Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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Tali gon tap that
Well done chapter! Monologue for Luna and tia and when Kitty was introduced was excellently paced, or as far as I could tell any way.
All I can say is I'm seriously waiting for the chapter where he strokes the kitty.
6682986 Personally, I'd have been waiting to tap the cat.
6682986 It's a possibility.
Works for me. I know Thomas is going to have to talk about his condition with someone.. If i'm right he's scared of luna rejecting him. A stupid fear we know, but for him luna rejecting him because he is broken somehow. Also I'm kinda impressed that you gave Thoma, Aspergers.. makes me feel good reading this since I also have it.
I also have a question was Tom on any medication before he came to equestria?
6683002 I don't think this qualifies as a monologue, but thanks for the support.
Can't wait for Thomas to finally tap Tali and eventually Moonlight as well.
6683013 Happy to help, but no. Since he's based off my experience, I've never taken any such medication.
6683033 I'm afraid you'll have to.
Lets see how long it takes before Thomas is using the stories he has ready, as well as other imaginings, before he can make Talon exhausted through pleasuring her by mere words.
Of course, before that, he will have to use his fingers to massage her, but Im sure he would stop before she has been pleasured to the point of exhaustive pain.
Then Luna gets him for the rest of the night.
OK, so, "plot" is a fandom term and it's always a little bit of a hit to my immersion when it's used in character dialogue. I don't know if you explained how it came about or not.
There was one story I read where it explained how the term came about in-verse for that story that was rather funny. Can't remember the name of it sadly enough.
Anyways, it was a bit after Luna's banishment and Celestia was touring the various farms and what not. One of the mares on one farm was trying to get something out of a chest and wound up getting stuck with her rump in the air, just as Celestia and her guide come around the corner. Celestia's automatic response before she could really think about it; "Well, that is a fine plot of land." And thus 'plot of land' became slang for pony rump and over the years got shortened to just 'plot'.
I'm curious as to if you've put any thought into how it came about for use in your verse.
"doesn't mean he is any"
Remove one of the 'either's, first or second doesn't really matter. I'd recommend the second though, it reads a bit better in my mind.
What a sorry state of affairs it is that a guy enjoying cunnilingus is odd. Truly the ladies of this land have not trained the males well enough.
Though I guess with a gender difference in favor of females guys can be more picky about whom they engage in intercourse with and can, in general, be of a "my pleasure first" mindset and get away with it.
The whole interaction of Luna and Talon as great, really looking forward to any sort of three-way action that might happen in that harem. Maybe make it a four-way? Hum? Hum? Wink-wink, nudge-nudge say no more?
I'm curious, we know that Celestia and Luna get sexually intimate in dreams, but has it ever been mentioned if they are actually related or not? And do they ever get sexually intimate in the waking world? Probably if both harems are together and they just so happen to wind up near each other in that orgy who's going to blame them? A man can dream... .
I really love this chapter. Celestia and Luna having a sisterly conversation about Thomas was beautifully done, especially with how they teased each other and how Luna gushes about Thomas. Likewise, I'm happy that Talon is going to temporarily join Luna's harem as I'm curious to see how Thomas will please her, especially now that Luna made Talon curious about his skills. BTW, I'm surprised that Talon is the second in command of Celestia's harem, that was an interesting characterization and it shows why she's so comfortable with Celestia and reverent of Sun Dancer. Thanks for the great chapter. I can't wait until the next Minday to see how Thimas will handle the situation.
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hmm.. just wondering because I have clinical depression on top of the Asperger. So I take prozac. .. I guess I was projecting on Thomas and I thought the fact that he may be off his meds would explain his personality.. he has to be on guard and in control. Like I had been when there was time I wasn't taking my medication.
6683331 pity you couldn't remember the name of the story. It sounds interesting if the author came up with something like that for the term plot. in another fic i read the term plot was a more modern slang term. Celestia was caught by the press with an "adult" magazine and when they confronted her about it she told them she only read it for the plot.
anyway another good chapter i am just hoping for some more plot in the next one.
That was such a sweet and funny chapter,It had me LOTF .It's so awesome that Tali is joining Lunasherd for the time being,this is going to be great in helping Thomas learn more and even better in the herd .I can't wait to see how he reacts to this when he finds out what happened.And the parts with Luna and Tia where so funny,cute,and sweet I loved them I hope to see more in the future.
So, Celestia lend Talon to Luna in her harem to help Thomas build his confidence in bed and it looks like Tali is going to be the "first to "rut" both Royal rumps".
AWESOME!!!
