Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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this was cool AF. but now I am paranoid AF of the Doctors enemies coming in to say hi.
What a refreshing chapter!
Literally a plot twist.
Doctor Whooves and assistants? Nice touch. I sort of fell off that series. I had no idea it was still going. I might check it out again later. Great chapter. Also, I'm going to drop this here.
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Thank you, and that's certainly a possibility. Then again the Doctor is a little too out-there for this story. So, unless I have a really good idea, don't expect too much more from this character.
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Tell me about it. Slice of life is fun and all, but it's great to change things up now and then.
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That's something I'd like to see, now that I think about it.
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It's still going and still good. Thank you, and thank you.
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Matching Salt And Pepper shakers.
Well, hopefully the rainbow blast fried whatever smooze is still dried up on Derpy's posterior, or we could have issues down the line.
In other news, I'm still holding strong to my headcanon that Thomas is either a reincarnated pony that got eaten by waking night, or is otherwise related to it.
You are welcome for the suggestion Gray.
Also I am not sure how i feel about the whole... calling Thomas a "war-loving human" Who she think she is for thinking that, Celestia from Rated Pony Star's negoationverse?
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Sorry. Originally, I'd planned for Thomas to be a reincarnation, but that got a lot of outrage from the fans, so I scrapped the idea.
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She's just being paranoid about the alien creature that everyone allows to walk around the capital and sleep in a royal's bed.
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Huh. Well, it doesn't really matter, I suppose. Even if he was, what would that change? Nothing I can think of. And I think of a lot of things.
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I guess I'm just trying to see this from the viewpoint of a person human. Perhaps I should also try and view this from hers. But just not possible for me is that to human of me? Also judging the one for the actions of an entire race is not very nice.
Nooooo. No fucking way. Is that Tick-Tock?
Just a heads up, you reached the featured box yesterday for a few hours.
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Awww. You shouldn't let your fans completely change the script like that.
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Yup. I know he wasn't in the real episode, but I wanted to feature him, as it's unlikely that I'll do this crossover again.
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Sweet, thanks for sharing.
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Yeah, couldn't not have him if you've got the other two from Ponies with Pockets.
the whole smooze scene was cartoony and enjoyable. when they first started to talk about unorigional monologuing was expecting somlthing like them counting off numbers while the smooze tried diffenent lines to find a new one. like freeza in dragonball abridged.
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Yeah, this was so much fun to write. Here's hoping I can do this again sometime.
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hope so too.
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You never know. It could be both.
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Sure. Just keep in mind that she's got earth pony strength, so it might sting a tad.
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Eh, I like experimenting with accents even though I kinda suck at them.
"Death by heckling really tickles my jimmies."
You roll as a bard, don't you?
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I don't DND, but I thank you for the compliment.
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Bards have an ability called Scathing Retort. It’s a 1st level ability that does damage but the idea behind it is that the bard is insulting the target so badly that it hurts them mentally.
It’s become something of a meme in the dnd community because a bard can literally kill someone with harsh language.
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Yeah, I get that. Another story I read referenced just how dangerous a bard would be in Equestria.
I'm guessing either Discord or some stuff about him being an Oracle/being a "War Loving Human" gets out to the Nobles/public and they start to go against him.
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It's actually an event from the comics, but good guesses.
I'm surprised that the Smooze didn't make a comment upon seeing Thomas about Megan Williams and the flutter ponies, unless they're not part of the history of the ponies in this setting.
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This Smooze was from Doctor Whooves and Assistant, which had no prior interactions with humans.
"What what what" that it awww !! You didn't put in the 20% cooler museum as well ? That would have been soooo much fun too tease Rainbow dash. Having all he friends and other see the Rainbow dash Museum.
Kind of like this. Maybe [ Thomas ] Hey Rainbow dash before all head home i was wondering if you don't mind if can take us all to the 20 % Cooler Museum? [ Rainbow ] "What?" I don't know a museum like that. "What what" are talking about. [ Thomas ] Ok Fluttershy can tell us wear it's at? ( Fluttershy look at rainbow worried ) i i~ can't sorry. [ Maidenhill ] can you make bonus chapter maybe? In the future??
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Sorry, but there are a lot of memes out there, and many slip through the cracks. That especially goes for those I'm not familiar with.