting. Moonlight really needs to just get it on with Thomas.
Moonlight's subconscious is moonlighting?
Thank you, Captain Obvious.
I feel more and more like Luna's actually a Magic card.
"This fascinating animal would like to tell you to go fuck yourself, and would be happy to assist in applying a dictionary to your head if you don't understand.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
Such as reporters.
8117779 Damn. Those were good.
I want to Bitch-slap that reporter >~>... Asshole.
Fuck reporters >_>
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I'd have said journalists, but reporters aren't that great either.