I wish the show would show more of the bond between the Two Royal Sisters. Now, Thomas will definitely be learning more about the workings of a harem. It also appears Moonlight may need someone to talk to her as well.
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yay! Another awesome chapter! Keep up the great work!
I'm loving where this is going! I'm totally excited!! Can hardly wait for the next chapter to come out!!! The story is progressing nicely, I want to see what happens so bad that I just might explode!!!! But if I did that then I would not beable to read the next chapter!!!!!
6683117 All in good time, my friend. All in good time.
6683331 No real source. Just going along with the fandom.
Thanks for the catches.
I'm happy that you're happy, but the sisters are indeed biologically related.
6683393 I'm really pleased by how well this chapter has been received. Perhaps I should try more chapters without Thomas.
6683420 Never been on meds, so I have no frame of reference there. However, that does sound a lot like how I am right now. On that note, how well do you think I've been representing Thomas as having aspergers?
6683452 Happy to make others happy.
6683716 I certainly thought so.
6683759 Yes indeed.
You'll just have to wait and see for the rest.
6683963 Truly a philosophical quandary.
I like this chapter. The interplay between Celestia and Luna flows nicely, while still fitting in quite well with how things are going. I can read multiple layers of things being suggested or hinted at along the way as well.
I'm also looking forward to watching Captain Awkward-Needs-His-Pants getting stuck dealing with Talon on a more constant basis, as well as how he'll react to Luna letting another into her bed.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
6684141 *Blows on bubble pipe.* I know right!
6684314 Everyone seems to. It's actually a bit surprising how popular this one turned out.
Some nice sisterly bonding. I was wondering when Talon would become part of the harem.
Still, the human OC is creeping me out a little bit now. He shares my first name, my career, and my personality (I'm very introverted and soft-spoken). It feels weird to see an alternate version of yourself in a harem story. Which is funny, 'cause harem anime are one of my biggest guilty pleasures.
Are you sure we haven't met before, Gray?
I do not know whether its because it has Luna in the story or not, but next to Flammenwerfers My Best Friend Luna, this is most likely my favourite active story. I love all the characters, especially Tali and Moonlight. I wait with bated breath and excitement for the following chapters. Congrats on this fantastic story sir because whenever i see that it has been updated i cannot help but get happy.
6684773 As a soft spoken introvert, myself, I have met few people. So likely not. But if you think it's weird now, just wait until the Canterlot Wedding. That'll be loads of fun.
6684818 Sounds like Luna is indeed a factor. Regardless, much obliged.
That 'argument' was hilarious. And a lil more Tali time for Thomas will certaily be entertaining.
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Can't wait for more wacky hijinks to ensue!
6685353 Always happy to entertain.
(Gives you a thumbs-up)
GREAT! now to just slum through to next Monday
6686862 We all gotta do it.
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Well I'd have to go back an reread through the chapters again but so far you hit the nail on the head including the type of job he had.... "something that kept his hands busy but allowed his mind too wander" which pretty much discribes me at work.
6687248 Lovely.
OH ! MY ! GODS !
I just can't wait for the next chapter !
I can't !
So, I will ask the question that everybody is thinking of without admiting it !
.....Princest ?
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*Slow motion FacePalm*
6689548 ... Maybe.
As much as I like to bitch and complain about how much I want this to be absolutely perfect (because I love the concept so much) I haven't had anything to say, which means you're catering to me or it's just that perfect. I love this story ans what's happening right now. Great work.
Oh, and if thou dost need an hand with the night Princess' elder tongue, I may provide assistance. There seemeth not to be any error within this chapter, but if thou need assistance with the grammatical second person, (the thee-s and thou-s,) send me thine inquiry and I will respond with what haste I might muster as collegiate finals approach.
6694229 Appreciated, but I know what you mean. It always bugs me whenever I have nothing to say other than "I like it" or "I agree".
Thanks for the offer, but like I said, Luna's been cutting down on the old timey talk and it only comes out if she gets excited, which is a convenient excuse for being inconsistent. :D
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I would like to see Thomas directing ponies reenactments of big hits movies/books and anime/tv shows from Thomas's world like Doctor Who, The Walking Dead, Heroes/Heroes reborn, Breaking Bad, Lord of the Ring and Game of Thrones with ponies and griffons acting the role of the shows/movie's characters which will result with them becoming big hits among Equestria to the point that they will get Equestria celebrities to play the roles. For Game of Thrones I can see it becoming big among castle staff to the point that Prince Blueblood would insist that he should play a role in Game of Thrones with him winding-up as the role of Joffrey.
And loans are typically paid back with interest...